This is a story about Jacob and Renesmee's relationship. Renesmee loves Jacob but she is in a relationship with another vampire named Rafael. Caused by Edward (Her Dad.) She doesn't know who to choose. Jacob or Rafael?
I felt very happy today. The spring breeze against my skin and the fresh air blowing in the wind. I felt calm with my best friend Jacob talking and comforting me.
Renesmee: Isn't it a peaceful day Jacob?
Jacob: Yes very calm.
Renesmee: Lets go to the creek and throw stones in the river.
Jacob: Now you're talking my language.
When they were at the creek.
Jacob: My stone went farther than yours! I still got it.
Renesmee: Aww. I'll give it another try.
Jacob: Nessie? Can I ask you a question?
Renesmee: Sure Jake.
Jacob: What would you say if we took are relationship to the next level. Like boyfriend and girlfriend?
Renesmee: Oh… Jake… Umm… I…
Edward: There you are! I've been looking for you! Oh hi dog.
Renesmee: Dad be nice!
Edward: We have to go. Your mother and I have been looking for you.
Renesmee: Okay I'll catch up in a minute.
I heard my father's sweet voice calling my name. Before I left I turned to Jacob and kissed his cheek and turned away.
Renesmee: See ya tomorrow.
Jacob: Bye…
At the cottage.
Edward: Found her.
Bella: Oh hey sweetie. How was your day?
Renesmee: It was fine.
I was still thinking about Jake's offer. I wondered if I should accept it or not. My father looked over at me reading my face and asked me,
Edward: What's on your mind?
Renesmee: Nothing.
Edward: Do I have to read your mind again?
Bella: Edward let her be.
Edward: No I want to find out what's she is thinking.
Renesmee: Okay fine. You know my friend Jacob right?
Bella: Yes were very fond of him right honey?
Edward: Yea. Yea sure.
I heard him drink down water and I continued and ignored his comment.
Renesmee: Well he wants me to be his girlfriend.
Edward: (Phhhhh!!!!!) What?
I heard him spit his water out and I told him again.
Renesmee: He wants me to be his girlfriend Dad!
Edward: That's what I thought you said.
Bella: Wow.
They both looked at me with shock and disappointment.
Renesmee: What?
Edward: Are you crazy?
Bella: Edward!
Renesmee: What did I do?
Edward: We should have never let him imprint you. Look you can't ever see him again all right?
I felt the water in my eyes and I asked,
Renesmee: Why dad? Why?
I felt my mom sit down next to me. Holding my shoulders tight.
Bella: Sweetie we love you and our kind wouldn't like it if you went with a…
Renesmee: Wait a minute? You don't want me going out with Jake, because he is a werewolf?
I stared to laugh a little and my dad looked at me and said,
Edward: What the hell is so funny?
Renesmee: It's like you and mom. Mom used to be a human and you were a vampire! So it's like the same thing really.
Edward: You know she's right Bella.
Renesmee: So why did you choose a vampire mom?
I heard my dad in the corner huff and sigh heavily at me.
Bella: I guess it was because your father was very caring, protective of me, and he loved me. So I guess I loved him as well.
Renesmee: Exactly! So why should Jacob and me be any different? Give me a good reason.
Edward: I'll give you two reasons, one he is older than you, and as you mother said our kind wouldn't like a werewolf in a vampire family.
Renesmee: You're so unfair!
I left the room as fast as I could and I slammed my room door so loud I could here an echo. I thought the whole subject was so unfair. But I was torn. Should I live a lie and be Jacob's girl without my family knowing, or should I listen to my parents and never see him again. As I was thinking this, my whole world was torn in two.
(The next day.)
Renesmee: Good morning dad.
Edward: I have to talk to you. Sit down.
He looked better than yesterday but I sat down and wondered why he was so happy.
Renesmee: What is it?
Edward: I have chosen you a vampire to go out with. Instead of that dog.
As I heard this, I felt my heart crush in two.
Renesmee: No. I want Jacob.
Edward: Look Renesmee, I know you have feelings for him but you have to go with someone your own kind. I'm sorry.
Renesmee: But I…
Edward: End of discussion. He will be here when you get back from school.
I stood up and grabbed my backpack and headed to school. Hopefully school was better then at home.
There will be a part two soon when I have time to do it. But until then read this and tell me what you think about it.