Well hey guys we couldn't really make it 2 Cancun cause of the swine flu in Mexico it sucks I know so we went 2 Puerto Rico and we just got back I had such a great idea of the story before the story while I was there for Constanze and well here it is:

P.S- I do NOT own twilight Stephenie Meyer does and I Don't just thought you all should know L0L

Dum dum dum on with the STORY before THE STORY(tee hee)……

The Beginning

"Levantate!!" yelled my mother from my room. "ok ya voy!!" I screamed (p.s. she said "wake up" and I answered "ok I am")

Damn mom couldn't stop freaking out for like two seconds, I'll tell you why….first….she liked this duke guy a real jerk and she also loved his money, well see we weren't rich and he was the best we could find. But one problem...he was abusive. Since they got married mom was always rushing me to do things….

(Flashback)

"hurry up and help the duke get ready!!"

"alright mom I will, didn't mean it."

"where is he?"

"in the room waiting!!!!!!"

"its about time you know your not very efficient."

"so sorry, please it was my fault, not mama's"

"mmm, very well. Well become useful child and go take the brush and DELICATELY comb my hair."

"sir you have…..no-…"

"no hair pftt!! I've got plenty, and don't talk back child, DO AS YOUR TOLD!!!" slap!

"ow!" I fell to the ground in pain and got up immediately and went on to brushing what was left of his thin wispy locks.

God what a jerk he was. I hated him so much. I wish my mom would stop acting so desperate, I would work forever to support our family if I had to but get rid of him!!!!!! No. She was to out of it to get anything I would tell her. God please bless us oh please I pray and beg that you rid of this man from our lives, if you do I swear my chastity belongs to you. And so I waited.

(end of flashback)

Then that morning it happened.

"oh my god!!!!!!" screamed my mother "come quick!"

I ran as fast as I could then I saw it. My dream come true.

There was the Duke lying on the floor…dead.

"mom what happened???" I asked in sarcastic shock although I doubt she noticed.

"he had a stroke, all the drinking and such he did. My poor husband, he didn't deserve this!" she wept as if she had lost her only child *cough* me *cough*.

"mom you should be happy!" I yelled although I didn't think twice about what I said, now remember she loved this man and I didn't. "excuse me?!" she yelled loudly "he has been nothing but nice to this family and your happy that he's dead?!"

"yes mom he was a jerk and he abused us. Don't you care about me? Us? Do you love him more than me? More than yourself?" I asked in shock although I was afraid I knew the answer.

She just nodded her head and told me "you are a grown girl now and we are poor, he has been supporting us for a while you have to appreciate him and be grateful for all he has done."

"so is that a yes ma?" I asked

"yes." she said and walked away

I never looked at her the same again. Everything was going to change between me and her. We are no longer mother and daughter. She is the enemy. And I make sure I finish the enemy. I no longer recognize her. And its all thanks to the man lying dead in front of me.

Oooohhh!!! A cliffy hehe tee hee I'll post up another chapter soon but u gotta……………

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