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Chapter 3 - The Most Terrible Night Of My Life
Peter, Torrie's boyfriend came round her house the next morning "You ready sweetheart?" he asked. Torrie smiled, "Yep, ready when you are." Peter grinned as he hooked his arm through Torrie's. The were going to the most expensive restuarant in town 'The Blue Shellfish' as Peter's treat and they were going for a romantic walk on the beach in the moonlight. Torrie just knew that this was leading to something special that Peter must have planned. Al quickly ran up behind Torrie "Where are you going?" he asked anxiously. Torrie giggled "Relax daddy, I'm just going out with Peter" she calmly said. Al shook hands with him, "Peter" he acknowledged, Peter nodded and shook Al's hand back,
"Mr Wilson" he said in a sign of respect. Al sighed
"I want her back by 11:00pm sharp" he firmly ordered. Torrie's smiled faded, she gave her father that look and he laughed "Well I suppose I can trust her with you, I know she's safe. Just don't bring her back too late" he said. Peter nodded,
"Don't worry sir, I'll look after her and bring her back in one peice" Peter grinned. Al nodded as Torrie and Peter strolled off out of sight. Peter was actually a guy Torrie could date, because his dad worked alongside her dad and were very close friends. They had always planned for the two lovebirds to hook up.
After a delicious meal, Peter paid the waiter and revealed a small, green box to Torrie. Oh my God! He's proposing She thought nervously. Peter slowly opened the green box, Torrie held her breath and the box revealed a silver, heart necklace. Torrie let out a gasp she was slightly dissapointed, she was sure tonight Peter was going to propose to her. "Peter it's beautiful" she cried feeling the studded diamonds around the heart. "I'm glad you like it! Come here I'll put it on for you" and with that Peter slipped the necklace around Torrie's small neck. She clutched the heart as it fell down the front of her neck. Peter held out his hand for Torrie which she willingly accepted. They strode out towards the beach, walking under the moonlight and the twinkle of the stars. Torrie found it ever so romantic.
"Thanks for the necklace Peter, it was really thoughtful" she said admiring it, she had to admit it was something and she couldn't imagine how much it must of cost. Peter didn't say anything but turned to face her "Torrie, I really need to talk to you about something" he suddenly said.
"What is it?" she asked. Peter looked to the ground
"This isn't going to work with us, I've been seeing someone else. Tor, it's Trish Stratus" he slowly replied, never looking into her eyes he couldn't bear to see the anger and sadness in them. Torrie felt like her whole world was spinning and she couldn't believe how upfront he had been without the slightest hint of sorrow. "Trish? Trish! My sworn rival, how long has this been going on?" she asked through gritted teeth, she dreaded what the answer would be.
"3 weeks" he plainly stated. "But I thought you were going to propose to me" Torrie cried, not believing what she was hearing, she let the dissapointment show in her voice. Peter gave Torrie a puzzled look, "Proposing?" he asked, trying hold back the laughter. Torrie nodded
"Yes, you said that tonight was very important and that you needed to tell me something."
"Tor, all I needed to do was to tell you that I wanna break up and yeah I would class that as pretty important" Peter said without any emotion.
"But we're so right together" she tried. He just shook his head and placed his heads on her shoulders, "No, you're just someone both our dad's decided to set me up with, for financial reasons obviuosly. Look you're not geting the big picture Tor, I never loved you. I could never love a spoiled brat like you" Peter laughed as he started to walk away.
Tears started to fall from Torrie's big, brown eyes. She felt insulted and betrayed "then why...why did you give me the necklace?" she managed to mumble through tears, loud enough for him to here. "Just a way to remember me by" he called back. Torrie ripped the necklace from her neck, "Why would I ever want to remember an arrogant bastard like you?" She screamed throwing the necklace at him, "here, take your peice of trash" she ran off leaving trails of wet tears in the sand. Peter picked up the necklace wiping away bits of sand scattered across the diamonds.
Trish strutted out of the bushes "So, you told her then?" she grinned. He nooded
"yes, it was too easy" he laughed. They started to kiss when Trish pulled away.
"Good, can I have my necklace back now?" she asked holding out her hands. Peter smiled as he held out the necklace letting it fall into her hands. "Ugh, I can't believe Torrie's slimy hands touched my beautiful necklace" Trish shook the sand off it with a disgusted look on her face. Peter gave her a peck on the cheek, as he wrapped his arm around her and they walked off together without the slightest hint of regret.
Well how did you like that chap? Sorry for any Trish fans reading this, but I couldn't think of who else to put at this time. Thanks again for all the reviews I'm really glad you're supporting this story. Well on to the next chapter...