Numbah 5: Hey forever1x5, what was that!
forever1x5: what do ya mean numbah 5?
numbah 5: What do u mean what do i mean? that last chapter sounded like numbah 4 could've wrote it!
numbah 4: HEY!!!!!! i write and speak greatly!!!!
numbah 5: point taken...
forever1x5: ok, ok... sorry about that guys, i promise i won't rush next time on my chapters...
numbah 4: I still don't know what ur talking about i thought the last chapter was pretty goodly...
forever1x5: (crying at her defreat)
(story) When numbah 3 stepped into her cousins' apartment she looked around her eyes instantly lit up bright as the daytime sun. There was all sorts of beautiful things everywhere that made the averge apartment look 10x bigger. Kuki jumped up with a big scream of happiness before running to everything and asking what it is or just admiring its prettiness. She ran around all over the apartment (even though there wasn't much a place to go, lol). It had 3 bedrooms, and a private bathroom to all of them (of course one was Maiko's room and the other was Eric's). As Kuki finally started to settle down a little bit, Maiko giggled to herself a little and went up to her cousin bending down to her length. "I have a surprise for you!!!!" she said excited just like kuki (must run in the family). Maiko put her hand on her cousins back and led her down a small hallway to a pink door. "Well, here it is"!!!! she said as happy as numbah 3 was when she first entered her apartment. "uhhhh..."numbah 3 said rubbing the back of her neck trying to sound as nice as possible. "uh,,,Maiko, it was really nice of you to get me a door and all but...and its a really nice color and all but...well...". Maiko held her gut laughing at her nieve cousin, "no, no" she said trying to get it out before she started laughing agian. "Open the door Kuki". Numbah 3 shrugged her shoulders and opened the hot pink door to the prettiest room she had ever saw! Rainbow monkey's everywhere!!! A Huge sleepytime rainbow monkey as her bed, posters, toys, fluffy pink everywhere!!!!!!!!!! Even the bathroom conected her room her a rainbow monkey pink shower curtan (sp) and with a pink bath tub and a Loveytime rainbow monkey contected to the matching sink, holding the bathroom mirror up!
Kuki was in a raibow monkey dream world!! She couldn't stand it!! Numbah 3 ran up to Maiko and gave her the biggest hug she had ever given anybody! Maiko hugged her right back. Niether of them noticed it was puring rain outside, All of a sudden the light flickered and there was a banging at the door, it wasn't any normal kind of banging, it was hard and rough, like BANG!!!!BANG!!!!!BANG!!!!!! Shivering in her cousins arms, Kuki whispered she was scared, Maiko said nothing and became really serious. She let go of her cousin and told numbah 3 to wait in her room. Up the hallway Maiko went to the door, she very slowly opened the door and saw a black shadow standing there, then there was a bolt of lighting behind the figure!!!!!!!!!!!
(end)...sike!
"mom" the figure said camly shivering from the cold and wet. "ERIC?!?!?"Maiko quickly grabed her son and pulled him into the house before bolting the door shut agian. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING WALKING IN THE MIDDLE OF A STORM?!?!?!!! Eric quickly gave his defence, " I called like a trillion times and you didn't answer the phone! Practice was canceled do to the storm"!! He said with his face still facing the ground."Thats no excuse, someone wouldv'e gave you a ride home if you asked for one!!!!" Maiko was disgusted in her sun at the moment " GO TO YOUR ROOM!!!!" she yelled, "Nanny May will be here in a few minutes," she siad to him while he was stomping to his room, "Kuki and I are going to get icecream, then shopping, you better be good for her!!". A frowne quickly came apon Eric's face, THATS NOT FAIR!!!! he thought to himself, then he put his ear agianst his bedroom door to here more. After not being able to here anything, he went up in one of the secret tunnels he built all around the house and stoped at a opening where he could see his step couisn run into his mothers arms and give her a huge hug!! "SHOPPING and ICECREAM"!!!!! Kuki said squeezing her cousin, "Your the best ever" Kuki said with a smile on bigger the mississippi river its self.
Maiko hugged her cousin before taking her baby cousins' hand and walking out the door and letting the nanny in. "Oh Kuki" Maiko said with a look of satisfaction on her face." I wish i had a kid as adorable and fun as you!". Those words hit Eric where it hurt. It wasn't fair!!! how was Kuki just gonna walk in and take his mom away like that. At first he thought it was gonna be cool to have numbah 3 staying with them but now he know's in his heart that she gonna be nothing but misery for him, it couldn't be like this all summer, he won't have...but just how will he get rid of the sponky rainbow monkey loving girl who would do anything for anybody? Just how was he gonna do it?...
(real end)
Sorry for not updating, i was really busy!!!!!!! Thanx for the reviews guys and sorry about last chap, i hope this one is much better and if not i''l just keep on trying!!! LOL!!!Please review the story guys, please!! i live off of reviews,lol!!!!