Hey, never thought I'd update this, but I'd like to address a reviewer:

I am writing this the way that I see the characters, and I am not making it every single thirteen year old, just Hazel, and after what Hazel had been threw, she would be set back a few years. Everyone would. Also, in this I was pro no hate for Piper, but in the context of this particular story, I felt like I wanted to make Piper more mature.

Also, I really am not trying to make Hazel immature. I used the word "Child" because it was from Piper's POV, and in the books, that also seems how she looks at her. I assure you that I am not calling children that age immature, or anything of the sort. I wrote this when I was very bad at writing, and I was also eleven at the time, so really, I assure you that I was not trying to offend anyone, because I was actually younger than Hazel. I'm sorry I offended you, but really, I didn't mean to. But I will say I totally know how you feel. I'm thirteen now. I didn't mean to write it in a way that would offend anyone, and sorry it came off that way.

Coffee.