Authors
Note:
THANKS
Thank you all so much for reviewing 33 reviews means a
lot to me. Now to those of you who think this is the wrong ending,
well I agree this is just a what if, I've always wondered what life
would be like if Bella never jumped off the cliff. For the person who
said to write my own story with my own characters, I will when an
idea hits me, I'm all blank for now but I will try to come up with
a good story, maybe it will come to me in a dream. I wish. Now almost
EVERYONE noticed my spelling and typo issues. Sorry. I was so
impatient, I know where this story is going and I can't wait to get
there. But I promise I will take my time with this chapter and read
it through millions of times I'm getting my friend Abbie to proof
read too. I'm really enjoying writing this, it's only my second
fan fiction my first is the day when Renesme stops growing so check
it out but it's very short. Please Please Please Please
REVIEW.
More Reviews = New Chapters. We're on 33(minus my
replies to people posted by me in reviews) and I would love to get to
40! Sorry this is becoming quite a long author's note and I bet
you're anxious to get on with the rest of this chapter, but I would
like to mention my favourite review so far it totally made my day
nobody could kill my buzz. It is…
Chely…
I
love it! It's awesome,
for having only 14 years you write
really good. I thought that I was reading a Stephanie Meyer's book,
it's funny.
Thanks Chely I thought this review was amazing
(:
And also… lastly I know Bella better than Jacob so this may
or may not be very good, please tell me if you think I got Jacob's
character right in your REVIEWS.
By the way this is just a short
chapter to show Jacob's thoughts, I will hopefully be writing 2
chapters tonight (UK time) if I have time.
Okay so here
goes…
Chapter
3:
Promises
Jacob's POV
"Bella…"
No reply, where was she? Typical Bella,
she's probably is in the emergency room. It was 1pm, she had been
gone 3 hours I knew women took a lot of time shopping but 3 hours for
paracetemol was ridiculous.
I had been so happy in the last few
months. Bella was mine. Bella loved me. And no bloodsucker could
change that now; the ring was on her finger. Sam had given me a lot
of hassle about marrying Bella. He knew what it was like to go back
on your promises, to see the person you hurt every day to have her
inside your head. Leah had been everything to him, she was what Bella
is to me and then he saw Emily and everything changed that. I didn't
believe them all; there was nothing on earth that could take me away
from Bella I would never break my promises to her, I hoped I never
imprinted on anyone. If I could have one wish, it would be to imprint
on Bella I didn't understand this wolf junk. Bella was perfect for
me and vice versa, I didn't care what they thought they didn't
understand. I was the best thing for Bella without me she would be
broken, I put her back together.
Stupid
Bloodsucker.
Maybe Bella was at Dad's, she had grown close to Rebecca (Rebecca
had gotten divorced and moved back with Dad). I rang her.
"Hey
can you put Bella on?"
"She's not here, Jake"
"Oh
well if you see her, could you tell her to ring me"
"Yeah sure
Jake."
Great, Bella was probably lost on La Push somewhere.
Grabbing a pair of shorts and ran outside phasing as I reached the
forest. Sniff, I couldn't smell her anywhere near. Maybe she had
gone to visit Charlie? I ran out of La Push to Forks, It was quicker
than taking my car. Sniff, Bella had been here phew I pulled on my
shorts after phasing and walked towards Charlie's place. But her
truck wasn't there. Funny,
I
walked back to the forest, took off my shorts and phased back. No
voices in my head, they were all too happy with their imprinted
partners.
Sniff. I followed Bella's scent for a while when I
reached a familiar foot path.I
suddenly realized where she was heading, typical for Bella not to
tell her husband she had planned a hike. I ran and ran until I
reached the meadow Bella had once been so eager to find, she never
did tell me why but I gathered it was something to do with the filthy
blood sucker. I knew she would never love me as much as him but I
knew she depended on me, I was her new addiction and she couldn't
live without me I couldn't live without her either. And the I
reached the meadow.
I stood there staring at my broken beloved.
She was distraught lying on the ground tears running down from her
eyes. I hated to see her like this; she looked like the first time
she came to visit me with the motorbikes. Absolutely terrible,
crumpled she was hurting so much. I phased, going over to her pulling
my shorts on. She made no attempt to get up. She struggled to get her
words out, but then I heard her clear words.
"I'm pregnant."
I
held her upright. Holding her tight I felt her tears on my bare
chest. I cried my tears reaching her hair. Bella didn't want my
baby, she wanted his. I could see it in her eyes.
Well…
Did
you like seeing Jacob's POV?
Did I get Jacob's character
right?
Did you like it?
Was my spelling and typing better?
Now…
I PROMISE the next chapter will be moving on with the plot, sorry
this was short but I had to get Jacob's view out there.
Don't
forget to REVIEW!!
Remember… 40! That's 7 more reviews
please.
Thanks to EVERYONE (:
