Thank you for all the reviews:) you guys are awesome! Oh and thanks to everyone who gave me an OC. Here's a shout out to my awesome reviewers:

Whisper13: The description of your OC kind of sounds like me, at least the way she acts does :P

Empty Thoughts: That's what I'm going for.

mymortalromances: Thank you:) it's going to get even better as the chapters go on.

haha: I'm really bad at getting enough ideas onto paper to make the chapters longer. Sorry:(

Knight Mistress: I love that name Guinevere, it's really cool

loueylouey14: Of course you liked the disclaimer. Thanks for the OC.

And thanks to all the people who have favorite/alerted me/this story: loueylouey14, Mrs. Grint-Cozart-Felton-Horan, kell young, Empty Thoughts, mymortalromances, and FangSmartz101. You guys are awesome!

I still need some more OC characters so please review with the information that is listed on the previous chapter. This chapter is a bit OOC for Max but she will go back to her original personality soon. Now here's my cousin, Autumn, with the Disclaimer:

Autumn: She doesn't own it.

Max's P.O.V

I don't know how long I've been sitting here, staring at the – my – body. I still couldn't get my head wrapped around the idea; my body is dangling from a rope that is attached to my foot, there were two holes in my back, my blood was slowly drying over my body.

From what I can tell, someone tied me up and stabbed me in the back twice. I can also tell that it didn't happen too long ago because the blood isn't dry yet. My brown hair hangs inches from my face and I have to look away as another wave of dizziness washes over me. Underneath me there was a puddle of dried blood. I was dead, so the blood didn't really faze me.

"Hey."

I jumped up and turned around to look at the voice. It was a guy, a familiar guy. He had black hair that fell into his eyes, which were so dark that they were practically black; he had a smirk on his face which I'm assuming had to do with my reaction to his sudden appearance. Then it hit me; he could see me.

"You can see me?" I asked, a bit excited that I won't have to be here alone.

"Yeah." Well someone's quiet.

"Wait a minute, how can you see me? I mean, I'm dead." Then I thought about it a bit more, "If I'm dead and you can see me, then that must mean that you're dead too?" It came out more as a question than a statement, like I wasn't sure. But hey, I just woke up a few hours ago dead, I'm not sure of anything right now.

"Yes."

"Would you quit answering with one word?"

"Does this annoy you?"

"No dip, Sherlock!"

"Touchy, touchy."

"Just tell me why you're here." I asked the question that's been bugging me for a while.

"I don't know. One minute I'm walking through the forest and the next I hear a scream that exploded my eardrums."

"I could do without the sarcasm." I scowled as he continued to smirk. I think that's the thing I hate about him the most.

"You have no idea who I am, do you?" He asked.

I was about to say no when he smiled, not that smirk he's had on his face so far but a real smile, teeth and all. My eyes zeroed in on his teeth and I started to feel a bit dizzy.

:P/I'm a flashback line break, aren't I awesome/:P

All of a sudden I was in a room full of screaming kids. I had to put my hands over my ears to keep them from falling off. I took a look around; there were finger paintings all over the walls and toys thrown around the room. I spotted black haired boy in the corner, his arms held at least 10 cookies.

Where am I, I thought.

"You're in a memory."

I almost screamed at the sudden appearance of the smirking boy. "Would you quit doing that!"

"Quit doing what? Breathing," There's that smirk again, I just want to smack it of his sexy face an-

Whoa, I thought, I did not just think that.

I decided to ignore his comment, "How the hell am I in a memory? Is that even possible?"

"Language. We are surrounded by little children. Would you really like to be the person to corrupt their innocent minds?" His smirk grew, "And obviously it's possible."

I glared at him but he didn't even flinch. A cry of pain interrupted my glare, so I turned around and saw a little girl with brown hair looking at her hand as if she had never seen one before. I decided to get closer to her and the black haired boy to figure out what they were saying.

"You bit me." The little girl said in monotone little kid voice.

"Well you tried to take one of my cookies!" The little boy said as if it was a serious crime.

"But those are my cookies!" She acted as if it was the end of the world. Those cookies must be really good. "Look at what you did to my hand! It has bite marks on it." She frowned going back to staring at her hand.

"I'm sorry," The boy said sadly, "Here." He held out his hand which had a huge cookie in it.

The girl smiled and took the cookie, eating it in only two bites.

"Thanks. I'm Maxine; what's your name?"

"Nick." He said with his mouth full of cookie.

Maxine frowned, "You don't look like a Nick."

Now it was Nick's turn to frown, "You don't look like a Maxine either."

Maxine thought for a minute then smiled bigger than a kid on Christmas, "I know! I'll call you Fang."

"Why?"

"Because you bit me and it hurt," She said it as if it was the most obvious thing in the world, "And you can call me Max! That's what my friend Monique calls me."

Fang smiled, "Okay," He thought for a moment, "Do you want to be friends?"

Max's smile grew 10 times bigger than before, "Yeah! We could be best friends." Then the two new friends hugged, abandoning perfectly good cookies on the floor.

I turned back to the smirking kid, then looked back at the hugging toddlers, specifically the girl.

"That's me, isn't it?" I whispered softly.

"Unless there's another girl in this town with the same name and personality as you, I would think so."

"I don't even remember this happening."

"You obviously do since this is your memory." He smirked.

I ignored that comment and just stared at him, and then back at the toddlers, then back at him. The realization hit me so hard I swear my jaw hit the floor.

"Fang?"

His smirk was the last thing I saw before everything got fuzzy.

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