frosticdranzergal: Hey don't worry everybody makes mistakes and besides it really brightened my day to know I'm not the only one who screws up when I review and end up looking like an idiot. Did you like the Bryan/Kami stuff? I made him be nice to her see! Did it make you happy? I agree that Kai is being a total bastard, he seems to think he owns her since she dedicated her life to his dreams. He mistakes her obedience, not to mention misuses it! It makes me so flustered ! >. Yeah Tala is kinda better but not much, he blackmailed her into screwin' him and that's not the way you should show appreciation either. Damn these boys! This chapter Bryan's helpful advice brings her back to reality and away from the dream world she was stuck in...well it's hardly a dream when your pretty much a slave but hey what can ya do?
She isn't really weak either, she went through the same crap as them which is why Bryan and Spence hate to see her so weak and worn down. And the only reason Kai did that was cause it would be more of a scar to be raped as you first time then have it be with someone whom you really care for and vice versa. You can take on a whole pack of kids?AMAZING! Before I was home schooled I used to have to keep everyone on the bus in line. (started home schooling in the middle of eight grade) Yeah and personally I'm glad that when I get taught a lesson it doesn't included somebody screwing me, cause just between you and me...-whispers- I'm always in trouble. -sigh- Whew glad I got that off my chest. lol!
Your a trampoline legend! AMAZING! (hmm...feel like I've done that before -shrugs- Ah well) Yeah I can't resist it, I still have a week and half before I'm able to take off my brace and already I'm out on the trampoline again, although I definitely pay for it. My ankle still hurts like hell and if I barely twist it I almost scream. Like this O, Yep that's how it would look. Anyway enjoy the chapter!
ANiMe-AsIaN-ChiCK69: Really? You were really surprised! Oh I feel so happy you really know how to make my day! It's just so cool knowing my cliff hanger worked on someone...-giggles- I can't believe I just giggled...oh GOD I'm gettin' more girly by the moment. UGH! -sticks out tongue- YUCK! Anyway thanks for your support about my stupid ankle -glares at ankle- I hope it heals soon cause I'm getting tired of sleeping on my back just so it feels comfortable. Well read on to the chapter!
BeckyKai4Eva: You thought it was great? I didn't think it was that good personally but am glad you thought it was good! My ankle still hurts like hell but what can ya do! And here's the update as requested, sorry it took so long I've been sorta depressed lately ever since my grandma died...-sigh-! Anyway here ya go!
grounded angel: Glad your still updating! It's awesome since you were one of my first reviewers! Yeah Kai is really possessive (wow a lot of s's) and kinda demanding too! Anyway here's the newest installment for ya!
kurayami monogatari: Hey sorry I didn't update soon but I had a bunch of funeral stuff to go to and didn't have a computer so when I got home I wasted time, wasted more time, and then felt guilty and wrote the newchapter. Anyway sorry about that but here is the chapter!
XxMookinexX: I'm still so stoked you actually reviewed for me so I just can't help but be excited! Potential? me? No way! I really suck at writing and really need to expand my vocab but I appreciate thecompliment all the same and still love your stories so much! You can't write lemons? Or abusive scenes? Well I'm sure you're just fine at it; you're very talented and are a natural author. But I have my weaknesses too, I'm not good at descriptions and am terrible at dramatic parts, but hey, beggars can't be choosers. -shrugs- So together we make one super writer! -superman pose- Kinda sad that my strong points are lemons and abusive scenes but ah well!And when you say that I should talk about Kami's thoughts about all of the Bladers do you mean like Spencer and Bryan? Or like Tyson, Max, Rei, Lee, Rick, Daichi...etc? My newer chapters are going to have more Bry and Spence in them 'cause I love them so much. -hugs bryan and spencer-
Well she kinda loves Tala more like a best friend or brother so the situation is kinda hard for her. And even though he doesn't show it Tala still does love Kami which doesn't explain why he is making her life a living hell but that's about to change. The old Kami is back in town!
Oh and about her past, if ya really want to know my other story 'The Past Unveiled' is all about her past. If ya just read the prologue it tells why she is in the abbey and why she is so screwed up. And about being submissive, she just loves her team so much since she grew up with them and wanted to keep them happy. Obviously she's going about it in the wrong way so that's gonna have to change too. The only time she was different was a long time ago when she was a small child, but like I said in just the prologue of the other story it tells why she changed for the worst. Hope ya get a chance to read it, although you don't have too!
This is your first long review? I feel so honoured! To be honest your story was when I started giving long reviews and now I'm stuck like that. Also I give long replies as you can see! Anyway here is the chapter!
p.s. I couldn't help but do a 'p.s.' since you did! . Thanx for your support for my ankle, it means a lot!
Wolflover7: Wow I feel so honoured to have you review, especially after how much I loved your story! Also the new idea sounds awesome and I can't wait for you to post it! No hurry though!
Yeah the chapter was a little dark I know but I just can't stand stories that go all smooth and lovey dovey, which is probably why I like yours. Full of action. -throws fist into the air- Yes Kami is definitely loyal and in denial for that matter. -sighs- But don't worry she's gettin' her spark back this chapter, and her attitude is back with a vengeance! Hope ya like the new chapter although to be truthful it's pretty boring. Well just see for yourself I guess, and without further delay...-drum roll- Read on!
