Ok so I wasn't too thrilled with this one but I was happy with what I got to put in it. Feedback please because I need a confidence boost on this one. Here's chapter 5-3 guys after this there is 2 more parts to the bungalow.
I do not own Hollywood Heights or any of its characters.
Chapter 5-3
The next morning, it was 7 o' clock in the morning when Loren woke up on the couch next to Eddie with his arm around her and her head on his shoulder. She carefully unwrapped herself from Eddie's arm and got up and went to rinse her face, and brush her teeth then got changed into some tight black sports leggings, a hot pink sports bra and some hot pink and black Adidas sneakers and decided she'd go for a run until Eddie woke up to get some thinking done and calm herself down after her mental break down last night. She usually went for a run every morning for about 3 miles to stay in shape, that's how she looks as good as she does while eating whatever she wants but she also has a trainer who she sees once a week. She strapped her I-Phone to her arm and put some head phones in and turned her music all the way up and then she left Eddie a note, just in case he woke up and saw that she wasn't there. She ran out the door. At about 9 o'clock Eddie woke up and was surprised Loren wasn't next to him then he looked at the note Loren left him.
The Note- "Morning Eddie, don't be scared, I'm not crying on the beach somewhere. (Eddie laughed at the fact that she knew what he was thinking all the time yet she always surprised him) I just went for a few mile run, I should be back in about an hour and half or so and it's 7:30 AM right now. Feel free to do or eat whatever you want, and when I get back I'll make breakfast –Loren"
Eddie smiled at how thoughtful she was to leave a note. He washed his face and brushed his teeth and then started thinking.
(Eddies thoughts) Wow, she wakes up at 7:00 and goes running, no wonder her body is so damn fit and just, well, perfect. And she makes it sound like it's nothing that she's running 3 miles at 7 in the morning. I don't even think I could run more than 1, especially at 7 o' clock in the morning. Once again I'm in awe at how much of fighter Loren is. When I broke up with Chloe, I didn't leave my house for 2 weeks and I wrote a bunch of sappy love songs which made no sense. Loren cries for a second and is back to her old self just like that. I don't think it's her first time running then, so I don't think there's anything to worry about like seeing her break down again and honestly I think that's just the kind of person she is, she doesn't like to show vulnerability and when she does, she brushes it off and just keeps going. Last night, I never thought I would see her be so vulnerable and it kills me that she was like that but at the same time, I'm sort of happy I was able to comfort her and actually be able to get through to her. I feel oddly closer to her. But I honestly never want to see another tear drop out of those big beautiful brown eyes ever again. (Eddie's thoughts are interrupted when he sees a very sweaty Loren walk in breathing heavily, in a pink sports bra and tight leggings and he is literally speechless about how sexy Loren looks right now)
Loren was opening the fridge now, and as she grabbed a bottle of water and shut the fridge, she noticed Eddie was up and staring at her. She took her head phones out.
Loren: Oh hey Eddie, when did you wake up?
Eddie:… (Eddie was now having a day dream about what he and Loren could do while she is in that outfit)
Loren: Eddie! (she screamed)
Eddie: Huh? What?
Loren: What is wrong with you?
Eddie: Oh, I'm sorry, Loren, so you went for a run? (he just kept looking her up and down)
Loren had just realized why Eddie was staring at her, and she forgot she was wearing a sports bra, but she'd done swim suit magazines before and photo shoots where she was wearing even less than a swim suit so she didn't really understand why Eddie even cared but she could tell it was driving Eddie crazy because he couldn't take his eyes off of her.
Loren: Yup, I got 4 good miles out of it. (she said proudly)
Eddie: Yeah, I could tell. (Eddie said still in shock)
Loren: Eddie, I have done editorials before, where I was barely wearing anything and I'm wearing a sports bra and you look like your eyes are about to be glued to the same spot forever. What's the big deal?
Eddie: Well Loren, I don't really like reading magazines or tabloids but maybe I should start and plus it's probably nothing like the real thing. (he said while tilting his head and looking behind her at her ass)
Loren started to laugh and while Eddie was tilting his head, she slapped him in the back of the head.
Eddie: (Eddie rubbed the back of his head) Ow… That hurt Loren! (he pouted cutely)
Loren: You know you deserved it!
Eddie: So do you run every day because you just made 4 miles sound like a cake walk?
Loren: Yup almost every day. It relaxes me and it helps me get my frustrations out if I'm upset or nervous, it calms me down and I get to stay in shape too.
Eddie: Uh Loren, I think you have THE tightest body I have ever seen on anyone in my entire life!
Loren: (she chuckled and blushed) Are you going to start drooling now Eddie?
Eddie: No! (he sort of blushed) Do you wake up at 7 am every day too?
