Authors note
It's come to my attention that I am apparently using too much swearing. They are supposed to be ooc, but because of what you all said I will tone it down. There will still be swearing because that's how I decided to make the characters.
If there is anything else that you have a problem with then tell me.
I've gone back and edited some of the swearing out. I hope this appeases the readers that had problems with it.
I will probably have Chapter 2 up tonight.
Ciao for now.