Hey-o. Don't have too much inspiration but I'm still going! Read who's POV it is... since there is quite a few. R&R please! I just want to say thank you to the few friends who have given me ideas, advice and comments! Hopefully you know who you are... but I just want to say thanks!
Now read on my fellow Maximum Riders!-Weird but I've always wanted to say that. Don't tell anyone! ;)
-LanieBaLanie
Max POV
"Whoa look at the new student!" And then the sexiest pig wolf whistled. This has been happening all day!
Currently Ella, Nudge, Iggy and Gazzy were walking in front of us, while Fang and I were walking a little behind.
Now we are walking up to the sexiest pig because I don't like comments like that. "Excuse me sexiest pig?" He stood there kind of shocked. "You don't want a piece of this." I growled. Then I walked away with Fang following.
"Wow anger issues much?" Fang asked with a smirk.
I just looked back and said "Let's go eat." And picked up pace.
Fang POV
We walked into the cafeteria and got our food then went back outside to one of the wooden picnic tables where our friends are. And guess who just came up to me? If you guessed Lissa then your right!
"Hi Fangy! Why are you hanging out with this?" She gestured at Max who was now walking to where our friends were and waving.
"You should come sit with me and my friends!" She said while batting her eyelashes, throwing her hair over her shoulder and then grabbing my arm.
When I went to see if my friends were going to help me I saw Gazzy, Iggy, Neil and Max dying with laughter. I made eye contact with her and she mouthed 'Sorry to funny' but her eyes said 'I never want this to end.' Aren't they just the best? Yeah that was sarcasm.
Then she tightened her grip on my arm, digging her claws -she calls a manicure- into my arm."So how about it Fangy-poo?"
"No." And I got my arm out of her grip and just walked away. She huffed and went back to her table.
"So," Max put on a straight face "when was I going to meet your girlfriend?" Then everyone burst out laughing while I stood there completely mortified.
"She is not my girlfriend!" I said but they just kept on laughing.
So I did what any person would do.
Iggy POV
I was laughing so hard that I thought my sides were going to burst! Then Fang came up to me and slapped me! ME! His best friend since EVER! I stopped laughing instantly and held my cheek. Then he slapped Gazzy, he went over to Neil but he put his hands up in surrender.
Fang said "Anyone else?" But Max, Ella and Nudge just kept laughing. He let them... still angry though. So he won't hit them but he'd hit the friends he's had since like BIRTH? How rude.
I noticed Ella looked so beautiful when she laughed. I watched her until her sister leaned in and said "Stop embarrassing yourself and clean up the drool." She said while wiping her hand at her chin as an example.
I bet I blushed as red as a tomato... but luckily Ella and Nudge were busy laughing so they didn't hear. Everyone else did though. Crap. And when I wiped my chin there actually was drool there to make things worse.
Once they stopped laughing at me Ella and Nudge asked what we were laughing about.
"Well," While she started speaking I started making my get away but she grabbed my wrist, "nothing really worth mentioning right Iggy?" I nodded.
-After school-
We decided to go to Fang and Nudge's house for a sleepover tonight since it was Friday-after we asked our parents of course. So Ella and I were talking about her classes and how they were. Fang was talking to his sister Nudge while I watched Gazzy sleeping with his eyes open leaning against the locker beside Fang. That's my brother Gazzy for ya! Neil had agreed to go hang out with his other friends so he couldn't come.
Then Max told us one sec 'cause she needed to put her books in her locker. I followed her to her locker. "So why didn't you tell your sister I like her?"
She thought over it for a minute tapping her fingers to her chin. "Well you see I have three reasons. One, your one of my new best friends, Two, She will figure it out eventually..." She patted my shoulder "so be ready when she does, Three I'm a protective sister just to warn you now."
By now we were at our friends and Max went over to Ella and Nudge.
After she said that I gulped audibly.
"What was that about?" Gazzy asked.
"I'm guessing the 'don't mess with my sister' chat." Fang said.
I nodded and Gazzy laughed, even Fang chuckled. Glad they find that so amusing... I don't.
Fang POV
We got to my house after a walk to Ella and Max's then Gazzy and Iggy's to get they're bathing suits-good thing they live across the street from eachother. "Nice house." Max and Ella say together trying to contain they're smiles. Even though they aren't twins I found out that they talk at the same time a lot.
"Yeah I like that it's white even though everyone says that we should have it black because well this isn't like Fang at all... but if you want to see un-Fang like things his bedroom walls are a creamy color! Isn't it hilarious! Iggy can never stop laughing about it and every time I go into his bedroom to say 'It's time for dinner' or 'TURN DOWN YOUR FREAKING MUSIC' I have to remind myself that it is Fang's room 'cause I still get a little shocked myself. Our house looks big but there's only two floors and tha-"
Gazzy put his hand over her mouth "Your welcome!" he said.
