Hey everyone! I'd like to write to someone very special who had the nerve to jump to conclusions about my story. To my reviewer, "Shiva-Chan" this goes out to you.
What's so wrong about writing a Kibahina fic, huh? Is it illegal to express my opinion about this couple? Like I said in "Admit It," I do not personally hate any characters or pairings. I do like Naruhina, but I just started to think about the possibility of Hinata ending up with Kiba. Does it really look like I hate Naruhina as so much to bash them? You don't see me making stupid remarks about them, do you? I'm not yelling, "NARUHINA IS GAY," or "KIBAHINA IS BETTER." So and so, I respect them as a pairing. They are cute together, I'll admit but I just really wanted to try a Kibahina fic.
Don't tell me I'm a Naruhina hater because you sound just like a hypocrite to hate on my story. You even had to go and call it useless, that's low. You're insulting everyone out there that actually likes Kibahina. I don't get why people need to be so irrational over things like this.
So maybe it does seem like I'm making Kiba bash on Naruto, it's part of my damn plot. Just relax. Think about it now; wouldn't someone who's madly in love be jealous if someone were trying to steal their special someone away from them? All of us can honestly say that we've said some mean things about people because of jealousy. I know I have, and I'm not too proud of it.
Sheesh, give me a break. I'm just a writer trying to get my ideas out of my head. No one asked you to open your mouth and say something bad. Haven't you ever heard your mama say, "If you have nothing nice to say, don't say it at all." I didn't pick a bone with you, did I? So why do you need to start shit like this. Can't us people who like Kibahina, just sit back and read without having to deal with this? Wow, people nowadays just don't have any manners.
Wanna fight back? Shut your mouth, I'm done with this shit. And I'm pretty damn sure everyone else who agrees with me is sick of arguing about this stuff. So let's just stop arguing about which is better and just enjoy what people come up with. It's up to Kishimoto-san about who ends up with Hinata anyway. Until then, we'll leave it to the imagination of fanfiction writers.
I'd also like to thank all my readers out there. You guys are amazing, without you I probably wouldn't continue writing this. I just really hope you're enjoying it so far. So please write a review if you have time. Thanks! :]
------On With The Story!-------
Hinata was rather nervous about her little walk with Naruto. She wanted to talk to him so badly, but didn't know where to start. The lavender-eyed girl cursed at herself internally for being so shy. Naruto noticed that she had stopped behind him and had begun to wonder what was wrong. Her face seemed to be even more red than usual, concerned he walked up to her.
"Your face is warm…" Naruto whispered. His face was mere inches away from hers; it wasn't helping Hinata much as she became even more flustered with the situation. "Are you feeling okay?"
Hinata merely fainted with embarrassment, but luckily Naruto was there to catch her. She began to feel bad for troubling him with her weaknesses, Hinata didn't really mean for it to turn out this way. But as shy as she was, she was trying her best to be comfortable around him so that she'd be able to confess her feelings to him.
"I-I'm fine. I'm sorry for troubling you Naruto-kun." Hinata bowed frantically while getting out of his grasp. "I'm just nervous…"
"Nervous?" He laughed at her reaction. "What for, we're just friends here. Don't worry; I'm not going to bite your head off or anything. Relax." Naruto patted her head while giving her a comforting smile. She seemed to ease a bit and even managed to smile back.
"I guess you're right…" Hinata giggled.
The two continued to keep walking, both enjoying each other's company. You could have mistaken them for being a couple with the way they were acting. Hinata wasn't blushing anymore or being shy. Naruto seemed to be having fun as well as they both engaged in a conversation about today's lesson.
"Man, the stuff Kakashi-sensei was talking about totally confused me." Naruto sighed. "I didn't understand any of it!"
Hinata nodded in agreement with him, "It was hard, but I did manage to catch on a little bit. Kakashi-sensei will probably go over it again tomorrow. I will try my best to understand it tomorrow."
"That's the spirit Hinata-chan. I will try my best as well!" Naruto said while taking her hand. "Let's pinky promise on it."
She smiled softly as her cheeks became lightly tinted with a peachy pink. "Okay." Hinata interlocked her pinky with Naruto as they both continued walking. I think… This is going to work out okay. Perhaps… We'll both fall in love and live happily ever after. She thought.
"This is your house right?" Naruto asked while pointing to one of the white houses. The lawn was very well taken cared of, the flowers were so beautiful. It looked like something out of a fairytale.
Hinata nodded as she realized that they were in fact right in front of her house. "I guess this is goodbye then. I'll see you tomorrow, Naruto-kun."
"I had fun, we should walk home together more often. Bye Hinata-chan, see you tomorrow." Naruto waved as he continued walking down the street.
