Author's Note #2:

I wanted to thank everyone of you that had reviewed, added the story, or me to their favorites! I've been getting reviews with questions in them so I want to address them:

Isabela is Online:

In response to your review of; "Is this still an E/B story? Bella and Edward 's relationship seems to head the wrong way. How can Bella go back to Edward now after what he has done. Why does she have to fall in love with another vampire? She could rebel against Edward without letting another vampire in her life. I think Edward was just so protective of her and Bella misunderstood. Well, update again soon ."

This is not and Edward and Bella story... it is the end of their relationship. Bella is not going to go back to Edward. I've read a lot of Twilight fics and they all are about Bella and Edward so I wanted to something different. Also, this story is for a friend of mine who's b/f is named Edward and he's being a butt head to her so I write to make her feel better. Thanks for your questions!

Twilightfang66:

Answer to your question of; "ok so is bellas power letting people here her mind wen she lets he sheild down"

Yes that is her power, it's the same as in the book Breaking Dawn. She is a shield that keeps people out of her mind but when she was learning to control that she figured out she could remove the shield and allow people in. Thanks for your question!

And lastly:

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In response to your review of: "Hello. I have just re-read the entire story so far up to chapter 11, to refresh myself on it. It is a good story. I am kind of leary of Malachi, though. He told Bella that his power is to control others' minds. How do we know that he isn't controlling Bella's mind into "feeling as if she has imprinted on him" or "loving him" and "hating Edward?" I don't think they know him well enough to know what he would and would not do. And he could even control Alice's mind so that she wouldn't have a vision about it. And Bella's rage and outbursts. That isn't normal for her, even though perhaps she has reached her breaking point. He could be controlling her mind to cause her to be full of hate and rage. And the others may not even know that this is happening. He could be controlling their minds into overlooking that possibility and believing his guise. But, then again, I may be wrong. Maybe he is a "good guy" and really does love her and "imprinted" on her, and she just feels that she doesn't love Edward anymore. I'm not sure. I guess I want to continue reading more chapters to see where it goes. I can't wait for more updates. I like lots of the other details-like Sue and Charlie being married and expecting a baby, Charlie finding out what Bella really is, Malachi be-friending the wolf pack, Jacob liking Malachi, how the wolf pack and the Cullens are working together to try to help Bella, etc. Keep going. Thanks. Suzan Noerr"

Malachi's power is to control other's minds but he doesn't use it. He hates having his power, he thinks it's wrong to control another person. Bella's outburts are her just finally growing up and learning to stick up for herself... again this is a story for my best friend who's having issue's with her b/f Edward. Bella is also just sick of all Edward's crap and is finally realizing that he is a butt head and that is why she has this rage. Don't get me wrong I love Edward Cullen but just not in my story LOL. Thanks for the review!

Ok everyone again thanks for all the reviews! I'll be hopefully updating soon!

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