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Entry 17:

Something just isn't right

Stella watched the TV on which was a news report about the missing girls. Their number had increased.

'Something just isn't right.' she thought and looked at Kyubey. 'Why do I have a feeling he has something to do with it?'

'I'm not responsible for the dissapearance of the girls.' replied Kyubey. 'You humans should really learn to better watch out for yourselves.'

Stella ignored him coldly.

"So, that would mean I can too become a Magical Girl?" Sachi asked Asuna.

"No, you can't. This job is too dangerous." said Asuna. The two were walking through the city and talking.

"Hey, Asuna-san!"

Asuna turned around and saw Yuri and Yumi coming.

"Helo Yuri-san, helo Yumi-chan." she said, greeting them.

"Have you watched the news report?" asked Yuri.

"No, why?" asked Asuna.

"A girl again dissapeared. From our town." said Yumi.

"This is really bad. What if someone kidnaps them and sells them as slaves? I don't want to even think about it!" said Asuna.

"The main targets are teenagers. Girls between 11 and 19." said Yuri.

"Maybe it was a Witch whose target are girls?" asked Yumi.

"It could be." said Yuri.

Yukio opened the door after he heared the rung of the doorbell. It surprised him that it was Stella.

"I need to talk to Kaen-san." she said.

"Okay." Yukio nodded and let her in.

I just came out of the kitchen and saw Stella coming into the room.

"Hi, Stella-san. What brings you here?" I asked.

"You said that you found something strange about the Witches." she said.

"Yes." I nodded. "When I entered Charlotte and Elly's Barriers there were notes about wishes. It was strange, since Kyubey told me Witches are born from curses, but Puella Magi's are born from wishes."

"I see." Stella replied. "Did you watch the news?"

"We did. Girls all over the place are dissapearing." Yukio jumped into the conversation. "Do you think there might be a Witch who makes them dissapear?"

Stella shrugged.

"There might be a connection." she said. She then turned to me and bowed. "Thanks for the information."

She then walked out.

"But, wait..." I sweatdropped. She was already out.

'Yuri, Yumi, Asuna. I found a Grief Seed.'

The four girls turned to Kyubey.

"A Grief Seed? It's not a Witch this time?" asked Yumi. Kyubey nodded. Yuri smiled.

"Well, at least we don't have to fight. Lead us to it." she said.

'This way.' Kyubey replied and they followed him.

They had to walk for a longer while, till they reached the power plant outside the town.

"There is it!" exclaimed Sachi and went over to the Grief Seed to pick it up. It had marks which looked like the lily of the valley.

Suddenly, it started to glow and everyone got engulfed by the Barrier.

"A trap!" Yuri exclaimed.

Sachi looked in horror at the witch in front of her. The witch's body had a lily of the valley design winding around it and she looked similiar to the Nebra Sky Disk. Her Barrier contained several raised platforms, with the girls standing each on a different one, as well as a a meadow, filled with butterflies and flowers.

She was Plejaden von Asunaro and her nature was sisterly love.

Yuri, Yumi and Asuna quickly transformed and Asuna brought her sister outta harms way. Yuri and Yumi attacked Plejaden.

Yumi jumped highly and wanted to smash with her hammer at Plejaden, but was stopped by the disks which the Witch launched at her. They were sharp and hit Yumi, cutting her at several places. One of them drilled right into her heart.

"Gahh..." There was a sound of blood spilling and Yumi fell, with blood coming out of her body.

"Yumi!" Yuri yelled as she, Asuna and Sachi watched it in shock.

Yuri then gritted her teeth and directed all her rage at Plejaden.

"Hateshiganai Yoarashi!"

It was over even before it begun. However, Yuri unintetionaly used too much magic. But she didn't care. She didn't care about anything but Yumi, who was now like a little sister for her.

She ignored the falling Grief Seed and went to her.

"Yumi, p-please, speak to me!" she held Yumi's hand as Asuna and Sachi apporached them. Sachi was crying.

'Why are you so upset? She won't die. Her Soul Gem is still intact.'

The three heared Kyubey talking. Yuri turned to him.

"How do you mean it?" she asked.

'She has enough magic left to heal her wounds. A Magical Girl can fight even if she has no blood in her body, since the body is nothing more then a tool of the SG.' said Kyubey.

"What do you want to say?" asked Asuna.

'You really have problems to accept the truth. Imagine the body as a doll, a willless doll. Dolls need to be controled and the SG is the one who controls your body. Yumi isn't the body but the Soul Gem.' said Kyubey.

Asuna and Yuri stared at him in shock. Now she realized why the gems were called Soul Gems.

"You mean, our souls are in the Soul Gems? We're just zombies?" asked Yuri.

'Sorta.' said Kyubey. 'See, her wounds are healing.'

Yuri, Asuna and Sachi looked at Yumi, whose wounds slowly dissapeared. Yuri grew slowly angry.

"Why didn't you tell us before?" she asked Kyubey angrily.

'Why should I?' asked Kyubey. 'You wanted a wish, I granted your wish. I did warn you about the burden of being a Puella Magi.'

"You never told me we're gonna become zombies!" Yuri yelled at him.

'Why are humans so touchy regarding their souls? It would be really unconvenient if your soul was inside your body while you were fighting.' said Kyubey. 'As long your soul is inside the SG and it is still intact, you will be able to survive even the worst wounds.'

Yuri gritted her teeth.