A/N: Hey. Sorry for the late update. I had to practice for a kung fu tournament. now that it's over, i hope to update more frequently.
Results:
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2. 9
3. 13
so option 1 won by a mile. And for those who are right about who the two people were.. congrats. :)
And thanks for the reviews. They're increasing everytime. I just can't list all them out! But, if you did review, thanks so much!!
Anyways, here you go:
WARNING: This Chapter will make you hate Daisuke even more.
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"Two people?"
"Yeah." He muttered and turned away from me. "Why don't you come and see for yourself?"
"…" I glared at him.
"Can you please stop hating me, Tenten? I know why you do, but can you be reasonable and understand why I did it?" He asked. I sighed loudly and looked at him.
"I… don't want to hate you…" I muttered quietly. He grabbed my wrists and stared at me.
"Then why do you?"
"It's because of what you did!" I shouted at him. "Now, let go!"
"Please, understand…" I tried to pull myself away, but he pushed me into the wall.
"We'll leave as soon as you accept my apology."
"Get off, brother!" I struggled to break free but he growled at me.
"Damn it, Tenten! Just listen okay?! I feel extremely guilty for what I did. And it's not fair for you to ask me to choose between you two. You and Sakura are both important to me!"
"Shut up, Sasuke!" I screamed at him. "Just shut up!"
"No you! Listen well- I'm only going to say this once." He sighed and rested his head on my shoulder.
"Wh-What are you-"
"Tenten.. I said listen." He mumbled quietly. "You're… really important to me. You're one of the most important people in the world to me… And I don't want to lose you. But I know you, Tenten. You're strong… and brave. The believed that you would be okay.. So I left you. And it was wrong."
"I apologize. And I just want to let you know, that I'll never do that ever again. Ignore you, and go after Sakura. You're my top priority now, okay? I have to protect my sister. Do you accept my apology?"
I was absolutely speechless. I opened my mouth quietly as tears came out instead of words.
"S-Sasuke…" He let go of my wrists as I wrapped my arms around him. "I'm sorry… I shouldn't have been so stubborn. I don't want to be your top priority. Sakura should be.. She's the most important person to you. And I know it was foolish of me to ask to choose between you." I let out a breath. "So I accept your apology. Will you accept mine?"
"I don't understand why you're apologizing…" He muttered quietly as he tried to push me off.
"Because I was stupid and irrational. The world doesn't revolve around me, I know. I was just being a spoiled brat. And I hope you forgive me for my misbehavior."
"Alright. I forgive you." He mumbled.
"-What? Just like that?"
"Yeah. I have to forgive you. We're family."
"That just makes me feel more guilty! I'm sorry again for-"
"Stop- Don't apologize anymore. I forgive you. Are we okay now?" He asked quietly. I sighed and nodded.
"Yeah. I'm just… so pathetic. Just thinking about what I said to you before is unforgivable. And you should be hating me right now, not asking for my forgiveness!"
"It's fine. I realize your feelings. And it was wrong of me to do what I did. It's only human instinct to think of one's own self, right?" He looked at me as I nodded.
"When did I deserve someone like you in my life…" I mumbled quietly.
"You don't have to deserve me, Tenten. I'm your brother, whether you want me or not, I will always be in your life no matter what." Sasuke whispered as I backed away from him.
"I'll go back home. Just go first. I'll have to talk to Neji. Sasuke… I'm just really, really… so, so sorr-" He covered my mouth with his hand. He sighed and opened one eye at me.
"I told you to stop apologizing, damn it. Don't talk anymore. I'll leave now. See you back at home." Sasuke flicked my forehead and jumped out the window. I touched my forehead and head towards the door. It creaked open as I saw Neji sitting on the ground. He looked up at me innocently and raised his eyebrows.
"There were a lot of shouting. I couldn't help but listen in. Did it end well?" I bent down and kissed him gently. Our lips lingered together when he sighed against my lips.
"Tenten. Why are we going to your home?" He mumbled. I pulled his arm as he stood before me.
"Sasuke says there are people waiting for us." I took his hand in mine and pressed my nose to his. "Should we go now?" He shut his eyes and smirked gently.
"Let's go." He held out his hand.
"Neji?"
"Come on. You want to get there as fast as possible, right?"
"Neji… What if it's Hinata and Naruto?" I whispered to him.
"Then we're leaving as soon as we get there. I don't want to see her at all."
"You can't hate her still, Neji.." I stroked his arm gently.
"I do."
"What for?" I asked him angrily. "She's never… ever done anything to you."
"…" He pulled away from me and looked me in the eye. "It's a long story. Let's just get to your house, okay?" His tone was sharp like a knife, and somehow I managed to stutter the words-
"O-Okay!" I gulped quietly when he walked towards the door. He turned at me and held out his hands.
