Hi everybody! Gomen, Gomen, Gomen! I know I havn't reviewd since like right after Christmas, but I have a good reason! I had a HUGE project due for my english honors clas. It took FOREVER! But I finished and I BETTER HAVE AN A+ 2! Lolz. Okay anyways. Enjoy the story guys!
Aishiteru, Hinata-chan
Chapter 15
Byakugan activated on instinct, I noticed Rumiko's father charging: swift and silent. My instinct took over again as I shoved Rumiko away before his hit could connect. Before he pulled away, I slapped my chakra-covered palm into his stomach, blowing him into the wall across the large room.
"Tomuro-nii-san hasn't moved. You go check on him and I'll hold your father off." My enhanced vision saw her nod and creep toward her fiancé while watching the old man stand up slowly.
"Ah, the Jyuuken. Such a graceful, yet deadly attack." His eyes softened a fraction. "Tsuki-chan was very talented. But," his green orbs took on that sickeningly evil light yet again, "I will focus on you for now, Hyuuga-san."
'Okay,' I thought. 'That is seriously creepy!'
Behind me, I could see Tomuro sitting up and looking at me with wide eyes. He tried to jump up and help but Rumiko held him down and began to heal him.
I did not get to monitor them long because the old man was coming yet again. This time, he was armed.
I countered his rusty kunai with a freshly sharpened one of my own.
'I 'm really gonna have to thank Ten-chan for these. They work great!'
He leapt back and pulled out 3 senbon. My bloodline could detect the deadly poison coating the small needles. He sprang forward, shooting the senbon accurately from his hands. I dodged them easily, but froze when I saw the behind me.
All three poison-coated senbon were suspended in mid-air, each pulsing with chakra. The old man made a hand sign and the needles started to duplicate. They then began to spin in a clockwise pattern.
"How do you like my Poison Needle Tornado technique?" He grinned and I glared. "Gomen, Hyuuga-san. But no one has ever lived through this attack. One scrape and you'll be dead in a minute. Maybe less if you move too much."
Suddenly all the senbon stopped spinning and all faced towards me. I looked at him, a plan already formulated in my mind.
He smiled, insane look in his eye still present. "Goodbye, Hyuuga-san." His fist closed, like Gaara Subaku when he performs his infamous Sand Coffin.
Every needle sped towards me, ready to pierce my skin. They would be here in 3, 2, 1…
"Kaiten!"
Using my own altered version of Neji's technique, I spun in an orb of light purple chakra. Unlike my cousin, whose Kaiten just bats away the opposite force, mine allows me to will the direction the object travels in and focus chakra to direct it with more strength. All the senbon were sailing, speed enhanced with chakra, toward my male opponent.
Eyes wide, he dived to the side, 4 needles barely missing his left arm and right cheek. He stood and faced the wall behind him, which was covered with senbon. When he looked at me again, a crazed grin lit up his face and he laughed heartily.
"Very, very good, Hyuuga-san! That was very impressive. Demo, I'm afraid I, Ryo Sanota, will be the only one leaving this room alive."
He opened his mouth to continue, but I was already moving. He hesitated or a second, and that second was all I needed. My chakra-laced fingers moved at a fast pace, sealing off his tenketsu, or chakra points. When he fell to the ground, I stepped back, satisfied.
After turning back to Rumiko and the newly healed Tomuro, I heard laughter behind me. I whipped around only to be punched into the opposite wall.
"You really thought that sealing my tenketsu would bring me down?" Laughter. "I have had that done to me many times over. Do you think I would not have found a way to overcome it?" He flexed his muscles ad added miniscule amounts of chakra into them. With my sharpened vision, I could clearly see the chakra points unlocking themselves.
With one last laugh, he charged at me, a newly drawn sword that had been unsealed from a seal hidden somewhere under his clothes. Like the senbon, this was coated in poison as well. But something struck me.
'I recognize this…! It looks just like the poison that infected Naruto-kun!'
Unfortunately for me, my leg was stuck under a stray plank of wood that had fallen when I hit the wall. As I noticed him closing in, tears came to my lavender eyes.
'Gomen, Naruto-kun.' I thought. 'I couldn't save you.'
My eyelids fluttered as I closed them, accepting that I had failed my mission and the pain that would come with it.
But the pain never came.
My eyes opened hesitantly, then snapped wide open.
Rumiko Sanota had grabbed the blade with her left hand, right forearm pressed against her father's neck.
"You. Will. Not." She growled.
He grinned. "Let us dance then, my daughter."
So... How did you like it? Was the fighting scene okay? I really need some (helpful) critisism please!
So now you guys know who Rumiko's father is. and don't worry, during their battle, more of her story will be revealed.
Oh! Before I forget, I need your votes for the order of my next stories.
A) A story where Naruto gets kidnapped and Hinata goes to save him.
B) A NaruHina and NejiTen Song Fic
C) A vampire/witch/shapeshifter fic series (ShikaIno, NaruHina, NejiTen, Kataang, BBRae, and Mokka)
D) A story where Naruto is exiled at age 10, Hinata follows, their best friend (an OC) goes after them. They meet up like 5 years later. Then they meet an old friend they thought was dead.
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So.. Thats pretty much it.
ja ne,
-Tsunei-chan
