This is the choice part two. I hope you like it sorry it took so long.
The Choice Part 2
School went by quickly. I didn't want it to end. Because I know I would have to go home and face this new vampire that my dad chose for me. I got into my car and drove off and went home. I saw my dad on the driveway waiting for me. I looked for mom but I guess she was either out or inside. I got out of my car and went towards my dad and asked him,
Renesmee: Where is the vampire?
Edward: He will be here shortly.
Renesmee: Where's mom?
Edward: She went to get Rafael.
Renesmee: Who is Rafael?
Edward: Your suitor.
Renesmee: Dad why are you doing this?
Edward: Because I want you to date a person of your kind not a werewolf.
Renesmee: But I love Jacob.
Edward: look I know it's hard but I don't want you to go through the same thing your mom and I did.
Once he finished I saw my mom pull up in her Ferrari with another person in the front seat. I gave out sigh and I felt my dad arm around my shoulders. My mom stepped out of the car and my dad opened the trunk and got Rafael's bags. Then the passenger door opened and I saw a hansom vampire with curly red hair, green eyes, and wearing a sports jacket and a pair of jeans. He walked towards me and said,
Rafael: You must be Renesmee. I'm Rafael.
He took my hand and kissed it lightly.
Renesmee: Nice to meet you.
Edward: I think we did a great job.
Bella: Edward I think your being a little unreasonable.
Edward: Bella, I don't want her to go through the same dangers we went through. Also I don't want the Volitri to return.
Bella: Why would they?
Edward: Remember when they first met you. They wanted me to turn you and they threatened to kill you and our family about a few years ago?
Bella: We have known Jacob for a long time. Why don't you trust him with Nessie?
Edward: I just don't want her to get hurt.
Bella: Fine have it your way.
I looked over and saw my mom and dad arguing. I usually never saw that. I guess mom was trying to set me free and let me date Jake. After they were finished my dad walked over and said,
Edward: Renesmee, why don't you show Rafael the woods and the house?
Renesmee: Fine. Come on.
Rafael: Your parents seem nice.
Renesmee: They usually are.
I showed him my house and the woods them we sat somewhere quiet and talked.
Renesmee: So where are you from?
Rafael: I am from Canada. And you?
Renesmee: Here in Forks.
Rafael: Your dad tells me you are friends with a werewolf? Is that why you smell off a little?
Renesmee: He told you? Umm yeah. He and I are best pals. We hunt together; play tag and all sorts of other things.
Rafael: Sounds like you like him a lot.
Renesmee: Well a little.
Rafael: Renesmee, I know we just met, but you're the most beautiful vampire I've ever seen. Can I kiss you?
Renesmee: Um no! Look I know am kind of attractive but please don't. I don't think---
I felt his cold hard lips touch mine. The kiss was very weird and passionate. I tried to break free but his arms were locked around my waist. Then he let go and said,
Rafael: Does that dog treat you like that?
Renesmee: How dare you!
I raised my hand and slapped it hard against his face.
Renesmee: Stay away from me!
Rafael: Renesmee wait!
I ran towards the woods and as I was running I heard him try to apologize but I didn't turn around. Then it was dark. I felt alone and cold. Then I heard a familiar voice in the dark. It was calling my name.
Jacob: Renesmee?
I turned my head and saw my Jacob in the distance. I was so relived it was him and not that pervert Rafael. I called his name and hugged him so tightly.
Renesmee: Oh Jacob I'm so glad it's you!
Jacob: Whoa what's wrong?
I realized he felt my tears and heard me crying.
Renesmee: My dad doesn't want me dating you so he got a vampire named Rafael to be my suitor instead of you. And he is a complete pervert. I read his mind.
Jacob: Stupid bloodsucker. Well don't worry about it. We'll run away.
Renesmee: Running away doesn't solve anything Jake.
Jacob: Oh yeah. Well don't worry I'll talk to your parents.
Renesmee: Don't hurt them.
Jacob: In case they have forgotten, I was the one who looked after you when you were little.
Renesmee: Jake I'll handle them.
Jacob: No they put you through enough.
Renesmee: Jake can I tell you something?
Jacob: Sure Nessie.
Renesmee: I wanted to say this before, but I really… Really lov---
We were about to kiss then I my dad and Rafael in the darkness.
Edward: What the hell do you think your doing?
Renesmee: What does it look like? I love Jake dad! Not that Pervert.
Edward: Pervert?
Renesmee: Yeah he kissed me and tried strip me down.
I saw my dad's narrow at Rafael's direction.
Edward: Did you try to do something to my daughter?
Rafael: I can't help it Mr. Cullen. She's just so pretty.
Edward: Get out of here Rafael! You're not worthy to see my daughter anymore!
Rafael: Oh I'm not going. I'm taking your daughter!
Then I felt his hard cold hand grab my arm and as soon as I knew it he put me on his back and he ran. I tried to break free but I couldn't.
Renesmee: Jacob! Help me!
Jacob, Edward: Nessie hold on!
This is the end of part two. I'll work on part 3 later. It will come very soon.
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