Ok, until we get readers, and reviewers, we would like you to go to EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly's page and read our fic there, we have just started it, but it will be updated regularly !!
AND BECAUSE OF THE MASS REVIEWING, I AM MAKING THIS ONE A LONG ONE, WITH A NEW CHARACTER!! :D
Well how about we just say wow? Yes, I think so, Wow is the word to describe the amount of reviews I have just recieved!
I was lying in my bed, and was checking my emails every few hours or so on my ipod, and they just kept coming, I was like, OH MY GOD.
SHALL WE CHECK THEM OUT? I THINK WE SHOULD..
EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly: Haha well I am also glad that she had a good time, and again I will say I am not sure in which relationship she will fall into. And I amnt really sure on what he is feeling, because he is supposed to not know either haha. And with the whole Roxy being in the city, that could actually be a good theory you are working on haha. I hope that you enjoy the next chapter x
Nicosia-Oceania-Cyprus there's twoooo :) : (one)Hey, thanks so much for reviewing as usual. And I am glad that you enjoyed the start to the new one, well, the second one haha. I am hoping to hear from you soon enough x
(two)I know, dont you just think that it is lovely !! But, there are a few surprises headed your way! :D x
ThatGirl16: Haha, I am totally glad your enjoying it, but to understand fully what is going on, you will just have to read more..
McFlyingHigh: I am glad that you like it but shame on you for not reviewing and making me think everyone had abandoned me :O haha, nah I dont mind really :) Haha, I am glad that you enjoy my cliffhanging parts, and hope to hear from you soon, because reading on is the only way to understand what it is all about x
CrushedCoppelia there's fooourrr :) : (one)I am glad that you have time to read now :) Makes me glad that I am one of the people that you read their fics :P To find out who that bastard is you will just have to read on wont you :P
(two)Haha, this review actually made me laugh, and I am sure that Sean was looking at me oddly as we lay in bed together and I was reading my reviews through my ipod and randomly burst out laughing. I can just imagine you grabbing at his face haha. And I dont mean to make anyone hate anyone, but if so, then so be it, but he gets nicer throughout the fics :D x
(three) Haha, this also made me laugh, Danny's guitar whacking across Doug's head, made me laugh somehow, but maybe that is just my twisted sense of humour haha. And yeah, it is good that they are all getting along, strangely but funnily haha. And no, your not twisted :)
(four)I know what you mean haha. I was thinking the same, but it wasnt that they wanted to hurt her, it was just the boys thought that it was up to danny to tell her, and he didnt know how to, and through his stupidity ended up hurting her. :( hope you enjoy the next set though xx
GroowyL there's bloody eleven :O:O:O : (one) I am glad that you enjoyed the last chapter of the previous fic :) hope you will review again :P
(two) Haha, I am glad that you liked it, but technically it was Danny's fault too, but he was just too stupid to notice what he was doing wrong haha, but doesnt that make us love him all the more? And I am glad to hear you will review all the chapters :D:D:D xx
(three)I know right, wouldnt it be totally amazing if he was in your room? But then again, what she said to Danny was outrageous, but then again, didnt he deserve it for stomping into her room and not knocking or anything? He was being a bit of an arse hole haha
(four)I am glad that you thought they were cute, I did too :P x
(five)Haha, I am glad that you thought it could be her. And it might be, who knows? :P
(six)Haha, Im glad that even when you dont really know what to say you still review .. oooh :D
(seven)I am glad that you think that Jazz isnt a total cow anymore haha. But then again, it is all because they are just confused lol xx
(eight)Haha, for a second there you almost had me going, I was like, oh god, have I lost my touch? :O But then I was like.. Oh GroowyL you big kidder haha x
(nine)I am so glad that you commented on the fact that I used his p.o.v as I didnt know what people thought about it, but then I was like, oh well I will just post it anyways and see what happens haha. And I know, its a little confusing right?x
(ten)Haha, well I am only going to say that I am happy you enjoyed it ;) :D
(eleven)Haha, well to find out what that whole other kid thing was about you just have to read and find out haha. And I would write now, but I think that Sean would get awful bored. So I will write laters :D And I am glad that you cant wait, just means I am doing my job right. :D Of course you can have a character !! Seriously, I mean, wow, eleven reviews?!:O:O:O And yeah, we can write tonight when I get back from dropping Sean off at his bus? :D x Oh and could you check out my other fic that I am writting with EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly? Its called The Magical New Duet xx AND AND AND, this chapter is sooo dedicated to you, for your almighty reviewing skills :D
k33uk: Hey, I saw your review and my jaw dropped, it was massive! Haha, and it is ok about the whole my reviewing your chapter thing haha :D And thanks so much for everything that you have written, I like to know what people think :D x
TOLD YOU IT WAS A WOW! made me feel as though I was flying mate.
Anyone feeling like recommending me? I will love you forever !! And ever! x
Anyways, on with the chapter, yes?
Eleven.
I sat there quietly, infact no, I lie, I was deadly silent, as though my life would be ripped off me if I didnt stay that way. I held the paper in my hand, I didnt know what I was supposed to say. He looked like he had seen a ghost, and right enough, maybe, just maybe it was better if I kept this from him?
Maybe all this hurt that he was going through wasnt good for him, I mean, he chose a horrid wife, and a child that wasnt biologically connected to him in anyway, over the love of his life and his own child, presuming I had got the right thoughts in my head from her very limited words.
He sat there, staring into space as though there was nothing else in the room but him and his thoughts. I felt bad for him, for giving him the letter, and I didnt know what I was supposed to do, was I supposed to say something? If I was, what would I say? Was I supposed to make a joke out of it? But then there was the fear of him snapping at me and us having an argument, or was I supposed to say nothing? I did remember my mum telling me once that silence was golden, and to this moment, I didnt know what she meant by it, but now, now I knew, I knew that it meant that you would enjoy the silence, while it lasted.
