OK GUYS IT'S THE


FIRST CHAPTER OF LANEY AND COREY THE REWRITE THING SO HOPE YOU ENJOY IT :D

LANEY AND COREY THE REWRITE STORY:chapter One why


Laney paced back and forth in her room mumbling and is in stress

"What do I do!"she shouted sliding against the wall to the floor"how do I tell the guys-that I'm moving

Tomorrow." Laney look at the clock

11:50 she sigh and got up leaving her bass behind laney didn't even bother to put mascara since yesterday she been crying.

As laney walk to Corey house she kept remember what happen yesterday

(When flash back)

Laney woke up from shouting she sigh knowing its her mother and father arguing again,suddenly she heard a thud sound laney got out her bed fast and walk to the living room seeing bunch of boxes and stuff on the floor

"Mom."laney said getting her mother attention she see her mother eyes watery"what's going on?"

Laney mother walk towards her bending down grabbing both of laney shoulders

"Sweetie I have bad news."laney mother said laney only had a serious expression"you and I are moving."

Laney was confuse by the word 'moving'

"You mean moving houses?"laney suggested Laney mother nodded no" what do you mean?"

"We're leaving Peaceville."laney mother said laney gasp and began to tear up"I'm sorry sweetie I just can stand your stupid fathe-"

"Shut the hell up I can't stand you either!"laney father shouted

Then again her parents start to argue laney ran straight to her room jumping on her bed crying and crying after what seem of hours of crying she stop and grab her bass playing it and singing

"My Life was getting better

Then ever,

But now it's going down hill

Because of fucking bills

Mother and father argue.

I want to go back to the good memory's The good life

Where father love his wife

When everything was perfect

But now my life is shit

I'm going to have a fit

In a bit I will have to pack

And act like I'm happy but

Really I'm dying inside.

Parents divorcing

Moving with my mother

Moving Thousand miles away

Leaving forever

Never coming back

Never again

Again

My Life was getting better

Then ever,

But now it's going down hill

Because of fucking bills

Yeah because of the fucking bills

I think Imma start taking pills

Take the stress away

Because of the fucking bills."

(SONG WAS WRITTEN BY MY COUSIN ANDY)

Laney played the last note before she start crying again.


Laney stood in front of the garage door she stood there trying to figure how would she tell the guys she took a deep breath before walking in

"Laney!"shouted the twins with smiles in their face laney despite how happy they are

"Laney are you alright?"both twins ask

"Where's core?"laney ask kin shrug laney sat down the 'Grojcouch' she sigh"guys-I'm moving."

The twins gasp and ran towards laney

"What!"kin shouted as he sat next to laney"where are you moving?"

"It's more important why."kon said

Laney began to tear up again

"I don't know exactly where but its a thousands miles away from Peaceville."the twins look down sad their only actually friend that's a girl is leaving"and it's because of my stupid Parents getting a fucking stupid divorce!"laney punch the couch kin and kon both hug her

"There there."kon said patting her back"we still could talk on the phon-"

Before kon could finish his sentence Corey walk in with a smile on his face

"Hey guys!"Corey shouted happily but then frown"what's with all the sad faces?"

The three look at him with sadness in their eyes

"C-Core."laney stutter"I'm moving away from Peaceville."Corey stop smiling he just stood there speak less

After a minute he finally spoke

"W-What."Corey stutter"you-you can't lanes!"Corey was now on his knees pleading for laney to stay the four thirteen years olds all cried especially Corey

Laney was his best friend the only person he could trust when he needed advice she was always there for him with her perfect smile and perfect red hair well that's what Corey thought

After they finish crying Corey sniff his nose and hug laney very tightly

"Lanes I'm going to miss you."Corey whisper in laney ear as a tear fell from his eyes"do you have to go."laney nodded yes

As she tighten Corey

"I don't want to leave you core."laney said The twins both cough"oh and the twins too."

The twins slightly smile

"group hug!"kon shouted as the members join in a hug

*SAD VERY SAD TRANSITION*

The twins gave their last goodbyes and hug

"Laney don't forget to call us."kon said

"And don't forget about us either."kin said laney only chuckle

"How could I forget about a boy with a nerdy glasses have no game with girls the best keyboardist in the world who is also the smartest boy in the world."laney said as she look at kin"and how could I forget about the nicest huggable boy and best drummer in the world who weirdly like cheese."the twins hug laney again for the last time before they leave the garage,it was just Laney and Corey

"Welllllll."laney trail off"I guess this is goodb-."Corey had interrupt laney by putting his index finger on laney lip to shut her up laney slightly blush her heart beats again

"It's not goodbye."Corey said"it's see you later."Corey smile along with laney they hug for the last time Corey and laney hold both of each other hands just staring in each other eyes Corey blue eyes twinkle as the same goes for laney green eyes they just stand in silence not those awkward silence but those comfortable decent ones

Each second their faces gets closer they would of kiss if it wasn't for laney phone

Which was ringing laney sigh picking up the phone

"Hello...…I'm at his house.…NO…I'm just saying bye to him…ok fine bye." Laney sigh in frustration

"Sorry core but I got to leave the Witch-I mean my mother."corey chuckle "wants me pack the rest of my things bye core."the two hug for the last time

Laney wave goodbye and walk away Corey only close his garage door a single tear fell to the floor

"Why."Corey said to himself"why."


WELL HOW WAS IT I WILL NEED ALEAST TWO REVIEWS BYE AND EAT BACON