Thank you for the reviews im going to try to do better with spelling and grammar now and not use shorter versions of words and thanks for the answer to spelling lol thanks all ~Magen~ even if you don't like my story thanks for reading.
It all started when she asked me if I wanted to know what you thought. I said no you shouldn't but in on fangs privacy but she started talking really fast blurting out everything. She said fang thinks your beautiful, you shouldn't run away, you shouldn't keep your emotions bottled up and you're a better kisser than that red head from when we lived with ann. That's all she said.
Then after that I yelled Angel I told you not to tell me and she said but that's all good stuff and I said Angel that's up to fang to tell me not you and she said ok sorry. Then I said don't tell fang you told me he will be really mad at you and at me for not stopping you and she said ok I wont. Then you walked in and Angel and I said ut oo and then you made angel leave and me explain there that's it and here we are an hour later.
Ok he said now why was that so hard to tell me? Wait your not mad? Yes I am mad but its ok he grabbed my hand and squeezed it. Do you really hate my emotions being bottled up? I don't want to admit but if I unbottle my emotions I would always be crying and hanging on you! I wouldn't mind! Ok then I started to cry Im sorry I said and he took me into his arms and hugged me tight. Angel said she and the flock think we belong together. Well he smiled then stop acting like were not.
My eyes popped open I looked at him are you my…. Yes he said I am your boyfriend! I smiled so big I thought my face would fall off. Then everything went black. When I woke I asked what happened wait I was in fangs arms. He smiled and said you fainted. How long I practically screamed at him? 2 hrs! O my god the flock. Don't worry they know. O ok. O max by the way I told them we are together me and you. YOU WHAT I yelled. Don't you remember? O O wow ok. Then he kissed my head and hugged me tighter. I smiled then my face grew hot how embarrassing fainting when fang asked me out. I still can't get over the idea Max + Fang, Fang + Max wow I am going nuts I jumped up and ran out of the room.
Well what do you think I tried punctuation and grammar and even paragraphs lol now I will type more later!!!!
Peace out ~magen~