Crimson Eyes: Don't worry you posted just in time! As long as your still reading I don't mind the late review! Yeah sometimes computers can be a pain in the ace I agree with that full on! Well when your homeschooled high school isn't as bad cause I get to sleep in and work whenever I get the chance! Anyway here's the update!
A/N Hey I'm gonna use the same beginning as I did for the lemon scene but it will be different in some part because it's not heading towards the same objective.
Oh and as always thanx to mafianerd! My fantastical beta!
The plane floated through the clouds, like a paperweight bird cutting through the wind. Looking out the window didn't provide much distraction for the female Russian. She watched as they passed by birds and every once in awhile they even passed by another plane flying a different route. Sighing she looked to her right to find her team-mate leaning back in his own chair his head supported by the cushioned head rest. With his usually cold eyes closed he looked rather peaceful, she couldn't help but sport a smile as he shifted and let out a long sigh.
After minutes of her still watching him one silver eye flicked open. "Need something?" his deep voice drowsy.
"No." she answered quietly but didn't bother to turn her gaze.
"Fine." he settled back in and tried to catch some more sleep closing his open eye again. Sitting stiffly he opened both his eyes again whenhe didn't feel her gaze shift away. "What now?" he asked irritably.
"Nothin'." was the only response he received although the violet eyes still didn't stop watching him. "Why?"
"No reason." he answered back in the same deep tone. He closed his eyes again and groaned at the stiffness of his back. 'Damn airplane, how much longer.' he wiggled again in his seat trying his best to find comfort in the rough seats.
"Hey Bry?' a timid voice started but faltered showing the owner wasn't as confident as would be expected.
Noting to himself the tone in her voice he decided it best not to snap at her and sighed opening his eyes. "Yeah what?" turning slightly in his seat he looked at his friend who was playing with some of her hair trying to act distracted.
"Well?" waiting longer he finally gave up, "Well if you're just gonna sit there playing with your hai-" He was cut off by the others voice as she dropped the lock and looked up at him with her defeated eyes.
"What do you think I should do?" her voice was pleading and if he didn't know any better he thought she was about to break down into tears. 'No. She hasn't cried since we were at the abbey, none of us have. We've forgotten how' Looking up to meet her eyes he turned away hating seeing her like this, she used to be so tough.
'To everyone else she still is a scrapper but underneath she's falling apart. And it's all thanks to those two.' he balled his fists causing his knuckles to turn a ghostly white.
Feeling her eyes on him he looked up and sighed reaching over to ruffle her hair, "Well kid, just let it out. You have to stand up for yourself or they'll walk all over you. Get mad, storm out, hit somebody, do something. Go back to your old roots, at least then you could handle life." he cocked his head to the side as if rethinking his words, making sure that he didn't tell her to kill anybody.
Kami closed her eyes as if contemplating the thought and then opened her eyes again; the defeated look still remained as always. But the thing that caught Bryan's eyes were the other feelings mixed in, he noticed her anger, confidence, and determination. It was as if she had decided to agree and renewed her old outdated personality, bringing her back up to speed.
'She's back.' he smirked to himself. He could hardly contain his excitement; he couldn't wait to see what she had in store for the two that had wore her down in the first place. "See that's the panther I know. Now you go and tear em' a new one." he grinned, although Kami wasn't sure if it was at her or his own choice in words.
The rest of the plane ride went smoothly, besides when Tala and Kai got into an argument about who would share a room with whom. It all ended better than expected, Spencer volunteered to ask for an extra bed and Kami could stay with him and Bryan leaving the other two to fight amongst themselves.
After unloading they went to grab their bags while Kami ran to find them a cab, she always got the best results when waiting on the side of the road then the others. Soon enough a yellow cab pulled up a young cabby giving Kami a smile and popping the trunk for the teams belongings. The four boys sat in the back while Kami sat up front with the cabby who insisted on making cheap conversation.
"So where ya headed?" his voice was soft and smooth.
"Carlston Hotel." her voice remained cold showing no emotion.
The cabby who seemed unaffected kept on talking, "Why ya in town?"
"Beyblade tournament."
"Oh yeah that's were I recognize ya all from. You're that team, The Blitzkreig Boyz right? I heard about ya all, they are callin' you the best of the best. So then that make you the infamous Black Rose of the Blitzkreig team huh? You're a lot cutter in person." he grinned at her after using the nickname she had been given by announcers and other teams.
"Watch the rode fabio." she sneered at him causing him to turn away from her.
He glared back at the rest of her team when he heard them snickering in the back seat and exchanging high fives.
"Burn." Bryan muttered aloud gaining more pearls of laughter from the rest of the team.
The cabby who didn't seem to take a hint started up again, "So then how long ya gonna be in town?" Spencer instantly put a stop to the questions when the cabby stared asking more questions about where Kami lived and how old she was, he even had the nerve to ask her if she had a boyfriend.
