Heyy back again im gunna try something new the every other line thing!! Thanks for the suggestions and Im working on typing and grammar lol I thought I would give you a chapter or two for easter well here you go!!
~Magen~
(Maxes view)
Ugh no why am I bloody O O my lip is busted! Aww now what do I
kiss with my nose? Aww stupid M-geeks why did they have to hit me in the
Face? Now Im going to be black and blue and bloody! Aww not fair, Fang I
Screamed in my head! What do they like me to be ugly for fang what jerks!
I was cursing now, fang was yelling at me to calm down, and Angel and the rest of the flock were laughing hysterically. They all laughed and yelled
calm down. I screamed and then laughed. We all laughed together. Then fang ordered me to go for a fly, he wanted to talk to the flack alone.
(Fangs view)
As soon as max was out of view, I started to talk to the flock. "Guys listen Max is and I are going to be different now." "We know this they all
Stated." "You and max are together Angel added happily." "Yes so max promised not to keep her emotions bottled up." "So beware that's why she had
That tantrum when the M-geeks were here!" "Ok?" "Ok they said as they started laughing about earlier." "Yeah I said you all should giggle and laugh now so
Max don't have to listen to it." "Fang angel said are you and max going to get married?" "No angel we are way too young." "O ok just wondering she said" then
She started to skip away. But then she stopped and thought to me. "Fang max loves you more than you think. Fang you should you know kiss her
Again soon!" "Ok angel I thought I was planning on it don't worry." She then smiled and thought to me "Max likes it a lot she thinks it is as close to heaven
as she will ever get." That's enough angel I thought to her you shouldn't be telling me this its not your business. Ok and fang 1 more thing!
"Will you get me a bottle of water?" "Ok angel here I took the bottle of water from my jacket and threw it at her." The thoughts in my head were running
100 miles per hour. Then max came back. Wow I looked at her she must of went back to the room and took a shower b/c she was all cleaned up.
Fang angel yelled, angel I know I yelled back, ok now please, no. Fang please! NO I said one last time but max walked up toward me holding her
hand out. I took it and smiled. Boy I was smiling a lot lately I usually don't smile much. But I have to max is so so gorgeous and she's mine, mine all
mine now that's when I lost it I grabbed her and kissed hew and thought to myself she better not run. She didn't thank god. I love the new max all
Lovey with me! Ha I always win (most of the time.) I pulled back and she said I wasn't done yet yeah well max we got to talk. Ok she sighed.
So what did you think? Just 5 good reviews and I will post another chapter!!! Just 5 I like to hear from people lol so 5 reviews and I will post another chapter or maby 2!!! Ok so press the butten and let me no good or bad but hey If you want to tell me its terrible and ask if im five it don't bother me so if you think it does don't waste your time trying to upset me!! :) I am a happy person so smile :)
Live-laugh-love peace
~Magen~