Me - Hey, eveyone!! This is Hypnotizing Eyes (Version 2.0)!! Because I didn't really like the way my first one came out I re-did it and I like this one a lot more. So here it is! Rated M for Swearing, Fighting (that includes blood, gore, yatta, yatta, yatta), and there might be a lemon later. I own the Oc's and plot but NOT Naruto (This includes the Akatsuki and stuff). Anyway hope ya Enjoy!!
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Twitch
"What"
Twitch
"The"
Twitch
"Hell!?!?"
"Sorry?"
"You got to be kidding me!! $25.85 for a set of 10 kunai?!?"
"Um…Yes?"
"There not even good ones! It would be one thing if they sought out the target or something but there just kunai!"
"I'm sorry Miss I don-"
"Let me tell ya something boy! I've seen a lot of stupid things-"
"Is there a problem?"
"Yes! $25.85 for a set of 10 kunai is unbelievable and I won't pay unless the price goes down!"
"I'm sorry Miss, I can't lower the price. You can pay it or we'll have to-"
"Have to what? Throw me out?"
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"Damn shop keepers and there must pay the price, prices."
A tall young woman (around 5'8 give or take a few inches) walked down a dirt street with her arms crossed over her chest and her head slightly bowed. Now, one would normally take one look at this woman and find her very odd. With a long black cloak trailing down to her ankles and the hood up covering her face except her mouth and chin, long light almost neon blue hair with the occasional silver stripe could be seen coming out from under the hood and ending near her knees. The cloaks sleeves covered her arms and ended near her fingers almost covering them. Because the cloak was open one would be able to see she was wearing white shorts that ending a little lower then mid-thigh. Several black, silver, and white belts (each a different size) hung slanted and crisscrossing over her hips. On her torso was a faded black (almost gray) tube top cut off showing an out line of a four-pack on her smooth (and dirty) tummy.
"Fucking hate shop keeps. Where's the challenge when ya need it?" Muttered the young woman passing by a couple drunks standing in front of an old bar.
"Hey pretty!" One yelled out to her as she walked by (still muttering).
When the woman didn't respond the man and his fellow drunks followed her, and although they were drunk they seemed to be able to walk in a straight line….Well the first man did anyway.
"Didn't you hear me little missy?"
The women stiffened.
"Young girls shouldn't be walking around alone, you hear?"
The woman had now stopped and the drunken man had walked up behind her and gripped her shoulder with a sweaty, slightly pudgy hand.
"Ya best take your 'and off me boy." Said the woman with a calm, albeit cold voice.
The man chuckled.
"You talk funny girl. I wonder if scream funny to." He said leaning in her mouth almost touching her ear.
"What the-!?!" Yelled the man as he found him self flying through the air and into a old burnt building at least 10-15 feet away. Before he landed he found himself hanging by his neck, which was held by the same woman he had been 'talking' to not a moment before. As his feet hung in the air and his face turned an odd shade of red the woman said
"I told ya boy, didn't I?"
"I- I was-"
"What? Just kidden?" Asked the woman with her head tilting to the side like a confused dog would do.
"I think not. I was alreadys in a bad mode. Todays just not your day. Huh boy?"
The man flew back through the old wall and onto the dirty ground of an ally behind it.
"Wh- Who are you?" He asked staring at the woman with wide eyes as her foot resting on his sweaty, dirty chest.
"Me?" She let out a low chuckle "I'm just the demon from your dreams…boy."
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Ok people! That was the first chapter of Hypnotizing Eyes (Version 2.0) I hope ya liked it. Oh by the way...
'and - means Hand.
And I didn't miss spell The Woman talks like that, so don't worrie, kay?