This one will be reeeal short :/ xx
Oh my god. I did love the reviews I got last night, made me happy :P
I have some news for you. I will be uploading again tomorrow, and then wednesday morning, but then all of wednesday night and thursday and friday I cant write, or read as I am staying at my uncles and looking after my six month old baby cousin, to help them out :P But I would like it if you could review like madd? And so then on friday night when I get back, I can read them all and be like, WOWWW. please?
This also means I can't write with EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly, or GroowyL :/ x
on a happier note.. Would you all like to read and review, and then read and review my other fic on.. www. fanfiction .net/s/5113403/1/The_Magical_New_Duet
without the spaces ^^ wont let me save otherwise, oddly enough. -raises eyebrow-
read and review it? please please please?
On with the review replies..
McFlyingHigh: I am glad that you reviewed, and it was ok that you didnt review chapter eleven as well, although it would be nice to see two reviews :P Haha, thats ok about the whole reply thing and to find out what goes on you will hjust have to read more tonight haha. :P I was wondering if you would be able to check out The Magical New Duet on EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly's page? I am co-writing it with her :D We would love to hear from you in a review?
CrushedCoppelia there's six! : (one) First off, for all these reviews, this chapter is so getting dedicated to you! -I know what you mean, but he thought she wouldnt want to hear what he had to say and didnt think he would ever see her again, and the guys didnt think that it was their place to say at all, so they kept their mouth shut. But they did keep in contact with her, and she kept in contact with them, but not Danny.
(two)Haha, technically she still would have been left by Dougie, although he would have said something. And he is just trying to figure out what he is on about right? He doesnt mean to hurt anyone, it is just that he is to stupid to realise when he has done something wrong, if that makes sense?
(three)Haha, I know what you mean, but you did have a point, they should have told her that they were leaving and then that would have forced Danny into telling her he was going too, because after all, he did lie to her and everything. And wouldnt everyone like to kiss him? And sometimes kick him haha.
(four)Haha, dont we all like a little bit of drama haha. And I know what you mean, but even after all of this time and everything he has done, she couldnt find it in herself to hate him, because she would always love him. If that makes sense :)
(five)And I know, she really shouldnt be falling for it, but then again, she will always love him, no matter what he says or does.
(six)I know what you mean, but it was something you never expected right? And I know, you really dislike him, but it isnt his fault he was a stupid idiot who didnt know how to say no. He was settling for second best after he lost the love of his life, and didnt want to be without someone like that in his life. So he married Cerina as he couldnt marry Roxy. Hoping you like this... Oh and I was wondering if you would like to read and review my other fic that we are writing, I am collaborating with EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly, and on her page there is a fic called The Magical New Duet, could you read and review?
GroowyL: I am glad that you liked it, and I shall hope you like this one. It is ok that you dont know what to say, because sometimes neither do I haha.
That Girl16: Hey, Yeah, it is good to know that you arent paranoid sometimes haha, I mean, what if you were :O:L And I am glad to know you liked it and here is the next one for you :D x
EmmaJonasBrothersMcFly: Haha, well I guess that my stories are more predictable than ever now then haha, and yeah, but to find out who has what and who as who, you will just have to read on :O Because I am mean:D And I am glad to know you liked it, and here is the next one for you.. x
You know what I am thinking? I am thinking that I am in need of more readers. And so I am going to be reading and reviewing lots of peoples fics and chapters and at the end of all of their updates, I will be asking if they would read and review.. :D
And if you would like you could help me by reccommendations?
Thirteen
I stared down into the pram/buggy thing. The little girl was beautiful. She had a little dark brown wavy hair on her head, and she had magical blue eyes, just like her dad.
"I am guessing your Jazzie?" She spoke, not the child obviously, but Roxy. I nodded, thinking of what I could say but failing everytime. I turned to look at Emma who just stared back at me as though she was in shock. What would I do when I went home, tell Danny? I didnt think so, why was all of this happening, just as we were getting along? Why was I the one who had to stay in his flat and know everything about his life? Was all of this coincidence? Yes, but it didnt mean it wasnt annoyingly conincidental.
After we said our goodbyes, and I kissed Matt on the cheek, we left, and decided to go and sit in the park, on the swings.
I swung back and forth lightly, thinking about how to keep my mouth shut and not mention her to Danny, I mean, wouldnt he want to find her? Would he want me to meet her again, somehow through Matt? I didnt know exactly why, but Matt and Danny weren't on good terms, almost as if since Matt heard him badmouthing his music, they were almost no longer friends. They would only speak if they absolutely had to.
"What're you thinking about?" Peyton asked me. Emma sat in silence, I knew that she knew what I would be thinking about, but having to actually explain myself to a friend was something new to me, and I did sort of like it, but then again, I loved having the familiarity of being there with a friend, knowing everything about one another.
I explained everything, between Danny and I, how we had hated each other, how they were all famous, everything between Matt and I, how I had been nothing but a fan, and now we were dating, although we weren't a couple, so I could technically be with whoever I wanted to be with, and I think he liked it that way too. All the way through everything, she smiled, laughed, nodded, and 'aww'ed.
I saw someone moving on the grass in front of us, and decided I would find out who it was. I walked to them, as they stopped dead in their tracks as I looked over them in the darkness.
"Cerina?" I asked.
Oh god. This was so not good.
What did you thiink? x