I thought about it, and came to what I had to do. I reached out and put my hand on his shoulder, causing him to look at me. I smiled weakly and rested my head on his shoulder after he had looked away again.
"Remember that song, the one that says try a little harder, try your best to make it through the day oh just tell yourself, ah, I'll be ok?" I asked him, trying my utmost best to cheer him up and reassure him that no matter what, it wasnt life or death.
"No, what stupid idiot wrote that" He said angrily, wiping off a tear.
"You did Dan, you did." I whispered looking at him as he slowly wiped off another tear.
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I was lying in my bed on the phone with Emma, somehow I didnt know if I should tell her about the whole thing with Danny, or the kiss with Matt. I mean, it was Danny's business with Roxy, and it wasnt my place to tell right? But then again, I couldnt not tell her, she was my very best friend, and I didnt know what I should do about it. For the moment being, I decided to keep it quiet, and after a while of mindless ranting, we both decided to go to bed, and talk in the morning. We were going out to lunch and for a little shopping anyways, to keep our minds at rest with everything going on in our busy lives.
I fell asleep, thinking of the night that had just taken place. The kiss I shared with Matt, it was magical, his lips were so soft, and his arms pulling me in close to him made it all the more warm and caring. His tongue carressing my own as we stood in the doorway to Danny's flat. Then I had come in, and had a really odd moment with Danny, he wasnt as bad as I had thought he was right? He was really nice, and he actually had feelings. I almost understood him now, he had stayed with Cerina because she had said she was pregnant, and he didnt want to be one of those absent fathers, but then again, he would have been with Roxy if she had told him about their little girl, but she hadnt, so it was her own fault for losing him, right? Maybe I was wrong, but I didnt understand one thing.
Those feelings I had around Danny, those tight feelings in my stomach as though I was constantly treading on broken glass, the feeling that makes you want to dance and scream at the same time. There was nothing better, yet nothing worse.
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I walked into the small cafe with Emma, our arms linked. I knew I needed to tell her what was going on, what I didnt know what was happening with, and I knew that she would say that she knew all along that I would like Danny, but technically, I didnt know if I liked him or not, so how could she be right or even wrong?
"So, what's bothering you?" She asked me, I looked at her, confused, I didnt know what she meant by this, how would she know that something was bothering me, if I barely knew if it was bothering me myself? This was what bestfriends were all about, they were the ultimate sister or friend, they were always there for you, and they knew when things were up, no matter how much you said there was nothing on your mind, they could predict you and read you like pop up mr men books. It was almost as if they were an extract of yourself.
"I dont know what you mean" I said, as I sat down at the table with my lunch of a roll and a cup of coffee. Emma had almost the same as me, but a different filling on her roll.
"You always look off in your own world as though you are debating something with your brain when something is on your mind and is bothering you" She said as she smiled at me sipping at her drink.
"I guess there is one thing" I said lightly, looking out of the window.
"Continue.." She spoke, making me know that she wanted me to tell her everything. That was another thing that was good about having a best friend, they were like a personal diary, no matter what, they would always be there, and your secrets were always safe, locked up inside of them.
"Ok, so where do I begin, with the kiss I shared with Matt, with Danny almost nearly kissed me, about how his ex sent him a letter letting him know he is a dad, and has been for like, the last ten months or something, with that I think I might be falling for either of them and I dont know what is going on?" I asked her in a casual tone as her mouth dropped open as she stared at me, obviously wondering if I was telling her the truth, but then when I didnt burst out laughing and just sipped on my hot coffee, she knew I wasnt joking.
"Wow" She whispered in a squeaky tone.
"What?" I asked her, wondering what on earth she was going on about, I mean, she did want to know what was going through my head right, I mean, did I just say I might be falling for Danny, Matt sure, but Danny? God what on earth was coming to this world.
"It's a lot of information to take in you know!" She began with a little laugh. "So, start with this almost kiss?" She spoke again, I felt blood rushing to my face as I blushed a little. I told her what happened, leaving her 'aww'ing at me, which was very patronizing, but it would always be that way when Em got told something she found cute or sweet in any shape or form.
After talking about everything, she nodded, she totally understood, and she knew that she wasnt able to tell anyone about it, without me telling her, which was all the better, it was like a silent contract.
We walked from the shop and into a small store that stood just around the corner, as I was looking at a jumper, I realised that just outside was a girl, she was looking in the window, and not a second later some random other girl grabbed her bag from her arm, and began at a sprint. I knew I would be really angry if someone didnt help me, and so I took off after the other girl, running, hearing the robbed standing screaming after us.
I couldnt catch the robber, as she was too fast for me, but she had dropped the bag. I mean really, wasnt that what she wanted, and she dropped it, not even attempting to come back and get it? Strange.
I picked it up and jogged slowly back to the girl who stood outside the store looking maddened, Emma standing by her side obviously looking for me.
"Here you go" I said, panting from all the running I had done.
"Oh my god, Thanks!" She exclaimed, wrapping her arms around my neck. I didnt know if I was to talk to her, incase she knew who I was and was some mad possesed fan girl, but her accent was American, and so she couldnt know them all that well, could she?
"I'm Jazzie, and this is Emma" I said, smiling at her. "Do you know me?" I asked. I needed to know if she knew me, or my brother, or his friends.
"Not that I know, I am Peyton." She spoke lightly, looking through her bag.
"Do you know anyone named Danny Jones, or Dougie Poynter?" I asked. Emma looked at me strangely, but she knew why I was asking these questions.
"Nope, sorry" She looked at us, smiling.
I knew that somehow, strangely, I had made a new friend.
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