Pulling to a stop in front of the hotel they filed out Bryan and Spencer pulling the bags out of the trunk while Kami threw money into the front seat while giving the cab driver a look of disgust.
Walking up the steps they stopped at the sound of his slick voice, "I get off at six if ya wanna go out." he yelled out after her making her flare with anger.
Turning back towards the cab she let out a growl, wrinkling her nose distastefully. A smirk played across her lips as she spoke back to the cocky driver, "Sorry but I don't date 30-year old cab drivers. Now why don't you be a good boy and crawl back home to your mommy before I'm forced to send you back crying." she turned and started to walk away coolly. Still she couldn't help but smirk at the howls of laughter she heard coming from everyone who had witnessed the little scene. Stepping away she heard the cab driver cussing at her but paid him no attention, "Fool." she muttered aloud walking with a renewed air of power.
Walking towards the check-out desk the team sent out many glares to those they felt unworthy or their presence, passing by many groups stopped to stare at them. Everyone seemed to quiet and the air felt much colder wherever they went, girls giggled and pointed at the boys of the team as well as sending envious glares towards Kami. She easily ignored them but couldn't help at smirk at how weak their looks were, turning to face a pair of girls she heard whispering about her she sent them a bone chilling look.
"Problem?" her tone was cold and dark,leaving the girls to shiver andtry to use their eyes to send her away. "Well?" she sneered angrily their attitude getting on her nerves.
"N-No." one spoke up bravely trying to sound unaffected by the hurtful looks she was receiving from one whom she was just trash to.
Kami's lips kicked up into a smirk and she let out a small chuckle, "I didn't think so." Turning away she didn't hear them talking anymore, being pleased she started her pace back towards the counter the clerk looking at them eagerly. 'Probably hoping we're not coming to get her next.' Kami thought smugly to herself as they approached the desk.
Stepping up Kami decided since she was closest she would take care of everything since she seemed to be the one in power at the moment.
"May I help you?" the older woman asked putting on her best smile trying to act as polite as possible. This strange girl didn't seem like one she would want to anger so the clerk decided to take light cautious steps.
Flashing her a card with some info on it, Kami sighed and tapped her foot impatiently waiting for the woman to look up the room numbers and give them the keys. The lady clicked in a few last keys before finally turning back to Kami smiling, "Welcome to the Carlston Hotel. Your hotel rooms are numbers 288 and 289 conjoining as requested. Is there anything else I can help you with before you go?" her tone was as fake as her lips, she was obviously overworked, stressed, and was probably one of those women who hated her job but didn't dare to quit in fear of not being able to find another.
Kami thought for a minute before the thought struck, "Yeah a spare bed in 289." she answered quietly her voice calm, so calm it made it sound deadly.
"Right away ma'am. Please enjoy your stay." Brushing a stray strand away from her tanned face she handed them two small manila envelops each containing two card keys. "Oh and good luck in the tournament tomorrow, you guys are my favourite." The way her voice sounded, it was easy and soft letting the five know she wasn't just saying it for conformity sake.
Kami smiled at her and waved at her turning to look at her team who was all standing there with the same bored look plastered on each of their faces. They nodded at the clerk in appreciation for the room and the support and turned to walk away. Reaching the end of the lobby Kami threw the keys for room 288 over her head, Tala and Kai catching them without missing a beat.
"Oh man I'm so tired." Spencer boomed stretching as they reached the end of the tiled lobby. "If I faint from exhaustion it's your duty as my team-mates to carry me to the room," he stated matter-of-factly.
"Fainting is for wimps. Oh never mind, your right." Bryan teased, earning a punch in the arm from an irritated and insulted Spencer.
"Yeah well I vote Tala and Kai have to do it. Cause there's no way I'm doing it, no offence Spence, (a/n damn rhymes) but you'd flatten m-"
"Kami? Kami is it really you?" a familiar voice called back from the past causing Kami to freeze in place Tala running right into her.
Tala, who was already annoyed that he had to share a room with Kai spun on his heel and glared at the mysterious person. "Who the hell are you?"
'It's Impossible.'
A/N
I bet ya ten to one nobody knows how it is! Anyway I'm sorry it took so long and that this sux pretty badly but I have a new idea (actually I planned on adding it in all along I just finally decided where to put it) and I'm gonna roll with it. Also my grandma died on the 9th so I was away from home and up at relatives and everything is still pretty tense around my house so I don't get much time alone. Sorry again! -bows repeatedly-
Anyway does anybody else have any requests? I'm still waiting cause the only ones I've gotten so far were from AMZ and a small one from A-A-C69...(anime-asian-chick69) Well it's thanksgiving at the moment and my family has this weird ritual that we get up at like 4:30 a.m. and go shopping. All the sales start at like 5:00 but nobody is actually up until 4:45 so I'd better be getting to bed. It's already 2:54 and while I'm lying here typing the circulation to my arm is about cut off and my pinkie just got all cold and went numb. Well I'm gonna go sleep for my whole 1 hour & 51 min. so I'm gonna be going now.
This is Tawnie trying to regain feeling in her damn pinkie -bites pinkie-