Loren: Sometimes 7, sometimes 8, it varies.
Eddie: (his mouth was open) Wowwwww…
Loren: (she chuckled) Ok, Eddie, how do you stay in shape?
Eddie: I see my trainer like once or twice a week and I try to work out about 5 times a week. Do you have a trainer?
Loren: Explains the arms. (She looked at his biceps and blushed) yeah I have a trainer but I only see him once a week.
Eddie: Thanks, I do my best to stay fit. (he said while flexing his arms) Well anyways your trainer is one lucky bastard if he gets to see you in that every week. (he gestured to her outfit, Loren blushed again)
Loren: Well, I was going to say we could go swimming today but since seeing me in this is that overwhelming to you, I don't even know how you'll react when you see me in my stringing two piece bikini that I brought, so maybe we'll just stay in for the day, and you are staying till tom. Right? (She gave him a sexy smile and pouty face to get him to stay another night, because she didn't want to be alone, she thought sad thoughts when she was alone and Eddie is very comforting and distracting and he honestly looked like he was about to attack her right then and there, and she knew he was going to give in)
Eddie: (Now he was picturing Loren in a bikini but then he heard her say she wanted him to stay another night, he snapped out of it) Well first of all, WE ARE GOING SWIMMING TODAY, regardless as to if I'm staying another night or not! (Loren chuckled) Second of all Loren, are you sure you don't want to be alone because I could leave. You don't have to be nice. (He was hoping she wasn't just being nice)
Loren: Oh my gosh Eddie, I am not just being nice. I really do want you to stay please! (she gave him puppy dog eyes and he was finished)
Eddie: ok ok… fine, I'll stay (Eddie said with a fake hesitant voice, Loren jumped into Eddies arms and gave him a hug)
Loren whispered: Thank you! (Eddie was just holding on to her sweaty body and sliding his hand up and down her back and when she let go he put his hands on her waist)
Eddie: (in a flirty tone) You should probably put your bikini on now (he winked)
Loren took Eddies hand off her waist and said: I don't know if you could handle it… (she said sexually and winked, now she was the one teasing him, and she realized why he loved to tease her. Because it was fun, and her reason was she loved to watch him squirm)
All of the sudden, Eddie put his hands on Loren's bare hips and pulled her so close that not even air could pass between them. Their faces were only inches apart.
Eddie: Oh, I think I could handle it… (he said in a low sexy voice as he rubbed his hands up and down her waist)
(Eddies thoughts) Ha! 2 can play at this game.
Loren was honestly breathless, so she decided to show what she showed best and that was her ass. Because she was not going to lose, she was always very competitive. (she slipped out of his embrace carefully and shifted her body so that his hands were lingering on her butt, and she turned and winked.)
Loren: I guess I'll be right back (she said as she strutted off to her bed room with Eddie checking her out as she walked away.)
Eddie: (he was tilting his head looking at Loren's ass as she walked away) Dammmmmnnnn, I am so in over my head with this girl. (he needed a cold shower, she drove him crazy)
Eddie had put on swimming trunks and some sun glasses and was waiting for Loren in the living room. She walked out with a stringy beige bikini top with a tiny gold bow in the middle and a beige bathing suit cover covering only her bathing suit bottoms which were also stringy with two little gold bows holding them together. Eddies mouth gaped open to the point where he had to stop himself from drooling. Loren chuckled at the look on Eddie's face.
Loren: (she began to speak in a flirty tone as she shut Eddies mouth by pushing up his jaw with her hand) So… Can you handle it rock star?
Eddie: Uh… I uh… What? (he snapped out of it) Lets just go to the beach Loren! (he said flustered with himself, while Loren chuckled again)
They walked outside to the beach
Loren: I'm going to lay out for a little bit and I made some BLT's if we get hungry.
Eddie smiled at how Loren knew his favorite sandwich and wondered when the hell she made sandwiches because she went and changed. She is total perfection in his eyes.
Eddie: When did you make sandwiches (he chuckled)
Loren: Well, it doesn't take me that long to put on a bikini Eddie and when I was done you weren't done yet so I fried up some bacon and made some sandwiches then packed them up with some potato chips and some left over macaroni and cheese from yesterday and some drinks and that was that so I went back to my room.
Eddie: Loren, how do you do it? (he got down on his knees on the sand and signaled for Loren to sit)
Loren: Do what? (she smiled, and took off her bathing suit cover revealing just how revealing her bikini bottoms were and just how nice her ass was and Eddie's mouth fell wide open as Loren laid on her stomach next to where Eddie was kneeling)
Eddie:…
Loren looked up at Eddie and noticed exactly where he was looking and she started to blush.
