Well i'm back. sorry to everyone for the long wait but i have been working on a script that i have been working before and have been pouriong all my creaticity into that. This chapter is a return to my guerilla writing, as there is no betaing. Im quite happy with this chapter, and i hope you all like it. There is a Major update about the future of this story aswell as others at the end of this chapter but please read the story first so you don't spoil the ending. i'll come back and update this chapter as soon as my beta gets some time to work on it for me. thanks again for reading
WOWP not owned by me, its disney's, i'd like to thank for walt for laying the base that has grown into the house that i now write in!
One Night
Chapter 5 - In a Galaxy Far, Far Away...
Max sat nervously in the lair. Over his eyes Alex had tied a strip of black material that blinded her younger brother. Although he couldn't see he could her and sense his sister moving around the room.
Alex looked across at her younger brother as he tried to stay calm, blindfolded and vulnerable sitting on the couch. She moved over to the table sitting in front of Max. She sat down and leaned forward until she was an inch or so from his face. He could feel her hot breath wash over his face and he could smell the sweet aroma of what little perfume she used.
Max reached out to her closer but Alex grabbed his hands and lowered them purring, "Not Yet, Maxi!" He let out a small moan expressing his disappointment.
Alex giggled at her young brother as she leaned in again moving to his ear and in a hushed tone asked "You nervous? Max turned his head slightly towards her and nodded "Yeah, a little," he replied. Alex pulled back and placed her lips on Max's. They immediately allowed each others tongues to slither into each other's mouths and dance passionately.
Alex stood up, breaking the kiss and flicked her hair out of her face. Max started to moan again "Aly, I was enjoying that!" She smiled at him as he sat pouting and blindfolded. As he continued to pout Alex pulled her wand from her boot took hold of his hand, and recited a spell, "Transportium Nextorbitorium!"
In a flash the young lovers were transported to a strange planet. At the top of a giant cliff. Max sniffed the air, and his nostrils were filled with the smell of strange flowers and in the distance he could hear the deep crashing of water. He reached up to his face and with a little effort pulled the blindfold from his eyes.
In front of Max could see green lush forests as far as the eye could see. "Wow!" Max uttered stupidly his eyes scanned the horizon and he blinked dazzled by the beauty of the landscape. "W, W, Where are we?" he said as he walked to the edge of the cliff.
Alex stepped forward and slipped her arms around his waist and rested her chin on Max's shoulder. "Justin brought me here once." Alex said smiling at the memories.
He broke her grip around his waist and turned to look at her and asked accusingly "You came here with Justin?"
Alex giggled, "It wasn't like that! He brought me here to celebrate me learning how to fly!"
Max's face turned red "oh sorry." he muttered apologetically. She took hold of is hand and he embraced her.
As Alex melted into her brothers arms, "Did you think I was trying to date both of you?" she asked softly, care not to hurt his feelings.
Max shook his head furiously "No!" he said slightly louder than was necessary. "I just thought …" he trailed off while Alex gently kissed his neck.
"You're the only person I want? Alex said as she trailed the kisses up his neck to his lips. Max smiled and kissed her back. She lost her balance toppled backwards on to the soft grass, pulling Max down on top of her.
Max and Alex spent an hour or so lying on the ground holding each others body's. Their mouths never moved from each other and were constantly battling inside the arena they had created. Suddenly he could hear the waterfall in the distance and broke the kiss. This time Alex voiced her disappointment, "Maxi, I liked that!"
Max smiled down at her, "So did I, but I want to go check out that waterfall." he said excitedly. Alex smiled back at him and nodded. He clambered off her and extended his hand to help her up.
Max wanted to run down to the water but Alex took hold of him and pecked his lips. "Not yet, come with me, we'll be able to get down quicker if we do it this way?" and she directed him back towards the spot where they had arrived where she had left a picnic basket and a thin package that seemed to hover an inch or so off the ground.
Alex bent down and started to remove the cloth that she had wrapped it in to hide it from Max. eventually she threw the wrapping in a picnic basket and stood up holding a Broom stick. Max's eyes widened and his smile extended from ear to ear. She mounted the broom and motioned for max to sit on the behind her, which he did slithering his hands around her waist and holding on tight, as she kicked off the ground and flew over the edge of the cliff down to the water.
On the way down Max kept his eye on the path that led from the top down to the water, which seemed to end in a lagoon at the bottom. Max quickly thanked Alex for bringing the broom and in his head thought of how grateful he was that he wouldn't need to climb all the way back up on that path.
As they reached nearer the lagoon Max noticed a small island in the centre which Alex was flying them too.
They touched down and Max quickly jumped from the broom and was about to jump in the water when Alex shouted him back. "Max, you don't have your swimming suit on!" she said exasperated. He quickly pulled his wand from his pocket and pointed it at his jeans. "Speedosis Clothisis!" he recited the spell and smiled as the flash of light enveloped the lower part of his body.
Alex smiled as Max pulled his t-shirt over his head and kicked off his shoes, and made his way into the water and started to swim out towards the falling water. she pulled her own wand out and recited the same spell her brother had just used and transformed her won clothes into a strapless red two piece. She pulled off her shoes and socks and walked slowly into the water getting used to it before fully submerging herself.
Once Alex had moved fully into the water she made her way over to Max who was already swimming under the waterfall and being forced down with the strength of the water. He walked his sister swim towards him and he made his way over. Alex stopped dead and started to tread water as Max got closer. She reached out and Max swam into the space between her arms allowing them to close around him. He kissed her and said, "Come with me, I want to show you something!"
