"talking"
thoughts
(kyuubi talks)
-fang talking-
kyuubi thoughts
+fang thoughts+
As 3 people enter the gates of Konoha. the tallest of the three people has long shaggy white hair in torn up cloths with a patched up face and hands, the second tallest person of the trio has a black hooded trenchcoat that has hand-stiched bloody hand prints sliding down the back of the coat, on the arms and has a big katana in his left hand with 20 little black skulls on black strings . " So this is the Great Konoha huh? Its doesn't seem that great to me" said a low deep voice of the second person. "But Aniki you'll like it here plus you have too meet all my freinds. said the shortest of the trio dressed in a black long-sleeved shirt that had a orange spiral on the chest and arms, black and orange cargo pants and a long head-band of the leaf symbol. said a much calmer and more patient Naruto Uzumaki.
"Oh i do want to meet your freinds onii-san i even want to meet this prick Uchiha with a kunia shoved up his ass sideways even more for shoving 2 chidoris in your chest" say naruto's aniki with a evil grin on his face. 'Ok you two stop talking we are going to the hokage manor, Rai did u bring your completed mission list". Rai just nodded his head and continued to walk with Jiraiya on his left and Naruto on his right. As they were walking down the street Rai noticed the cold glares at naruto and with his enchanted hearing whispering to each other " hey looks like the hell spawn is back". "yeah why wont the hokage just kill that bloody thristy monster". this place is just like my old villagethought a pissed off rai-easy pup dont kill anyone we just got here- said fang and rai started to calm down+ i caused this pup so much pain cant they see he's a hero that saved the village when i went crazy+ .
at the hokage manor
the Konoha 12 minus 1
10 chunin and 1 jonin were standing in attention in front of the Godamine with Shizune with tonton in her arms. The door slams open "Baachan I'm home" said a deep voice but still it sounded familer to the 13 ppl in the room. everone in the room went wide-eyed as most of the girls blush at how much naruto changed in three years. Naruto grew to 5'5 his hair is a spiky as ever but longer, he has a long sleeved shirt his muscles grew bigger. Tsunade eye is twiching very badly and she's letting off a small killer intent for being called old for the some hundreth time, she leaps over the heads of the other ninja in the room to punch naruto " NNNNAAARRRRUUUTTTTOOOO IM gonna goin to punch you to Suna". Naruto pales and goes wide-eyed and awaits the punch only to have a black trench coat to stand in front of him." everybody in the room when wide-eye in shock at the fact that someone came in fast then lee and blocked tsunade's punch with his pinkie finger. "Who the Fuc-" said tsunade but she stopped from the killer intent the hooded figure was leaking out " i don't care if your the hokage of this village or kami-sama himself , you or anyone in this village will not touch naruto again or i'll show u a world of pain that you wish u died 100 over after i'm done with you" said the hooded figure with a low deep scary voice dripping with vemon. Naruto getting over his shock said "aniki u can'threatened the only person i consider my mother". Tsunade's eyes were starting to tear up he thinks of me as his mother thought tsunade, "naru-chan" said rai in an upset voice that was still scary voice " Fucking shit aniki is very angry" said a very pale and trembling naruto. " Naruto-kun who is this and why do you keep calling him aniki?" asked shizune getting over her shock, "Like i said he's my aniki" said a very pleased naruto. "Dobe u haven't got a family your a orphan and if he was your brother he would have kil-' sasuke never got to finish when a colossal amount killer intent was directed towards sasuke which froze everybody in the room as rai walked towards sasuke he says " Prick i my not be naruto's blood brother we are brothers in a diffrent way and he has more family out therr that are coming this way, he has 5 brothers and 3 sisters that are angry at this village but are enraged with you uchiha for shoving 2 chidoris in naruto's chest and his shoulder" said rai in a very scary voice that made everyone get a chill down their spines." Rai calm down" yelled a very scared jiraiya, the killer intent disapered into rai,"jiraiya the the hell happed to you" asked a concerned tsunade "Rai" said jiraiya scrathing the side of his head, "rai whos that" said tenten "me" said the hooded figure everybody looks at the hooded figure named rai. "Well what do u want" said a ticked off tsunade "i want to join your ranks" said rai, "ok were u a ninja , if u were did u do missions?" said tsunade,rai just nodded and