"EWW!" He screamed while he pulled away his hand.
"She licked me!" he said as we got into my house. He looked completely mortified.
Then he ran into the kitchen to go wash his hands. "I should be the one washing my tongue for licking you Gazzy!" She screamed.
"I'm going to go get some water." She said as she walked into the kitchen where Gazzy was.
"Fang your home!" Angel my little sister ran over to me and I bent down in time to hug her so she didn't just smash into me. Angel is six-no wait she turned seven awhile ago- with curly blonde hair and blue eyes. She sort of looks like Gazzy-even though they don't share any family whatsoever-since he has blonde hair and blue eyes two.
"Hey Angel how was Grade one today?" I say as I kiss her on the cheek. She giggles and I smile. Yeah that's my soft spot... my little sis.
"It was fun I convinced our teacher to let us play on the big kid play ground instead of the little kid's one! Then me and two other girl's I'm friends with played Swan Lake and we flew all over the campus!" (If you didn't know this is actually from one of JP's books! Except instead of telling her teacher to go to the other playground she mind controlled her! Then she played Swan Lake with her new friends. (: )
"Glad to hear that!" She has such a big imagination! I hope she never changes. "Who are they?" Angel asks pointing to Ella and Max who were watching us as I put her down.
I was about to answer when Ella did. "Hi sweetie I'm Ella! It's really nice to meet you and I hope we beco-" She was cut off by Nudge.
"Ella and Max where are your bathing suits.?"
"In our back packs why?!" Ella answered.
"YAY! I want to see them!" Nudge screamed.
"Max won't show you but I will... so I'll be right there."
"Mmkay!" Nudge said. Ella grabbed her bag and rushed upstairs pausing for a second looking at how big the place was. I inwardly grinned to myself because she looked like a child on Christmas morning.
"Hi there Angel I love your blonde curls-and well everything your just so cute!"
She then showed a side of her I've never seen... complete and utter softness/sweetness. Her eyes are soft around Angel and her smiles are the brightest and I just want to smile with her. Whoa where did that come from. Pretend I never said that okay? Okay good.
Angel jumped up and Max caught her in her arms. "What are you doing munchkin?" She said while tickling her.
"Hugging you! You're really pretty Max!" she said.
Max blushed and said "No not really... thank you anyways." She said as her smile came back to her face.
And at that moment I wanted to tell her that she's gorgeous and tuck a stray strand of hair behind her hair. But I didn't-thankfully because I kind of want to live!
She put Angel down and I watched as I leaned against the wall. Then Max sat beside her as they started watching SpongeBob. Angel poked Max in her side. I thought Max was going to kill her for touching her. But she just smiled and said "Now it's on!" Then she started tickling her and Angel was laughing so hard she was crying.
"Uncle?" Max asked
"Never!" Angel said then Max tickled her even more and she caved
"UNCLE MAX! UNCLE!" she then stopped and Nudge called her.
"Time to swim Max!"
"Ugh!" she said looking up at our ceiling. "Why me?"
"Hurry I want to see if I approve!" Nudge called from her bedroom.
She dropped on to her knees and held her arms up "WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS!" She screamed.
"Stop complaining Max it will end in less than," Iggy looked at his watch then at Gazzy who now entered the room "about two hours."
"When I get downstairs You. Two. Will. Explain." she pointed a finger at them both. They gulped audibly and nodded.
"Glad you got the message. Now Angel sweetie let's go get our bathing suits on." She said. It's amazing how at the beginning of the sentence she was growling and then when she spoke to my sister she just smiled and talked the sweetest most softest voice. She grabbed her hand and Max's bag and walked up there, I think I heard Max... gulp? Who know's.
We walked out to our backyard. Waiting for the girls. Seriously how long does it take them to get Max ready? They are girls what am I thinking. But Max isn't the one to look pretty for a swimming pool.
That's when it clicked.
The makeover has started.
First her clothes then makeup. I prayed they didn't change her too much. She already get's ENOUGH wolf whistles as it is! I didn't say that. It's not like I give a crap.
They laughed from the spare bedroom and she screamed "NO! NOOOOOOOOO!"
This is when the sleepover fun really started.
Hope you like it!
For the people helping me I appreciate... cause I know that my story REALLY sucks. But with the peoples help I think it's gotten slightly better.
But nice or constructive criticism would be appreciated!
Thanks, LanieBaLanie :)