Hinata stood at her doorstep watching his retreating back. Taking a deep breath she whispered into the wind, "Goodbye, my love…" With that being said she opened the door into her house with a strong feeling that she forgot something. But Hinata was too happy to even care, she finally got a chance to talk to Naruto without embarrassing herself or something of that sort. She was proud of herself for not being shy and that she had gotten farther than she ever thought possible. "I'm glad that he encouraged me to stop being so shy… Naruto-kun is so nice…"
---Some Place Near the Park---
I looked up at the pink sky and noticed the sun was setting and took another deep breath. Finally, the day was ending. But I wasn't too happy about it, I lost to Naruto. I couldn't believe that I'd just run away from my feelings like that… What was hiding it going to prove, nothing that's what. But even if I did try… What would she do? Would she run away from me, avoid me, or even hate me? I didn't even stop to consider her feelings. This made me even more afraid to tell her. I really didn't know how to love someone… Heh, maybe Naruto was better than me at this. Hinata deserves only the best… Right?
At that last thought I felt my heart just break. If she was happy, then I should be just fine. No matter how much times I told myself, I knew I could never be happy if she was with him. I belonged by her side, the way it always was when we were small. I was the one to pick her up whenever she fell down, protect from her the kids that used to pick on her because of her light eyes, I was always there no matter what. But now that we're in high school I guess it can't stay the same forever. We're growing up and she's becoming more independent as each day passes. She was bound to spread her wings and find someone else to love. It's a pity it can't be me… I envy the man who ever ends up with her. He's damn lucky.
Suddenly, it started raining. "I guess this tells me my luck really has run out." Leaning back against the bench, I chuckled mockingly at myself while glancing up into the dark cloudy sky.
---Back at Hinata's House---
Knocking interrupted Hinata as she was sitting down enjoying the warmth of her fireplace. "I wonder who that could be at this hour?" The dark haired girl asked herself. Cautiously she approached the door but was reassured when she heard Kiba's sister's voice. Hinata opened the door to find a worried Hana.
"Is Kiba here?" The young woman asked while looking past Hinata's shoulder. "He hasn't been home since school." Hinata just nodded her head no.
"Oh… Okay…" Hana eyes dimmed at her reply, she was gravely worried about her little brother's whereabouts. "I'll be going now, thanks anyway Hinata-chan."
"Hana-san, I'll go look for him. I think I know where he is." Hinata said while running after her, "Don't worry. I'll find him, promise."
The young women tried to stop Hinata saying that it was far too dangerous for a girl like her to be out at a time like this. But the petite girl argued back not backing down. She already had an idea that Kiba would indeed be at the park at their little secret hideout. They would always go there whenever Hinata would get picked on for her lavender eyes. Kiba always came to the rescue and pulled her away, he was always there to protect her. No matter what, he was always there. Hinata was grateful to have him as a friend, she didn't know where she'd be if he wasn't there throughout their childhood. Hinata just smiled while remembering everything that happened in the past. Hana watched as Hinata grabbed an umbrella from the front door and headed out onto the streets, she figured there was no use in stopping her. When Hinata made up her mind, she would go through with it a hundred and ten percent. "You don't want me to come?" The young women asked. Hinata just nodded, "I need to talk to him about something… Don't worry I'll be fine."
With that, she left Hana with a smile leaving the young woman bewildered.
---The Secret Hideout---
"Shit, it's really coming down." I said while hiding under the roof of the old shack I remembered about when we were young. "I guess I'm really not going home."
I didn't mind not being able to go home, Hinata would have been there anyway. She'd probably ask why I lashed out in class… I'm not exactly one to be great with words; I'd probably come out with a half assed excuse that would make it so obvious. Then what would I do then? I'd be turned to ashes because my own body heat would incinerate me out of embarrassment. At least if I did some how disappear everyone would forget about me and move on. But life wasn't that easy, either way it was going to come out one way or another. Whether I liked it or not, she needed to know how I felt about her or else my head was going to explode. But where would I start?
The creaking sound of the old hinge interrupted me as I froze in my position; a flash of lighting suddenly appeared out of nowhere. A loud bang of unexpected thunder made me jump, I felt a little uneasy as I saw a figure come running toward me. "Kiba-kun!" A familiar voice cried out as a small body landed onto me. Child like hands grasped at my shirt, trembling slightly. "I-I'm scared…" The thundered sounded again as Hinata clung on to me even tighter. My arms slowly wrapped themselves around her petite body, gently cradling her in my arms like I always would. I felt at ease as we sat there, no like I wanted to complain about this. I was pretty damn lucky to be holding her like this now. I just wish this would last forever…
"Sh… Don't worry Hinata-chan." I whispered while running my hands through her smooth locks. Instantly her grip on my shirt loosened, that trick always worked. Whenever she'd cry I was always the one she'd come to… "It's okay, I'm with you. I'll protect you, don't worry."
"Kiba-kun…" Hinata mumbled against my chest.
"Don't say anything… Let's just stay like this…"
Forever…
----To Be Continued----
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Hey guys! Sorry that the update took so long and that it probably sucked. x-x It's just that school has been killers lately… Stupid projects, tests, and quizzes. D;
I am really sorry if you didn't enjoy this chapter. I am not good with certain types of scenes. As you can see in the first part, I suck at doing Naruhina!
Probably because this is after all a Kibahina fic. I swear I'm not doing it on purpose!
Well, I'll see you all in the next chapter.