"Come on." I nodded and ran to him. Two people… Naruto and Hinata? H-Hiashi and Daisuke?
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"They're coming."
"Did she forgive you?"
"Mhm."
"That's good."
"Are they coming now?"
"I told you already, idiot."
"That's a nice way to greet me. I haven't seen you in years, bastard."
"D-Don't fight…"
"Oh, they're not fighting… right?!"
"Hn."
"I can't wait to see their faces! Do you think they've changed? Huh?"
"Um. Well, you haven't seen them in a while."
"O-Oh."
"They're here."
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"…"
"Neji? Oh- that's right. You've never been here before, have you?" He shook his head.
"This house smells just like you though. Not so much your vampire form."
"Really?"
"Yeah. This house smells just like your human self." He shut his eyes. "Just your scent drives me insane." I flushed and opened the door.
"We're home-" My eyes started to water. I knew it.
"T-Tenten-san!"
"Hey!!"
"N-Naruto! Hinata!" I ran over and quickly embraced her.
"Hello." She smiled. I could feel her breathing as she sniffed in a my scent. She pulled away, her eyes widening. "Y-You're… a vampire?!" She shouted loudly.
"Huh?!" Naruto grinned. "Really?!" He hugged me tightly and swung me around. "That's great! No wonder why-"
"Hands off." Neji grabbed me and pushed Naruto away.
"Neji! It's been so long."
"Not for you. You're still the same as you were before." Neji muttered.
"You-" Naruto clenched his fists.
"Naruto!" Sakura growled and whacked him over the head. "Can you try not to be a clown?! Anyways, did Naruto and Hinata tell you the good news?!"
"D-Don't, Sakura-chan!" Naruto waved his hand in front of her face.
"Neji.." Hinata looked at him as he turned away.
"Hn.." He muttered.
"Sakura… Don't-" Sasuke came into the room and scratched his head. "It's none of your business."
"Oh, but it is!"
"S-Sakura-san…" Hinata blushed brightly.
"Hinata's pregnant!!" Sakura smiled at me. I returned the smile and laughed quietly.
"Congratulations."
"Whatever." Neji muttered quietly. I went to elbow him, but… my head started to pound.
"Shit…" I leaned against Neji and held my stomach.
"Tenten?"
"Are you alright?!" The faint pounding on my head, the cursing flips my stomach was doing…
"Tenten!"
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Curse this. Damn it. Blacking out like that. Skrew it all. What was happening? I opened my eyes and looked up at Neji.
"Neji…"
"Hm?" He leaned down and kissed my neck. My vision was blurry, but I was sure it was him.
"What happened?"
"You fainted, and your father told me to bring you to your room."
"My father?" He nodded and pressed his lips to my collar bone. Father's home? That can't be. I blinked a few times and I felt him smirk against my skin. "You're not-!"
"Yeah, yeah." He pinned me down. "Are you going to stay quiet? Shut up, and don't speak! I'm not giving up on you. You're mine, you understand? Although, I'm sure Neji's already had you."
"Wha-"
"I said shut up!"
"Daisuke. What are you doing here?!" I screamed. "How'd you get in?!"
"Easy. Pretend and look like your father. And then get you into this room alone with me.. And telling everyone to wait downstairs until you wake up. They were easy to fool." He laughed.
"Daisuke, just stop already!" Daisuke smirked.
"Don't make me kiss you, Tenten. You know how Neji is… Now listen up. Don't you dare move, understand?" I nodded. "Keep your mouth shut and don't you dare say a word." I nodded again.
He let go of one of my wrists, and stroked my hair, "You're beautiful. Of course Neji wants you…" Daisuke smirked.
"Get off!" I screamed and kicked him in the face. "Neji!" I screamed again and scrambled myself out of my bed. Daisuke tackled me and grabbed my pants. "Let go!"
"They won't come. I told them to not come in, even if you were screaming. After all… I told them that you would be writhing in pain from the lack of blood." Daisuke smirked.
"S-Stop!" I screamed as he ripped part of it. "Pervert!" I flung my fist at his face and hit his nose.
"Fuc-" He grabbed my shirt and yanked off a whole sleeve.
"Curse you!" I kicked his shin and tried to run. He grabbed my ankle and sank his teeth in. I screamed loudly as I heard the blood gush from my wound, the blood being slurped from my body. "Get off!" I reached my hand out to slap him, but he grabbed it and bit hard down on my wrist. Tears fled from my eye as my hair fell lose from their normal buns.
"You taste so good." He mumbled against my wrist.
"St-Stop…" My eyes started to blur from the loss of blood. All I could see was red… all I could see was the blood in my room. My nose was filled with only the scent of my blood. "Sh-Shit." I muttered as I felt the life being sucked out of me. N-Neji… Can.. You hear me? I started to pant and sweat trickled down my forehead. Neji!
