What if Tris was from Dauntless and transferred into Abnegation? All of this belongs to Veronica Roth.

Sorry it's been so long since my last update. Please let me know what you guys think.

"Beatrice and Tobias Get out of bed Get Dressed and get down stairs." With that she turned and closed the door and went down stairs.

I'm terrified to go down stairs but we have too. I take a deep breath and get out of bed and I'm still fully dressed, I never got ready for bed last night. I go to fix my hair and I see Tobias standing there shirtless. I see his chest and it is nothing less than perfection. Then his eyes meet mine and I realize that I'm staring. I turn quickly to the mirror to fix my hair. He comes up behind me still shirtless and slides his hands around my waist and rests his chin on my shoulder and whispers in my ear.

"Tris my shirt is still down stairs."

I'm not breathing it feels so amazing to have his arms around me and to feel his breath on my neck. Then I remember my mother is down stairs waiting for us.

"Tobias I'll grab your shirt and bring it up stairs."As I say this I turn to face him and he stands up straight and I stand on my tip toes and give him a gentle kiss on the lips. Then I turn back to finish my hair.

I finish with my hair and I open my door to go down stairs and his shirt is folded on the floor. I pick it up and walk over to him. He puts it on and we walk down stairs hand in hand.

I see my mother standing by the couch with her hands folded across her body. Her eyes have dark rings around them like she hasn't slept in days.

"Beatrice I don't want to know what is going on between you two tonight."

"Mom-" She cuts me off.

"Beatrice it doesn't matter, we don't have time for this right now. Erudite is working with Dauntless to attack Abnegation. Your father and I came to save as many Abnegation as we can. Everyone in Dauntless except for your father and I was injected with a serum that will give Erudite control of all Dauntless soldiers. We have to get to the warehouse now. That's where your father is with the others. The Dauntless soldiers haven't arrived yet but they will be here soon. Here is a gun Beatrice do you remember how to use it?"

"Yes I remember."

With that we quietly leave my house it's still dark outside and quickly move to the warehouse. In the distance we begin to here gun shots. We break out into a run with my mother in front. As we turn a corner we run directly into Max and Eric.

There were 5 Dauntless leaders including my mother and father. Max and Eric are 2 of the 3 Dauntless leaders that are traitors. I've always hated Eric, he always looked at me like I was a piece of meat or like he was undressing me. Mother and I aim our guns at them, but they are not alone there are three other Dauntless members with them with their guns pointed at us.

Eric speaks first with his snake like voice. "Well, Well, Well look at what we have here Max. Natalie we have been searching for you and Andrew for the past few days. We've been worried."

My Mother keeps her gun pointed at him and then speaks. "Eric, Max we don't want any trouble we are just going to continue walking like we never ran into you, ok?"

Eric and Max let out a short laugh and then Max speaks. "We can't let you go Natalie."

This conversation is moving too slowly we need to run. I need to do something. I look at my mother's eyes and I can see she agrees. I look at Tobias and he looks ready for a fight.

I take a deep breath and shoot Eric in the leg. I was happy to shoot him in the leg. Everything happened quickly after that we broke out into a sprint towards the alleyway. There were a lot of gun shots and we ran for a good while, I stopped to see if they were still behind us and then I saw the most awful thing a child could see. My mother was right behind us, but then I saw her black shirt begin to look wet. Then she looked at me with pain her eyes and said "RUN!" Tobias saw what I was looking at and begin to pull me towards another alley, but I broke free of his grasp and ran towards my mother who was now on the ground. I could see in the distance the dauntless troops that were running towards us but I didn't care I need to go to my mother.

I got to my mom and there was blood all over the ground and she looked like she was struggling to breath. Tobias caught up to me and put his hand on my shoulder. I couldn't look at him; all I could think about was my mom. "Mom come on we'll help you up." Tobias and I grab her and she screamed in pain, I realize she has been shot at least three times.

My mother grabs Tobias and my hands and begins to speak quickly. "Beatrice I love you, you have made good choices in life you have always been so selfless, but right now I need you to be brave. I need you to keep yourself safe. Tobias I need you to take care of my daughter. Promise me the both of you that you Beatrice you will be brave and you Tobias you will take care of my daughter."

