I doubt anyones really paying attention to this story all too much after my uber-long break for some reason that is mostly a combination of laziness, being uninspired and Pokemon X (Gotta Catch 'em all). Well anyway, some constructive criticism would help because I know I'm not the best writer. Well anyway, Chapter 2 Onward!
Link opened his eyes to see a foggy land. It stretched far and mist pooled on the ground.
He sat up, groggy. A woman appeared in front of him shimmering in out of a blurred outline and a defined picture. Blue hair cascaded on her chest and back.
She spoke in soft voice, "Link, time has been severed. You must repair in with the help of the other chosen ones."
She held out a golden sphere with a blue crystal on the end.
"This is the only way to fix it and save all. Take it and awaken."
She thrust the spear into his hand and the woman along with the ethereal land blurred and faded.
Link woke up with the spear clutched to his chest. His knees hurt which was to be expected but they were only bruised now for some reason. Sure it was an extremely ugly bruise, all purple and yellow ,but better than expected.
He took in his surroundings. He was in a cage , dangling precariously by a combination of ropes, vines and rusty chains. A vine snapped and jerked down half a foot (about 15 cm). The cage was hanging in a wooden tower or a giant tree, perhaps like the Great Deku Tree. Purplish monsters with clubs along with an odd variety of stalfos patrolled the platforms along the edge. Water sat far below him.
In a flash of diamonds, a odd man with long white hair and a black sword appeared near him. he reached for his own sword only to find it missing along with his other weapons.
"Looking for this he taunted holding the Master Sword and his bag, "I see you somehow retained a weapon, doesn't since you'll be dead in ten seconds."
He threw his sword and cut the chains, vines and ropes holding him and threw his weapons after him as he plummeted. The cage smashed through a wooden a walkway and the cage slowed enough for him to grab his bag. He pulled out his hookshot and shot a wall. The hook caught on a cluster of vines. He stopped for a second until the cage slammed into him and pushed him back down. He splashed into the water painfully but fatally. The cage sank and he fell unconscious.
So umm please comment? this my first story that is not in a dump so I hope you like it. I wanted the chapter to be longer but I ran out of time. Better than nothing ,right? Thanks for reading!