Here goes anther one...
Next in Poise Lake, Rose notices the robots, so she hides, as other two was thinking what was going on? Yellow was asking around, as red one was looking around, Shadow quilt grab Zoe, run off to hide. Yellow says "You can run, but you can't hide" the red shock his head down as he was disappoint. They look around, as Rose was run next to Shadow, Zoe, as she did, the bush was making noise. Then yellow hear, went to the bush, "Ah..." they was lucking, it the one that Rose was in before. After few hours, yellow sit down, as red one was still looking, Rose was getting inch, in a mint she sonsy. Yellow "blush you" Rose "thank you" in her quite voice, as she, Shadow covers her, as the robots was getting closer. Zoe was getting annoys at them, so she run cross, then screams at them, the robots went over to her, why did you scream? As she was talking to them, they got out; Rose picks up a piece of metal. So Zoe pushes the robots to Rose, she gets ready to hit them, "Play ball!" swings, "It's…Home run" then they laugh, as (I didn't get it).
In the middle of Poise Lake, Sonic was looking around as Tails tilt his head, in his mind. It didn't work, why didn't work? Amy was looking at the cottage, she was thinking, what was going on, in there. They got ground, and then a scream, the same voice, as the walk thought the forest, it was getting darker. Soon they couldn't see any more, Amy say to turn back, as Tails was getting wright behind. Sonic holds Amy in his heads, as Tails fly's off, with the night, it was full moon, foggy. But it wasn't like, normal it was purple pitch of blackness, as the night goes thought, they got to the cottage. With a different plan, as Amy come to the door, it was the Lady, she was tilting the door. As she talk to her, Tails was getting closer to the back door, with Sonic was going thought the top. The Lady, slams the door, quietly goes to the pot, with a pitch of dusk, it went off, with shadows everywhere.
In the base of Egg man, he saw what happen, with Sonic not seen Rose. With the robots, he went off in his machine, to the lake. The yellow robot was looking around in blackness all you can see, red robot was talking to Egg man. Within the forest, there was shadows coming right at them, as yellow was hitting them, says "got yare, home run, the fun" the red was disappoint to him, as they got to Poise Lake. They see Amy with her hammer, as Tails flying around, with Sonic her was kicking butt. Egg man was going cross, he went the back away, with few mints, and the Lady went back to her pot, cast a spell. Egg man was there; watching what she did, as she say the words it was smoking around. As robots was looking around for the girl, he was alone, the Lady was going around her home, as he was trying get close to the pot. The robots find out where they could be. In the forest, Shadow was walking to Poise Lake, as Zoe, Rose was behind him. Soon they got to the lake, saw shadows over the lake. Zoe was wondering what was over there? So did Rose, still back of her mind, that Zoe needs to go home. Shadow was going thought as the water was shallow, as Rose tells Zoe "You better go home" Zoe "No! It's okay, I am with you" as she was hugging her. Shadow call out to them, as they was talking, after that, they walked to the cottage. Rose was corner about the Lady, as Zoe was telling her it well-being fine. Next thing Shadow wasn't there, with dark smoke coming thought. They were lost, but Zoe kept walking so Rose worrying about her. They got to the cottage, without know a gush of wind come thought, Shadow was they, right fount of them. As Sonic, others saw him, "Get them!" the Lady said, so the shadows attacks, with everyone there.
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author note: I am thinking to cancelled this story
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Their are like three left
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