I'm not… suppose to be talking to you, Tenten. Your father said to-
It wasn't my dad! How could you all be so stupid?! It's Daisuke! He was pretending to be-
.. No. No. Daisuke is… in the room with you right now?!
He's- Ah. St-Stop it!
Don't… move. I'm going to get you now.
No. Not you…
What?!
Get… S-Sasuke. If you walked in, Daisuke would suspect that you know.
So don't tell Sasuke, but tell him to go up?
Tell him… He can handle…
Don't let hi take advantage of you! Fight, Tenten.
I-I can't… I've… lost too much bl-blood- Ah…
Curse it.
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"Stop it!" I screamed and tried to push him away to get pushed against the bed.
"Tenten. You'll regret fighting against me. You're not strong enough to beat me. Both you and I know that…" He muttered into my ear as I shut my eyes tightly.
Please hurry.
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"Sasuke!" Neji threw himself into the room. Sasuke looked up as Naruto, Hinata and Sakura's eyes went at Neji.
"Um, yeah?" Neji grabbed his arm and pulled him out of the room.
"…." Sakura was silent.
"I wonder what's wrong…"
"Nah. I wouldn't worry about it." Naruto put his hands behind his head.
"What the hell are you doing, Hyuga?!" Sasuke shouted and felt Neji's shaking hand tight over his wrist. "'… What's up?"
"Tenten… She…" He looked away. "Your father isn't home. He's with Itachi isn't he? If Itachi's not home, then your father shouldn't be with her." Sasuke froze.
"Then.. Who's with her?!" He shouted loudly.
"It's Daisuke. My… twin brother." Neji mumbled quietly. "He was impersonating your father. Now, you have to go up and save her. She's really hurt right now. Pretend you don't know anything, and that you came to check up on her, okay?" Sasuke gulped and nodded.
"I'll come with you, but I won't be going into the room." He nodded again as they went up the stairs.
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"Stop it, Daisuke!" I screamed loudly as he pressed his lips to my forearm. He had bitten me 5 times already. All on my leg and arm. My body thrashed as he continued to suck blood out of my body.
"Hm. And lastly…" He held my hands down and licked my neck.
"Leave me alone!" I screamed and kicked my legs at his stomach. Blood dripped onto my face from his teeth as he aimed to punch me. I grabbed his punch and hit him hard in the stomach. He grunted as there was a knock on the door. I ran for it, but Daisuke snatched me and threw me into the bed.
"You stay there, or I'll hurt you…." He threatened as I saw him transform right before my eyes. He looked just like my dad. He opened the door and Sasuke was there.
"Dad. Is Tenten alright?" Daisuke nodded.
"She's alright. Don't worry."
"Can I see her?" Sasuke asked. Daisuke shook his head.
"Sorry. But, you can't see her yet." I was shaking under the sheets. I secretly wanted to cry from the pain, but I didn't want to show him I was scared. Being scared would just make Daisuke more excited.
"Father, allow me to see Tenten."
"You can not. Listen to your father and go back downstairs."
"I won't."
"Listen to your father!"
"You're not my father." Sasuke muttered under his breath and Neji kicked Daisuke to the ground.
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"Neji.. So you're alive."
"Damn right I am! Get away from Tenten!" I heard his voice… It was Neji. I immediately started to cry and curl up under the sheets. "Sasuke! Get her!" Neji shouted as he threw Daisuke at the window.
"Tenten!" Sasuke shouted as I picked me up in his arms.
"B-Brother." Tears stained my face. "I'm scared. It hurts!" I cried. "I'm scared." Sasuke held me close as I saw a tear fall from his face. "Sasuke…" I mumbled his name.
"You're in such a horrible condition… Don't worry. I'll take care of you." I nodded. Sasuke jumped out the window. "I'm taking her to the hospital!" He shouted. Neji turned and nodded, standing in front of the window, blocking Daisuke.
"Why did you come back?!"
"Because I want Tenten."
"No. You only want her because she's mine."
"Nice theory." Daisue smirked.
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"We end this now."
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"Is Sasuke-kun still with Neji?"
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"It hurts, Sasuke! My head is spinning, and it feels like my stomach is going to explode!"
"You're bleeding all over, Tenten… But don't worry. You'll be alright. I promise you."
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Congrats to those who thought it was Hinata and Naruto.
Okay. Options for next time:
1. Tenten makes it to the hospital but, is very hurt. The doctors don't think she can make it. Neji begs to differ.
2. We find out why Daisuke really wants Tenten. Neji ends up almost killing Daisuke, but Hinata comes in and tries to stop him, but she ends up getting hurt by Neji, triggering Naruto's anger.
Just two options this time. If you reviewers don't mind.. i'd like to see if i could combine both the ideas into the next chapters, but it's up to you guys. so... review wisely and make me happy? :D
Thanks for reading and please review. :)