Numbah 2: Ok, You really need english lessons, there was soooo many mistakes in that story

I couldn't tell if you wrote it or a 5 year old!!!

Forever1x5: Aww give me a break, I was just writing off the top of my head...(frown)

Numbah 2: You need lessons, not a break!!!

Numbah 5: go easy on the girl would ya? She might go away for even longer this time (laughing)

KND: (laughing)

Forever1x5: haha...very funny, can we please get back to the story now please?

(story) Numbah 3 looked up in shock and heart was pounding. She didn't know whether to run or to stay still. Butch had a perfect shot point, but didn't take it. "i can't do it" he said to himself in a low voice. "Im sorry kuki" he said in a soft voice. Numbah 3 didn't know what to say, whether to be relieved that he didn't shoot or disapointed in her new friend for trying to shoot her in the first place. "Why Butch" she said in both meanings of the word, first why would he do a thing like that in the first place and second, why was he sorry or why did he have to be sorry. The big bully dropped his bow and arrow and ran up to Kuki and gave her a big hug." Butch...Butch...BUTCH"!!!! Kuki finally sad durning the massive hug, "i can't breathe, "Oh, sorry" he said instantly letting her go. "So, know, whats going on here?" Kuki said catching her breath then putting her hands on her hips. " Well i was paid to do it by your jealous step cousin". Numbah 3 thought about it for a long time before finally realizing who he was talking about, "ERIC?!?!?" she siad in amazement. "No one else but..." Butch said with his eyes laid on the grass. "I can't believe Eric would do something like this..." she said in serious confusion.

It was silent for a while with Butch facing Kuki and Kuki facing the ground. All of a sudden she just colasped in the beautiful flowers around her and started to cry. The sesitive bully let her cry trying to comfort her in her time of need but it was no use. "Kuki?" he said softly, " You have to get out of here". Not saying a word she looked up a him with her blood shot eyes to see what he was talking about but still silent. " Your cousin expects you to be half way home by now with the chicken pox, he wanted me to bring your camping pack to him as proof that you were sent home, The good news is i bullied this kid this morning who got so upset he ran back to his mom and dropped his pack on the ground, i grabed it for the extra stuff, but i'll give it to Eric so he won't think that your on still here". All this took Kuki by storm, when she came all she wanted to do was make friends and hang with her cousin Eric, little did she know he was gonna turn on her.

Even though Kuki hated the fact that Butch bullied the kid to get his pack, it was the only hope she had. Numbah 3 wiped her eyes before finally saying a word "but where do i go?". Butch already had a plan set out just for her, he's been on so many camping trips he knew just how to help her. "Eric is one of the most popular kids at school, no scratch that, Eric IS the most popular kid at school, thats why i can't bully him, so because of his rep, he'll be in the very front of the group with the other popular kids you know, Suzie Katelin, Malinda, Matt and Martin Marionette (tripplets), Courtney Lickin and Sydney Dutch and Tommy Hothorn, Eric's thier ring leader. So what your gonna do is go to the back of the group with the least popular kids, He won't have a clue you there!!" Butch looked to see Kuki heart broken in her cousin, "Don't worry Kuki" he said giving her a huge hug before running to the middle of the cluster of kids.

That night

Eric waits until his friends are sleep before sneaking out of his tent to meet Butch to see if the deed has been done. He runs to the big oak tree where they are to meet to see a the bully standing with his back agianst the huge tree with his arms crossed and the pack in one of his clenched fists. "Here, i did the stupid chicken pox thing and she went screaming to your mom, now when do i get my first payment?" Butch said as though he wasn't a big deal at all while adding a little extra toughness to his voice. "soon, as soon as the camping trips over, promise"."Better be" Butch siad before walking off and not looking to see if Eric was still standing by the tree or not. When he figured he was far enough away from the tree he sighed and prayed and hoped that Kuki was safe and ok...

Kuki made it all the way to the back by night fall and saw 4 tents in the darkness. She was kinda out of breath,k she didn't realize how many kids were there and how long it would take to get from the front of them all to the back. The tents were all diffrent colors, one was green and blue, the next was orange and yellow,another was pink and purple and the last was red and navy blue. She looked in all the tents and saw that there were two pillows in each, and not a person in sight. Then she noticed that one of the pillows in the green and blue tent looked like it hasn't been used yet, so she decided to sit in the tent and wait for whoever's tent that was to come back. It didn't take long before she was fast asleep.

Meanwhile at the Fishing Hole

"That was SOOOO much fun" Becka screamed in her usually perky voice. Everyone else had fun but were to tired to admit it. The seven friends were the bottom of the social chain at school. Dawn was wore black all the time and usually saw the worst in everything. Mike was a complete dork (he'll admit it himself) his glasses are huge, and he himself is really small, he also broke them last summer so he has this huge thing of tape in the middle of them and is constantly pushing them higher on his nose. Becka was a cheerleader back in the day who got kicked off the team for having a C in history and got shunned for it. Brad is constantly breaking something, whether its his arm, or leg, or hand or foot, somethings broken all the time.Then there were the twins Craig and Norma, Craig is scared of everything, he's the kind of kid where the phrase (scared of your own shadow) comes into play. And Norma is the total opposite, she's not afriad of anything, (and to tell the truth, thats pretty creepy).Last but not least theres Todd, and with Todd, there's nothing wrong with him, he's perfectly normal. He just thinks that the popular kids are jerks (which they are) and hangs out with his true friends (the so-called mission-nerd group).

Everyone was quite except for Becka who talked way back to the camp site. The seven were pooped and by the time they made it back to thier colorful tents they weren't even paying attention that they had a vistor. Becka and Norma went into thier tent, Craig and Brad went into thier tent, Mike and Todd went into thier tent and Dawn had a tent of her own, (or so she thought) and wasn't paying attention and laid down on the opposite pillow and her and Kuki were face to face before Dawn slowly opened her eyes and saw Kuki right face to face. "AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!" She screamed jumping up and taking the tent with her...

(end)

Sorry if theres alot of mistakes in this one i promise if there is the rest of the chapters will be mistake free!!! and theres only a few more left!!! hope you like the story!!!!!!!!!!