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Chapter 6 A DAY IN THE MIND OF ITACHI

Doo dee bum dee doo dee, I love painting my nails.

Where's Kisame with my lunch, I'm getting hungry!

Lets see whose mind to read? Tobi!

SUPER MANGEKYO SHARINGAN.

ECHO, echo, cho, cho, cho, ho, ho, o, o

Madara; Tobi, you want to be a good boy right?

ECHO, echo, cho, cho, cho, ho, ho, o, o

Madre; Let me take control NOW!

Hello, llo, llo, lo, lo, o, o

Madara; of all Sharingan users I had to get the ADD kid, I would have preferred the twisted, nail painting weirdo.

POOF (back to Itachi)

Weirdo, that's it!

Itachi; Tobi come here Tsukuyomi

Now what to do to Madara?

Itachi; Now Tobi and Madara, I have brought you here to make you suffer. Don't worry this may make Tobi behave more normal, but it can't make him any worse.

Madara; Itachi how did you know about me?

Itachi; I have my ways; I'm a MISSING S-CLASS NIN I can do any thing!

Tobi; Pretty clouds, HI ITACHI!

Itachi; Tobi I was going to leave you out of this but because you said "Pretty" I will now make both of you suffer.

Tobi; HI ITACHI, listen to this, ECHO, CHO, HO, HO, O, O. Cool isn't it?

Itachi; too much joy.

(Tobi starts line dancing)

Madara; I see you failed to notice that THIS IS MY WORLD; you will suffer now, HAHAHAHAHA. TOBI DANCE NOW!.

Tobi; ECHO, echo, cho, cho, cho, ho, ho, o, o

Madara; Itachi, I will free you if you let me into your body.

Itachi; NO, I am the master of torment, what ever you do is not as bad as sharing a body with Tobi.

Madara; This at lease proves that you're an Uchiha, but now I hate you and I will destroy you!

Itachi; But you LACK ENOUGH HATRED, LIKE SASUKE AND MY RUBBER DUCKY!

END

At lease two more chapters