Authors note:
Thanks to all those who reviewed…
Let me share a thing…Last chap mey jo meine dikhaya tha na ki daya ko apne dress se jyada Abhi ka dress pasand hey..wo mein apni character ki hisab se batayi thi..mujhe dukan mey to apne di ka dress sabse kharab lagta hey aur apni sabse achi..per gher ake do ek saath dekh k mujhe di wali dress hi cahiy hoti hey..aur ache occasions mey to mein unki dresses le bhi leti hu..wo bechari meri wali se yeah fir kuch aur leke manag kerti hey…hum dono ka to size bhi lagvag same hey..prob bhi nahi hoti..:p
Now gudiya aapka idea mujhe bahut pasand aya..per mein kuch cheese change karungi usme..basic will be same…aur idea bahut hi complicated hey per likhne mey maza ayega… thank u..per ha thori der lagegi..itne sare characters…upper se Shreya..Tarika… bapre..Shreya mey bahut weak hu mein…
Navvulu mein apki idea par rahi thi tabhie ek idea dimaag mey agaya…wo deserted island wala..acha laga mujhe…u knw na puja is cmng..puja ki bad likhungii will pm u about my idea..I may need ur help…meri yeah wali stry bhi to Abhirikafan ke help se pura hua…I always need help…
Khushi us OS ki sequl kuch dimaag mey hi nahi hey…srry dear..aur shriya aur Abhijeet pey kya likhu?blank…give an OS idea
Riddhi, sunaina I'm sure min Purvi pey likhung to aap logo ko pasand nahi ayega...uski wo bubbly character mujse portray nahi hoga…I cnt writ pure girly things...thora rough and tough ho jayega…I think katiiy will be best for this…hope katiiy u don't mind…so u all better think aur ha mere stry mey Daya ayega hi aur fir Purvi automatically sidelined…so wat I can do s write a OS on Abhi Purvi …I may not be according to ur wish…
Shrestha… this chap no Abhirika moments...not even dayareya… srry
R and r ur idea is brilliant no doubt..per idea py sochn baithu to mri di ki likhi hui jindegi se ka khayal araha hey..It is more or less same track so can u give something else…I really like ur ideas….
Story:
On the day of marriage Daya was getting ready and was struggling with his turban... Abhijeet was sitting on the sofa present there and was looking at him with smile on his lips…
Daya looked at his smiling face through the mirror and iratetly called "Abhi.."
Abhijeet got up and said "baith…ker deta hu.."
Daya sat down Abhijeet was setting his turban with "tujhe ek baat bolu?"
"kya?"
"teri na double promotion hone wali hey…"
"double promotion?"
"ha aj pati ke post mey aur kuch mahine bad chachu ke post pey"
"ooo…" Daya nodded then looked up with "chachu?" he stood up rather jumped making the turban fall down from Abhijeet's hand..
Abhijeet tried to picked it up but Daya didn't give him a chance and hold him by his arms with "matlab tum papa banne wale ho?"
Abhijeet nodded smiling…
Daya jerked his head with "bhabi ma banne wali hey?"
Abhijeet tried to show himself serious "matlab the shaq hy ki mein kisi aur.."
Daya shook his head with "wo baat nahi choro…I'm super happy..bhabi..ha bhabi kaha hey…"
And he rushed out to Tarika…
Abhijeet shook his head with "bacha hey.."
He picked up the turban and followed him…
Daya found Tarika arranging sagun's mthai..
He nearly jumped to Tarika with "bhabi thank you."
Tarika turned and stopped him showing her hand with "kya hua?aise uchal kiu rahe ho?"
"thank you thank you…" Daya was swinging Tarika holding her arms..
And stopped with "mujhe apne chachu banah diya..u r great"
Tarika looked at Abhijeet with "tum bhi na..koi baat nai pachti kya tumhare pet mey.."
Before Abhijeet can react Daya said "bhabi yeah baat pachane ki thori hi hy..pata hy mein kitna khush hu..kitna maja ayega..aj to aap jo mangoge de dunga..bolo.."
Tarika who was suppressing her laughter blast managed with "filhal apni shadi mey concentrate karo…jao..pura tayar ho jao..hume nikalna hey..jao bhi.."
Daya made a face and left after snatching the turban from Abhijeet
Abhijeet shook his head with "lo muh ful gaya.."
Tarika knocked on his shoulder with "aap bhi kripa kerke tayar ho jaiye…aur ha woha jake yeah baa sab ko bolte mat firna.."
"per Tarika ACP sir aur doctor saab to.."
"wo dono bhi iske jaise uchalne lagenge…kal jab sab gher ayenge rasui pujan ke liye tab batayenge na..please.."
Abhijeet nodded and moved…
They all reached the place of marriage and the event started..
Abhijeet had already warned "Daya Shreya ko abhie kuch nahi batana thik?"
Daya had agreed but…
After the pandit jee called and Shreya came and sit beside Daya with a full calm shy and quite dulhan avatar Daya felt an urge to share the news..
Here Adi and Abhijeet are discussing as "Abhijeet Daya ager mandap mey hi Shreya se ugal dey to mushkil ho jayega.."
"arey mana to kiya tha..per iski ache dekh k to lag raha hey garbar karega.."
Diya nudged Tarika "Shreya aise dulhan bani kitni sunder lag rahi hey na?"
"ha..yeah ek din har larki bahut alag lagti hey..shant si…pari si.."
Here Daya silently nudged Shreya with his elbow.. Shreya gave him a shy romantic smile but Daya blurted out "Abhi papa banne wala hey.."
Shreya opened her mouth shaping in an o..
Daya repeated "bhabi ma banni wali hey.."
