I realised after looking back at this story that I got a few review from people who actualy liked it, so I had a go at writing another one... But I might of failed miserably ^-^'
Goldenfur and the Three Foxes
Once upon a time there was a she-cat named Goldenfur. She was a sweet little she-cat that everyone loved… *rolls eyes*
One day, Goldenfur was going for a walk in the woods, she hadn't eaten that morning and was very hungry. She was going to hunt when suddenly she came across a large den that reeked of fox. Now, Goldenfur was a stupid cat so she ignored the stench and went inside. The foxes that lived there weren't home and there were three juicy rabbits on the ground. She went up to the biggest one and took a bite, but it would be too big to eat and it was so fresh that blood covered her muzzle. Then she went to the middle one, but it was too cold and stale. But the smallest one was just right. After she ate, she decided to take a nap… in a fox's den… So she did, and when she woke up, three hungry foxes were surrounding her.
I'm sure you can guess what happens next, so why don't you look out the window for a few minutes…
-Back to the story-
The next morning, the three foxes left three rabbit in their den. Then they hid outside, and waited for their next meal to come along.
Teehee, it might have been a bit evil at the end =) I didn't do a great job at making it funny, I wrote it in about five minutes ._______.