We both speak in unison. "I promise"

She sit up and she has tears in her eyes and then says "Ok then Beatrice be brave and leave me," she looks at Tobias then releases my hand and puts it in Tobias' hand and says. "Tobias the soldiers will be here any minute you need to get Beatrice out of here."

Bullets fly by my head and tears fill my eyes I can't leave my mom. Tobias grabs hand and says we need to go but I don't move. Then I feel a pain in my upper shoulder. My mother begins to fire on the dauntless soldiers coming towards us. Then I snap out of it I raise my gun and fire back while Tobias pulls me towards the alleyways. I can't see the dauntless soldiers now. We have been running for a long time and the sun is beginning to rise. I think that we might make it to the warehouse when we run directly into a group of 10 dauntless soldiers. They remove my gun and take us to Eric, Max, and Jeanine Matthews.

As they walk us to Eric, Max and Jeanine we see countless Abnegation members being pulled from their homes by dauntless soldiers. All I can think is we need to stop this. I look at Tobias and he looks strong and unafraid. During the walk I realize that I have been shot in the shoulder. I'm bleeding but not too bad.

We arrive at an Abnegation house and the three of them are talking when the soldiers bring us in. I see Eric sitting down in a chair with a bandage around his leg. His eyes meet mine and I smile at him. He lunges at me and I don't move. Before he can reach me he falls to the floor, because he put too much weight on his injured leg. Tobias and I let out a laugh as he is screaming in pain grabbing his leg.

As Eric is on the floor and holding his leg he begins cursing at me "LITTLE GIRL YOU DON'T KNOW WHO YOU'RE MESSING WITH I'M GOING TO KILL YOU SLOWLY I'M GOING-

Jeanine sees all this and yells "ENOUGH! ERIC shut up you're not doing anything to anyone on the floor like that. Now get up off the floor and shut up." Then Jeanine turns her attention to Tobias and I. "Hello Beatrice and Tobias I'm so excited to meet you." She smiles as she says this.

All I can think is what does she want with us. I speak slowly "Hello."

And then Tobias speaks. " Hello Jeanine Matthews."

How does Tobias know who she is?

Jeanine Matthews speaks quickly. "Good Tobias you know who I am, you'll be useful to me. Beatrice I'm Jeanine Matthews the leader of Erudite and I've been looking for the both of you. I have a strong suspicion that you both are divergent. Beatrice it is unfortunately that you're injured." As she says this she grabs my left shoulder and digs her finger into my bullet wound. I try not to scream out in pain but I can't help it. I do mange to bring my right hand back in a fist and punch her in the eye. With that she releases my shoulder and let out a scream as she grabs her eye. I let out a laugh and then one soldier hits me in the stomach with the butt of his gun. I have a hard time catching my breath. Tobias lunges at the soldier that hit me. He has him on the ground and he is on top of him hitting him over and over again. Then all guns in the room are pointed at Tobias. Jeanine speaks "Tobias think about what you're doing." She pulls out a gun and points it at me. Tobias looks at her and gets up off the dauntless soldier. "Ok than, like I was saying. Beatrice since you're injured you will not be of any use to me." She looks at a dauntless soldier. "You handcuff Tobias and control him." A soldier walks up to Tobias and places his hands behind him and cuffs him. She looks at another soldier "You take Beatrice out back and kill her." Rage enters Tobias face as he tries to fight free. Then they knock him out.

The young soldier drags me outside; he is tall and has blond hair. I can tell he is under the simulation due to the dead look in his eyes. He has one hand on my left arm; I will not be taken out back and killed like an animal. I need to be brave. I pull my left arm free and elbow him in the face. He falls down and he goes to get back up and I grab his gun. He grabs his pistol and begins to turn the safety off and loads a round into the chamber and points it at me and then I shot him in the head.

A dauntless soldier runs up behind me and blindsides me. I thought that he was trying to tackle me but then I realize he is hugging me. I look and I see a familiar face that I've seen a thousand times, Its Zeek.

Zeek speaks " Tris you killed Will. We have to run."

"The warehouse, we have to go to the warehouse." I say out of breath.