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Double Trouble Chapter 3
About a half hour later, Laura passed where I was sitting on the bridge, reading. She came over to me.
"Hey," she said.
"Hi." I replied.
"Whatcha readin'?"
I held up the book so she could see the title.
"A Farewell to Arms. I had to read that for school once. It was really boring, so I didn't finish it."
"Cool," I said. "Your sister doesn't like Hemmingway either."
"Who?"
"Hemmingway. The author."
"Ohh right," she said, giving a little laugh. "So," she continued. "You know my sister?"
"Yup."
"She seems kinda boring, don'tcha think?"
I looked up sharply. "Rory's not boring."
"Oh?"
"She just isn't loud and annoying like some people."
"Like who?"
"You, for starters."
"Me? Why?"
"Can't you tell I'm trying to do something?"
"Yeah, but I wanted to talk to you."
"And that's what makes you annoying."
"Fine. If I'm bothering you so much, I'll leave."
"Fine."
"See you around."
"Whatever."
She walked away. I had no idea where she was going, nor did I care. About fifteen minutes later, Rory came by. I was kind of into the book, and I didn't really want any interruptions, but an interruption from Rory usually made me feel better.
"Hey," she said as she walked over.
"Hi," I replied.
"Am I interrupting something?" she asked. At least she was considerate.
"No," I said.
"Okay. Then can I sit with you?"
"Sure."
"What are you reading?" she asked.
I held up the book for her to see, just like I had for Laura.
"Eww, Hemmingway," she said, making a face. But she was only joking. She didn't like Hemminway, but I knew that she would never purposely try to be mean to someone.
"What's wrong?" I heard myself asking.
"Nothing," she said, but I didn;t believe her. I gave her this face that seemed to say, yeah, right and she started talking. I think she really needed someone to talk to, because she probably wouldn;t choose to come to me when she needed cheering up. I'm not exactly the best conversationalist. (A.N..is that a word?)
"It's just...Dean's kinda pulling away."
"Oh," I said. I couldn't really help her with that subject for two reasons. 1 I would be pretty happy if Dean broke up with her. He was an ass and he didn't deserve her, and 2 Boyfriend talk is my worst subject.
But I needed to say something, because she seemed to be waiting. "Break up with him, Rory."
"What? Why?"
"He doesn't deserve you."
"But I love him."
"Then I dont know, Rory. Why did you come to me about this?"
"Well, that's not all."
"Then why else?"
"Cos Laura came. And she's not being very nice to anyone, especially my mom."
"What do you want me to do about it?"
"Talk to her?"
"Why me?"
"Because, you;re the only person that she seems to like."
I sighed. "Fine Rory," I said. But in my head I thought, anything for you.