The Sleeping Dog

by Lachrymose Comedian

After months of torment, the students of beacon finally turn against Cardin Winchester when he goes to far. Looking for redemption after falling to the bottom of the food chain, and seeking help from the people he once tormented, Cardin will have to work hard towards proving himself a better person. Even if it kills him. 'My first story, I would love some feedback'

3. Authors note!

Hey guys.

Ill be on a temporary hiatus for the next week or so. I've been running with ideas on where to go with the story, and I hit the metaphorical wall. I also have a few other things outside of Fan Fiction I've been working on.

I wanted your opinions on something as well. I was considering discontinuing this story perhaps all together if I cant figure something out. I do, however, have a similar story I honestly just began to write while I was brain storming.

I think its something that's based off this concept, but better put together and I have an endgame in sight for it.

Here is a simple, bare bones description.

Cardin and CRDL get in trouble.

They have to go on what should have been a relatively easy but tiring mission in forever fall.

Russel reveals that he's tired of being a bully to shock of the rest of CRDL, and is going to request a transfer to be a Team-less, support student .

He and Cardin have a massive, and attention grabbing argument.

Ursa's and beowulfs attack, Maiming or seriously injuring Cardin, and killing (or almost killing depending on where I go. ) Russel.

And this will eventually lead to Cardin wanting to be a different person like Russel did, and trying to find his true identity. Though, this time around, He will still be rough around the edges in comparison to how I have him now.

That's how i plan to start off.

Would you guys give it a shot?