Those Eyes

by Bambi03

Howdy do. This story is going to be about Max and Fang, full of FAX. Doesn't quite have a plot yet, sorry. Max likes Fang, and Fang likes Max. The catch? Neither of them knows the other likes them. Super-original here. Full of cliché references to Fang's obsidian eyes (and one to Nudge's mocha skin). I'll try to make it as good as I can write. Read for a better summary. :) Bambi

2. Author's Note Sorry :(

So guys.. Really sorry this isn't a chapter. I need some plot ideas to make this interesting. If you have any ideas, PM me or comment. I will try to make it as good as possible, but to do that I need a plot.. ^~^ any idea is a good idea... Ok then.. Bye

Bambi

(P.S. Twisted Pinkie- thanks for the constructive criticism... I guess I need to work on de-feminizing my male characters... And I would do another character pairing, but I just don't like any combo other than FAX. Sorry! :/ But I do appreciate the advice. I will always want to improve my writing. So thank you. :) For my next story, I will try to work on my characters and make them more... themselves, and a little less romantic. My sister liked the story and made me publish it, despite the plotlessness. For this story, you can try to pretend I just happened to have the same character names as James Patterson...? Anyway, thanks :) )