walked to the desk and put a folder in front of her, she opened the folder and read and went wide-eye in shock,awe and surprised "Holy Shit!" yelled tsunade, 'what read it to us" said shizune who's voice was dripping with curiosity "Ok 288 d-rank, 100 c-rank,88 b-rank,75 a-rank,25 s-rank,Motherfucker, 22 ss-rank and... 7 sss-rank" said tsunade " thats not all look at the page behind that one" said rai as he added his own two cents in. Tsunade look at it and fainted " tsunade-sama" said shizune after 10 minutes of shaking her tsunade woke up and sat in her chair to calm herself "what was so shocking that made u faint tsunade-sensei asked a scared yet at the same time in awe of rai's mission record." asked sakura "Ok kill total 6483.. ninjas killed 4326, samurais killed 1370,mayors killed 400, tyrants killed 200 , and regular men killed 187 regural me" said a curious tsunade. Everybody but naruto and jiraiya were looking at were rai was but he wasn't there, "where is he" said tenten who was starting liking rai " up here" said a voice that was above them lying on his back against the ceiling readin's a book called " how to kill a man with a toothpick" by yamato "how the hell did u get up there" asked a pissed off sasuke "ask me no questions i'll tell you no lie" said rai with a smirk on his face sasuke was about to ask him somethings so but tsunade beat him" rai why did u kill all thoses people" ask tsunade everybody in the room paid close attention to what he was about to say "well the regural men were rapist, serial killers or drug dealers so i chopped of their heads, the tyraints were slaving people in the towns or citys they lived in so i shot them in the the face or the back of their heads, the mayors the would gather bums and make them fight to the death for entertainment and when the death matches were over the mayor would give him enuff money to live off of for a week which is a big no no for my leader so ripped their hearts out, the samurais raided my village so me and my team went out to stop them with the other squads in the village at the time...after the raid was over i lost my team, when i heard that the samurais were part of an amry that wanted to invade my village,the rest of the army were ninjas were 10 miles out form the village i went after the ninjas for reveange for my team so i used my strongest jutsu and and pumped 75 of my chakra in to that attack that i wiped the ninjas out and made a crater 3 miles wide and 2 miles deep". finished rai in a sad voice. The girls in the room were sad the he lost his team to a raid and the guys were scared of this guy. " that jutsu you used what happed to it and what rank was it givin" asked tsunade, " s rank kinjutsu" said rai with smirk " will the three people under the genjutsu please revile yourselfs or i'll cut you in half. said rai as he jumped to his feets when he landed. The three people that reviled themselfs from the genjutsu were Asuma Sarutobi, Kurenai Yuuhi, Gai Maito and Kakashi Hatake. "Hi kurenia-san,asuma-san, Gai-san, kakashi" naruto spat out kakashi's name. Kakashi's eyes widen that naruto didn't add the sensei suffix to his name "naruto i'm still your sensei so show me some respect" ask a upset kakashi "yeah naruto no baka show sensei more respect" screamed sakura, "Shut the fuck up saukra your like a goddamn headache that wont go away" said naruto with disgust in his voice,eight-teen people were surprised that naruto didn't add the chan suffix to her name but even more that he talked to her that way " and for you kakashi you are Not i repeat you are not my sensei any more"said naruto.Tsunade cleared her throat to get everybodys attention "ok rai what positions would you like, chunin or jounin?" asked tsunade "elite jounin" said rai. "but thats a rank for ninja who have alot of experience" said tsunade in disbelief " you read my whole mission report and my kills count and you say i dont have enuff...ok how about a bet hokage-sama if i beat these elite jonin here in the area's the are best in i'll take the jonin rank but if i do beat them i get the rank elite jonin deal?" said rai with a smirk tsunade wasn't know to back down from a bet said "deal" i have this deal in the bag thought tsunade. "ok let's meet up at training area 27 in 5 minutes" said rai as as he nodded to naruto and jiraiya as they plugged their ears with their fingers just as they plugged their ears rai made a single hand seal and a deafing bang and a gray cloud "what the fuck was that" asked Tsunade who's ears were ringing"that was a shunshin no jutsu he invented"said jiraiya with a grin. "well lets go to training area 27 and watch this guy get his assed kicked" said sasuke and they all shunshin
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