Loren: uh, Eddie? Finish what you were saying before you got distracted (she chuckled)
Eddie: (Eddie snapped out of it) Loren, how do you do what you did. Everything you do causes me to become speechless, your body, how fast you do things, how motivated you are, how strong you are, how down to earth you are, how sexy you are, how amazing you are, how you- (before he could finish rambling, Loren was up from the sand and on her knees in front of Eddie starting to kiss him, and as soon as Eddie felt Loren's lips on his, he kissed right back.)
The kiss started out soft and sweet but then turned passionate. It was the most electrifying kiss either one of them had ever experienced in their lives.
Eddie was now on top of Loren on the beach, letting his hands wander all over her perfect tan body. It had been ten minutes and they both decided that they needed to come up for some air, and Eddie was still on top of Loren but hovering over her with one hand rubbing her waist and the other by her head to keep from falling on her, and his fore head against hers, and her hands on his cheek and chest. He couldn't believe how amazing it felt to finally have kissed her. He was the first one to speak.
Eddie: (still trying to catch his breath) Loren, you have no idea how long I have wanted to kiss you.
Loren: (she's trying to catch her breath too) Eddie we have known each other for three weeks, how long could you have possibly wanted to kiss me for?
Eddie: Since we met, but I wanted to kiss you first… (he blushed a little, and pouted)
Loren: (Loren smiled and pecked his pout away) aw why didn't you then?
Eddie: (Eddie sat up and pulled Loren into his lap and they faced the ocean) You just got out of a relationship and I didn't know if u felt the same way and I don't know, I guess I was a little intimidated by how amazing you are and- (Loren Interrupted his rambling by turning her head around and kissing him again but this time it was sweet and innocent)
Loren: (Loren pulled out of the kiss) For what it's worth Eddie, I honestly think that you are the sweetest and most sincere and let's not forget sexy guy I have ever met and I have been wanting to kiss you too. And it doesn't matter to me who kissed who first as long as we kissed, and anyways you leaned into it too and you saw it coming so technically we kissed at the same time because you didn't even hesitate to lean in (she blushed)
Eddie: (They were still facing the ocean with Loren's head turned looking up at Eddie and Eddie's arm wrapped around Loren's waist and stomach.) Loren, have you looked in a mirror lately? Of course I leaned into it right away! You're so damn gorgeous and sweet, it was hard to contain myself, even when you were in a relationship, we were flirting the whole time and you know it! Then when you weren't in one anymore, you decided to drive me even crazier! You, Loren Madsen, are going to be the death of me! (he laughed)
Loren: (she turned her body and got really flirty and cupped Eddies face with her hands while straddling his waist and putting her fore head with his while his hands were on her thighs and basically her butt) Aw poor baby… (She whispered as she rubbed his chest)
Eddie did the only thing he could think of to Loren because she was torturing him like this, which was putting Loren on his shoulder and walking to the water
Loren was giggling: Eddie put me down!
Eddie: Not a chance babe!
Eddie walked into the water with a screaming Loren and threw her in the water
Loren: Eddie! I am going to kill you! (she screamed)
Eddie: I'm sorry, I didn't hear you, did you say you wanted to kiss me? (he chuckled)
Loren dunked Eddies head in the water and he went under water and grabbed Loren's waist and then started to tickle her.
Loren: (she couldn't breathe, she was laughing so hard) Eddie… stop… I'm dying!
Eddie came out from under the water and pulled Loren close to him by her waist.
Eddie: (he looked into her eyes) Say you're sorry for teasing me and dunking my head into the water or I'll tickle you again!
Loren: (she was still trying to catch her breath) OK… OK… I am soooo sorry now let go of me- (she was interrupted by Eddie kissing her)
Eddie and Loren's kiss started getting intense but Loren pulled away before too much happened, she smiled and told Eddie she was going to go write some songs on the beach for a little bit, she pecked him on the cheek and went. She then went back and they swam together for a while and kissed a couple times and played in the water. Loren really did like Eddie and he really liked her too but Loren wasn't really sure if she could trust her feelings yet after her break up and Eddie sort of knew Loren didn't want to talk about them being together just yet so for the time being he was fine with how things were. They ate lunch and were done at the beach for the day, so they went back and took showers and got all comfy and ordered take out. Loren and Eddie raced to the door when the door bell rang thinking it was take out and both wanted to pay for the food but Eddie made it first and was shocked by what he saw at the door and it definitely wasn't take out…
Ok so you guys finally got your LEDDIE kiss and as much as I didn't want to rush into it, I couldn't, I just had to put it in there, because it was right in front of me! Lol I love you guys and thank you so much for all your feed back! What did you guys think and be honest please!
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