Shreya nearly shouted "kya sach?kab pata chala?"
Pandit je stopped his chanting and looked at the pair.. all the guests are looking at the dulhan ACP sir and shreya's parents exchanged glances..
Tarika sighed with "hey bhagwan yeah larka.."
Abhijeet murmured "abhie batana tha ise..aab Tarika kha jayegi mujhe.."
Adi smiled "biwi ko dekhte hi baat nikel ayi..kaafi bafadar pati banega tumhara bhai.."
Abhijeet glared..then gave an fiery glance to Daya
Diya bent down and nudged Shreya "uhun.."
Shreya bit her tongue and looked down.. Diya gave a fake smile to all and signaled pandit jee to continue
Pandit jee continued Shreya also continued her murmur "pata kab chala?"
"unhe kal..mujhe aj.." Daya whispered back
"wow..kuch socha hey…matlab beta yah beti..beti hogi to acha rehega na..per nahi beti to bar hoke chali jati hey..beta ha beta hi thik..waise naam kya hoga kuch socha..mein bolu..mujhe to bahut se naam sujh rahi hey…"
Daya at this point looked around…
Tarika in a strict voice "Shreya bilkul chup…"
Shreya now seriously looked down.. Daya murmured "waise tum itni jaldi naam tak pahuch gaye…abhie to kisi ko pata bhi.."
But just then Daya felt a slap over his head and he also concentrated on marriage…
After all the rituals are over the newly married couples were taking blessings from elders both bent in front of shreya's father...
S.F hold Daya's hand with "beta meri beti se ager kuch galti.."
Daya pressed his hand..
While Shreya was standing beside her mother "beta tu khush to hey na?"
Shreya nodded Daya turned and bent before shreya's mother..and was about to bent to Shreya as she was standing in the row..
A shriek came out from shreya's mouth and a loud laughter filled the hall..
Adi pinched "bah bhai..humari training to bari kaam agayi.."
Daya with embarresment said in a defensive tone "wo iss line mey..sab bare ke bich to mein…wo,…"
Shreya's father interrupted "arey kya aap sab..bechara nervous hey..ho jata hey.."
After some moments the laughter sounds vanished and the couple move to ACP sir and Salunkhe sir.
Then Daya moved to Abhijeet and was about to bent when Abhijeet hold with "arey kya ker raha hy?"
"kiu? Baki waqt to chot bhai kehete ho aab ashirbad lene ka haq nahi doge?"
"per…"
"problem hey.."
Abhijeet shook his head and Daya bent to him
Abhijeet hugged him with "pagal kahika.."
Tarika decided to interrupt and so placed a hand over Daya's shoulder with "chalo aab.."
And so the bidayi continued…
That night gave a new meaning to the newly married couple's life and they lost themselves in each other…
Next morning Shreya woke up early as she has the rasui pujan and some other rituals to perform..she freed herself from Daya's grip and after giving a soft kiss over his forehead was about to move to freshen up…when two strong arms gripeed her tightly and gave her the tightest hug..she removed the hands with "itne me hi jag gaye?"
Daya nodded and turned to other side and slept more comfortably Shreya moved to washroom.
After coming back from washroom she got ready I front of the mirror and then tried to woke her husband up
"Daya uthiye.."
"sone do.." and he turned to other side and slept
"aj team ane wali hey..7baj gaye..sab ajayenge..aap uthiye bhi.."
No response…
"aap ko bahar ana bhi hey yeah nahi.."
Still no response…
Someone knocked on the door
Shreya opened it and found Tarika with two cups of tea.. "arey tum to tayar bhi ho gay…acha lo chai pilo fir bahar ajao..tem aur uncle auntie pahucti hi hogi.."
Shreya said "arey tum kiu le ayi mein ajati na…tumhe aab aram kerna cahiye.."
"ha ha bas aj mein ker rahi hu..fir mein pura aram karungi aur tum kam krna..thik..?"
Shreya nodded "lo aab chaye lo..aur Daya ko utha dena.."
"wo itni jaldi uthte hey?"
"nahi..per aj uthna hoga na.."
Shreya took her cu and came out of the room completely..Tarika also followed.. they both settled n sofa and found Abhijeet reading newspaper there..
"good morning sir.."
Abhijeet looked up from the newspaper and looked around..
Tarika asked "kya hua?"
"nahi yeah sir kaun hey bhai..mujhe to laga tha aab hum jaith ban gay hey to hume aapki devrani bhayiya bulayegi..per sir..hajam nahi hua.."
Shreya smiled shyly n Tarika gave Shreya a naughty glance with "aab to tumhe mujhe bhi didi bulana parega…jethani jo hu.."
Shreya nodded… Abhijeet looked at the direction of dayareya's room with "janab ki neend puri nahi hui?"
Shreya said "uhun..bulaya to iss taraf se uss taraf mur ke fir se…"
Abhijeet sighed with "uncle ka phone aya tha wo pahucte hi honge…ake damad ko kharate marte dekh acha to lagega nahi.. .."
But was cut with "aap hi to roj uthate hey na bhaiya..aap hi kijiye..itni tough mission mujse nahi hoga..(and turned to Tarika with ) didi aj kya kya banana hoga?"
Abhijeet was hesitating a bit so Shreya repeated "fir mummy papa aur ACP sir ake kharate hi sunenge…"
Abhijeet shook his head smiling and moved in…
Tarika and Shreya continued with the menu..
A new day started with new relations but some old relations are never wiped out…a new beautiful morning with a new smile but let the remains of yesterday's laughter be there….
A/n: guys pls review…
This ends the story here thank you to al read and reviewed…