a's note

okay this one is from sernaj and this is her character:

I'd like to have an OC too! So, here I go:
name: Serena
age: 41 (looks like 17)
master: Lokar
looks like: dark blue hair (long to waist), yellow eyes, black dress, white pants, markings on left hand, white, little greyish skin
monster(s): none, she fighst without it
atak(s): shadow ataks (the ones that are in the show), fire, water, earth, wind
family: Lokar (father), Laenna (sister), Ellotoys (mother), Maya (niece)
other informations: when she was 17, master Boadai cursed her, because of that, she heals really long and she will always look like when she was 17, she hates Boadai and other Redakais. She spies at Boadai's monastery, she can change memories of other people, that's why she can spy.

and her summary or what she gave to me so u can get the idea:

By that that she can changes memories, I meant that she can control and manipulate other peoples memories, she can look in in heads, she changed memories of her that the Redakai had, so they don't remember that she was who she was (that she's Lokar's daughter), but they have written about her in a book and forgot about that book too and leaved it in Boaddai's library

my way of writing it: (and im sorry if its a bit crappy I didn't really put much thought into it but im bored and If u don't like it ill write it again)

Maya was looking for a book to read even though she read most of the books in their already. "hmm were can I find a book I haven't read yet." Maya said. After a while of searching Maya found a book titled : Serena the dark warrior. "sounds interesting." maya thought and took the book to her room and began to read it... it was now dark outside and the sun began to fall under the horizon Maya stopped reading the book cause she was finished and began to meditate. when Maya began to have a vision about Serena and boaddai who cursed her to be 17 forever. "what was that?" Maya thought but she was tired and would think about it the next day, now she began to get dressed for bed and fell asleep. after a while a dark figure came into her room and raised her hand near maya's face and began to erase the memory of her reading the book and gave her a nightmare of her joining lokar as lokar instructed her to do to maya and left without anyone knowing she was their.

that morning

maya woke up a bit scared of the dream she had but chose not to think about it cause it would only make things worse. when she got dressed she noticed that she woke up late but luckily for her it was only a few minutes before the boys would wake up and remembered to think about serena. but she would think about it later...now she would go into the forest and go for a walk. while she was walking she sensed kairu and thought it was best that she would go on her own and not tell the boys so they can rest. when Maya was about to collect the kairu a female came out of the bushes and looked like Serena. "who are you?" Maya asked. but the woman didn't answer but challenged Maya to a battle...

platinum harrier!

Maya turned into a giant like bird that looked a lot like an eagle. but Serena didn't turn into a monster...all she did was fire attacks at Maya... when the battle was over Serena was victorious. Maya rose from the ground and asked," who are you?" "none of your business weakling." Serena replied. "wait! is your name Serena?" Maya asked. "yes and I assume your Maya from team stax granddaughter of lokar." Serena replied. "yes how did you know." Maya said. "im lokars daughter." Serena said leaving Maya shocked. " do you know my parents?" maya asked. "I know your mother Laenna but not your father but now that you know you can not speak of this conversation to no one or one of your friends are going to get hurt." serena answered and left... maya was now happy and didn't tell ky boomer or boaddai about the kairu in the forest but serena forgot the kairu so maya took it and returned to the monastery for training...

a's note

okay long but very interesting and its late sorry if its not very good sernaj but ill write it again if yu don't like it. and if some of you are wondering wy im doing this is because if you haven't noticed I write a lot of stories about new warriors. but I enjoy it and that's all that matters good night!