They both swam over to the waterfall Alex following in her brothers wake, and watch as he swam past through the falling water, Alex hesitated for a moment and stared at the water unsure if she should follow. Eventually Max came back from the other side "Come on Alex you'll love this." he shouted over the noise of the water.
As Alex came out of the other side she noticed that there was some sort of cave. Max was already standing at the top of a path that lead from the water. She climbed out of the water noticing that it wasn't as deep on this side as it was out in the open lagoon. She joined Max at the top of the path and saw that further down the passage there was a larger cavern. And they both made there way down to it.
Once they reached it Max looked around, "Where is the light coming from?" he asked curiously to Alex.
Alex looked around and noticed a hole in the roof that seemed to have light coming out of it, she then noticed that there were reflective surfaces all around the cave, and that was lighting the cavern. She pointed these out to her brother and they slipped into the water in front of them. It didn't seem as deep as the water from before and seemed to be designed like a small pool with some sort of seats around the edge allowing them to sit down. Max took a seat and Alex floated over and sat down on his legs facing him, her legs either side of his own.
Max carefully licked around Alex's lips, before slipping it into her mouth. His hands took hold of her waists and pulled her closer, enjoying the touch of her skin against his own.
Alex ran her hands through his hair and gripped them between her fingers. She playfully bucked forward on his lap and Max moved his hand up her body. He taken hold of the bikini as they moved past her breasts and slipped it over her head and threw it on the side of the pool.
She leaned back and Max watched her as her breasts floated on the top of the water. He pulled her forward and captured her right nipple in his mouth. Alex threw her head back, "Max" she moaned as Max sucked in her harder. He released her from his mouth and she pushed back off of his lap.
She swam into the centre taking note of the water becoming deeper here, and motioned for max to join her. When he reached Alex he reached out to take hold of her and continue from before but she dived under the water to avoid him.
Max looked down straining his eyes at the clear green surface trying to see Alex as she swam beneath the surface. She circled around him and looked up at him watching as he peered through the water. She carefully propelled herself towards him and reached out taking hold of the his Speedos and yanked them down.
Alex resurfaced and threw the Speedos over her brothers head onto the side next to her own bikini top. Max spun around and grabbed Alex around the waist and started to tickle her sides, "That isn't funny!" He shouted over her giggles.
The sounds of giggles and splashing filled the chamber for the next few minutes as max continued his assault on his older sister. When she was finally able to escape her brothers grip she dived back under water but this time he followed her. The water wasn't particularly deep only four or five metres but it was deep enough for them both to be able to avoid and chase each other. The water was incredibly clear and due to its alien nature it wasn't hurting their eyes the way that the water on earth would do, the were able to see each other fine and max watched as Alex smiled at him and hooked her thumbs into the sides of what was left of her bikini and slid them down.
Alex pushed off the bottom of the pool and shot up towards the surface leaving her clothes on the side of the pool. Max followed his sister taking care to come up right in front of her. He ran his hands through his hair removing the excess water and took hold of Alex's face and kissed her passionately. She returned the kiss with equal force and they enjoyed the next few hours as they made love in the pool.
They walked back down the passageway out into the lagoon holding hands they hadn't bother putting their swimsuits back on but carried them in their other hands. As they returned to the island Alex did a spell that returned their clothes back to their body. Max picked up the broom and handed it to his sister allowing her to mount it and climb on before he climbed on himself and took hold of Alex as she kicked off.
They reached the top of the cliff and Alex wrapped up the broom and picked up the rest of their belongings as Max pulled out his own wand ready to send them home.
Alex took hold of Max hand and he flicked his wand, "Transportium Nextorbitorium!" he bellowed and they were transported back to the Lair in the basement of their house.
Alex dropped everything on the floor as soon as they arrived. She looked at the clock in the corner. "Twenty past nine!" she said "I though it was later." She turned to Max and hugged him close, whispering in his ear "I hope you enjoyed today?
Max smiled and nodded to her. He took a tighter grip of her waist and once again placed his lips on his sisters, he licked along her bottom lip, and then across the top lip. Alex opened her mouth slightly and moaned into the kiss, as her own tongue slipped into his. "WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?" Both siblings spilt apart as they heard the shouting and looked at the door where their father was standing his face like thunder. Behind him their mother rushed into the room. She saw their hands on each others waist and how close their faces were, and was able to work out the rest. Alex didn't know what to do, and she didn't like what was going to happen next.
Well done you reached the end!! all the usual stuff please read and review and thanks for reading. oh and did anyone notice the Chapter title was a reference to star wars
One Night is almost finished. i've decided to finish the story at chapter 7. i won't give any spoilers, but i will say i'v started chapter 6, and chapter seven will be fairly short but it will be good and fitting finale to my story. I hope to post them by the end of August, and will most likely post them together! I'v told a few people about what im going to do and just from my descriptions they've said if i do it right i will be a tearjerker so have those hankies on standby!
The Suite Life on Deck: Back On Board, is coming chapter one is getting written slowly. for anyone that doesn't know about this story check out my profile. im really looking forward to writing this story and i will start writing this a lot quicker as soon as One Night is finished.
Once BoB is finished which will be a while, i will be taking a break from writing Fan Fiction or more specifically posting Fan Fiction. As much as i love writing, posting, and reading your reviews. but i feel that i am unable to update as regualry as i would like and i kinda hate the thought of people waiting for me to update, makes me feel bad that i'm disapoiting people. i know it seems weird but its how my mind works. although this is the plan just now these may change i may stay and keep writing but right now that my plan.
so i will see you all soon, love JJay, oh yeah please read and review i need reviews to know if you like this or not. i know people are reading but the second part seems to get neglected. i accept unsigned reviews so please!