After the amount of review I recived for chapter one I hope this lives up to expectations.
Chapter 2 Kitsunes and Huygias
Disclaimer: I own nothing!
WARNING INCLUDES LOTS OF NEJI BASHING!!!
Author's note: this takes place after the so called 'timeskip'.
Naruto who had bounded across town, landed in front of a startled Hinata. Somewhere along the way he had snagged a bundle of red roses, and a vendor was cursing a certain fox demon. Hinata was now blushing furiously, as Naruto silently carried Hinata into the forest. When they pair reached a secluded clearing Naruto stopped. The clearing was small, but large enough to hold a small pond and an abandoned hut, comfortably. It was in the hut that Naruto placed Hinata before laying beside her.
"Hinata." ,Naruto calmly spoke, as he removed her jacket.
"Yes?" ,replied a confused but ecstatic Hinata.
"Do you love me?" ,Naruto asked (a OOC if you ask me but hey)
Hinata turned a deep red, before kissing Naruto, who grinned in joy inwardly. He knew what had to happen next in order to free the Kyuubi and make him and Hinata equal. "Don't hate me for this. I'm doing this because I love you too." ,Naruto said before sinking a pair of demonic fangs into Hinata's neck. As the demonic chakra flowed into her body he repositioned himself so their stomachs were flush together. Hinata's white eyes glazed over as red chakra enveloped her and Naruto. Around them the hut exploded in a vortex of red chakra that rose into the clouds searing the very air it touched. The explosive release of chakra could be felt for miles around. Day turned to night as the energy wove it's way through the two lovers. Naruto's already enhanced chakra paths became demonic as did Hinata's. The release sent those who fought the Kyuubi and recognized the energy signature cowering in fear. Then the energy vanished in brilliant vortex of red, and day returned. Five minutes after the release two Kitsune Hanyous exited the forest. Hinata was being carried bridal style by Naruto, whimpering every so often as the Kyuubi fused with her soul. Unfortunately her brother/ cousin and both the Main and Branch houses of the Hyugia clan were quite angry with her new form. But it was Neji who was the greatest threat at the moment. Glaring Naruto, Neji spoke with venom in his voice, "You did something to Hinata and most likely you did against her will. Thus to defend our family's honor you and Hinata shall be purged from this plane of existence."
Naruto knew he would have to protect Hinata from her own family eventually, but he didn't think they would assume he raped her. Neji pulled out a Katana and pointed it at Naruto and Hinata, "You will both die!!"
Then like a sonic boom from hell came a thunderous voice, "NEJI HYUGIA!"
"Oh shit." ,cursed Neji as Tunsade's fist sent him in LUO (Lunar Orbit)
In orbit around the moon
This is Col. McArthur. Houston it seems a small country in Asia has just launched a manned space program. Er. Scratch that it seems they forgot the rocket.
Back On Earth…
"Naruto…" ,Sakura growled barreling through the mass of stunned Huygias, with her mate in tow, "You're a dead man!"
"Hinata said she wanted to be my mate! She knew the risk, besides she'll be on her feet before sunset." ,Naruto said in his defense.
It was about that moment that Hinata's eyes shot open. As she sat up, the changes became apparent, her long raven hair was streaked with crimson as it hung low to her waist. Four fiery fox tails wrapped around her waist, as two matching fox-like ears twitched on top her head. But the silted crimson eyes and white fangs took the cake, Hinata was a powerful half-demon.
For some reason though she acted as if she had never walked on two legs before. This sent Naruto's mind racing, 'Wait did the Kyuubi have a human form? No. then that must mean that's' "Kyuubi?" ,Naruto said a bit worried.
Hinata grinned sheepishly and nodded, "In a way. Then again Hinata and Kyuubi were so alike the two fused into one entity, me. But I think I'll stick with the name Hinata"
Hinata looked at her family and sighed, her Kitsune heritage considered them dishonorable, but her human heritage refused to let her kill them. She was definitely not a normal Hanyous, her demon and human blood were equal in strength making it so that she was truly half-human, half-demon.
She turned to face her friends she noticed that the entirety of Team 7 now consisted fully of demons. There were a few more changes than becoming demons their bodies had also changed in proportions. In fact, even though Tunsade probably won't admit it, Hinata and Shad bigger bust than she did. Though unlike her they had lean, powerful muscles, and the guys, well lets just put it this way, they both put 'The Rock' to shame. Now who would want to mess with that? Well apparently Neji, who had an oh so bumpy landing. "I don't care who you are or what the Hokage says. You will die by my hand!!!"
This time Tunsade did not butcher Neji, instead she moved to the side and allowed a prodigy to commit suicide. Before Neji knew it he was being crushed by an incredible pressure around his torso, as fire raged around him. Hinata approached him, her fangs visible for all to see. "Neji my cousin you have no idea of what I have become. You fear me don't you? And because of that fear you were willing to harm my mate, my pups, and me." She grinned for a second at her family, "That's right father, I said PUPS. As in grandchildren. Powerful children who will one day rival Naruto's father, Hokage Yondiman Uzimaki!" That really caught the crowd's attention.
Hushed whispers ran like wildfire through the crowd, "Naruto's father was the Yondiman?!" "The monster before us is the Fourth's son!" Many were dumbstruck by this new found knowledge, some even got down on their hands and knees and begged for Forgiveness. Of course the fact he was now a half demon sort of helped him in that prospective. Naruto knew that the best course of action was to try to convince the council and the ninja of the village to make his family the village guardians. That would give his children a better chance at being treated fairly, but getting that position would be easier said than done, the first step was to try and forgive the villagers even though they originally treated him like shit. Right now that seemed like a very likely possibility as a rampaging Neji was being held back by a mob of villagers and ANBU, making Neji look like a complete fool. It seemed a little late for that however. "Damn you Naruto! Damn you all to HELL!" ,Neji yelled as he was dragged away by the men in white coats to the 'Happy place'.
Looking at each other, the four demons burst out laughing. It almost seemed comical but Neji's threat continued to ring through their heads. Sakura couldn't believe it, Neji was willing to kill Hinata and Naruto for being demons. It was Hinata who broke her train of thought, "Um' Sakura? I going to the Baths, wanna join me?"
Sakura nodded her head in acknowledgement knowing where this was going. The mention of pups was not a bluff like she had hoped. Following Hinata, Sakura left the crowded streets toward the bathhouse, with two shadows in tow, namely Kiba and Jiraya. Oh hell they were going to die a gruesome death if they got caught, but at least they would get a good show before then.
Okay I have officially declared this one of my worst chapters ever. Oh and by the way Raptors of Kohona is permanently discontinued. I'll write a better version one day maybe with a few OC's and a better plot to it but it will be a SasuSaku fic instead. Oh and if you like the idea of a Female Naruto (not in this story but in general in other stories) I am making a C2 just for her and any stories involving Kyuubi as a female. So if you want to Join my staff just PM me and I'll see what I can do. As for this story this is rock bottom but I'll do my best to make chapter three my best work yet. Sorry Mike Arlow but I'm gonna borrow you line. This is Dinoboy here until next time Bicycle!