Breaking a Seal

by sandmonkeys

Naruto's life is a living hell. He loses everything until one day he breaks the seal. Once the seal brakes will he hold his grudge against the village and destroy it or will he protect it. NaruHina possible harem.

4. Outlines

Breaking the Seal

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Big Review

Ok this story like one little scroll didn't go the way I planned it. I tried to combine my ideas for a dark fiction with my ideas for a happy fiction with the fourth coming back with even more plot ideas from another story idea where Kyuubi adopts him. All in all the story didn't set right because it goes from hell to heaven in one chapter, so I failed in my attempt to sandwich different story plots together. The only chapter I really feel proud of is the first one (but I personally feel my idea for the fourth being the seal is pretty ingenious). So for anyone that wants this story continued can do it themselves or can try to get their favorite author to do it for them. Now I have no problems with this except I do not want anyone to use the first chapter. The rest is up for grabs as long as you give credit where it is due I plan on extracting the first chapter and rewriting a darker fiction from there. And if you want my plot outline I was planning for the next chapter here it is in all its simplistic wonder-

first intro to fox clan mansion

go into minor clan politics (fox, snake and a few others are high Elite class… with fox in the most powerful position )

schooling with Naruto (ten-ten and Hinata rivalry for a little humor while learning how to use summon forms correctly)

Explainingsummons forms (summons are spirits of humans that are immortal… (cant die of old age) and they change into representations of there clan when well… summoned)

snake clan gets in trouble by helping Orochimaru because they gave him texts of their necromancy and alchemy practices (similar to clan jutsu) and are forced to try to marry someone into the fox clan to avoid social status from dropping completely

snakes are forced to bring 14 year old Anko (who had just been betrayed by Orochimaru ) there to try to convince her to marry Naruto on their clans behalf (her terms are Orochimaru is to be killed on sight and basically disowned by the snake clan and she gets her curse seal removed, which originated from the snake clan)

then go into brief family/training mode where Naruto gets closer to parents and fiance's via 4th's training

And that's really all I had planned for chapter four