Or should I end it, 'cause I don't get many reviews like other people, is my story bad or somethin'? I'm trying to make it the best, but I don't think I'm doing it right. And I running out of ideas.
So, please, PLEASE, review, if you think I should continue on with this story, okay?
Sasuke- This story is shit.
Oh, who asked you Sasuke? You know, just for that, I'm going to make someone die in this chapter.
Sasuke- (Eyes widen) Bu-
THE DISCLAIMER SOMEONE!
Kisame- Lin-chan does not, and I repeat, DOES NOT, own Naruto. Let's just leave that to the all mighty Masashi Kishimoto, alright?
(Gai-sensei runs in out of no where) I'm Might Gai!
Kisame- Might Gai, eh? Mighty stupid looking guy.
Oh, how I love that phrase. I saw it on an episode of Naruto. It was one of my favorite episodes!
ON WITH THE STORY NOW PLEASE!
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THE AKATSUKI HEADQUARTERS
SAKURA'S POV
I woke up to find out that someone was sleeping right next to me, and VERY close, might I add. So, I did what any sensible person would do in my situation. I screamed. Loud.
That efficiently woke up whoever was next to me, and made them fall out of my bed, and land very ungracefully on their butt, on the cold, hard floor. I felt so proud.
At that very moment, I noticed the person was none other than, Madara, who was sleepily glaring at me, while putting on mask, muttering something or the other about waking him up, and the Akatsuki bust down my door.
"WHAT HAPPENED?" Everyone screamed, looking around my room with wide eyes. They looked down and saw Madara (With his mask on!) on the floor. They all glared at him. "Tobi..." Hidan said angrily cracking his knuckles.
"T-Tobi's a good boy?" Tobi said sheepish-ly. "Your gonna die, you little shit!" Hidan roared and lunged at him. Shikamaru used his shadow technique to hold him back, mumbling, "Troublesome..."
He held him like that until he calmed down some, and everyone focused on staring at me. I blinked. I looked down at my broken door that had flew off the hinges when they busted it down.
"You guys are totally paying for that." I said nonchalantly. Kakuzu simply walked out the room mumbling something about dramatic women and their money blowing ways.
I snickered under my breath, and everyone cleared out so I could get dressed. I pulled on some black jeans, and a pastel pink tank top, while putting on a hoodie, hiding my weapons well.
I made my way down stairs, and entered the kitchen and everyone looked up at me. I spun around and everyone nodded. I grinned, and grabbed an apple off the counter. I had somehow been eating more these days. Akatsuki is healthy.
My eyes widened in realization and I said, "Oh, shoot, I forgot something in my room, I'll be right back, okay?" Everyone nodded. I raced up to my room, to get my drawing pad. I had forgot I was gonna draw today! 'Stupid...' Inner said, shaking her head.
Oh, shut up, I forget alot of things. I looked around for my drawing pad, and picked it up along with my pencil. Under it was a note, and I lifted an eyebrow. A note?
I picked up the note and began to read it. My eyes widened as I read the tiny piece of paper. I began to shake, and I let out a scream as I fell to my knees. I hugged my knees tight, and everyone ran into my room.
"Sakura? What's wrong, un?" Deidara said, running over to my shaking form. He wrapped his arms around me and said, "It's okay, it's okay, un." I thrust the piece of paper into his face, and he quieted.
"You guys have to read this, un." He said in a dead voice, and got up, picking me up bridal style. He balanced me on one arm, and gave the note to Pein, and began to rock me back and forth in his arms.
"Oh, no." Konan gasped. Itachi and Madara began to growl. "Fuck," Hidan hissed. "That little piece of shit!" Pein hissed, and he slammed his fist on the wall.
I began to cry and sob hard. "Sh, sh, un." Deidara tried to shush me. Shikamaru came over and began to pet my hair. I began to quiet, and I slowly slipped into unconciousness.
PEIN'S POV
I watched through narrowed eyes as Deidara tucked Sakura into her bed. I can't believe he would go this far. I didn't think that snake could get any worse.
Orochimaru's been trying to destroy the Akatsuki, but I didn't think he would go this far. That stupid piece of shit. He's obviously been doing some spying.
Trying to figure out our weak points, hit us where it hurts. And apparently he went for our hearts this time. I began to walk out the room, motioning for everyone to follow me.
When we got to the living room, everyone sat down and looked up at me. I looked into each and every one of their eyes. I began to speak.
"This has gone far enough. We are to plan an attack on the Village of Sound immediatly. Orochimaru is to be killed, along with anyone who tried to get in the way. This will be a hard battle, so we'll have to gather up the villages we're on good terms with, and tell them of our intentions. Whatever happens though, when Sakura wakes up, she will be told that of what we're planning, and also tol she cannot fight. I won't allow her to get hurt. Someone will be guarding her at all times, to make sure Orochimaru will not go straight for her. I will tell each of you what postion you'll be in when I plan everything out. Yo keep fighting, no matter what happens, okay?" I said seriously.
Orochimaru is a sick man, and he will be stopped. Sakura may not like it, but she will not fight the snake bastard. Oh no, I think that pleasure should go to Madara.
I think I should be the one guarding her, as I am the second strongest. We don't want her getting hurt now, do we?
This time, Orochimaru. You'll be going down.
MEANWHILE IN KONOHA
SASUKE'S POV
I can't take it anymore. She was my life. Right now, it's around 3 in the morning, and I'm swinging my legs off the bridge of where Team 7 used to meet.
Those were the good days, when not much mattered, but catching cats, and Sakura flirting. Why didn't I ever accept her offers? Oh, right, I was hellbent on killing my brother.
But now that I know that he was ordered to do it... I want to accept those offers of dates... I didn't know those offers had a deadline.
What did I expect, that Sakura would be waiting for me with open arms? Yeah, I expected her to do that. I didn't expect her to be broken.
I wanted to be the one to fix her, not those Akatsuki bastards. Konoha caught wind that Sakura AND Shikamaru joined the Akatsuki.
And apparently Orochimaru's after the Akatsuki, as well. I didn't want to deal with this anymore. Life sucked. I looked over the edge of the bridge into the deep, murky waters.
Sakura... I love you.
And with that final thought, I let loose all my breath, and jumped. I sunk under the cold water, as my lungs gasped for air, but got water instead.
I'm sorry, Sakura. I still love you.
I began to sink farther into the water, and I felt the darkness taking over.
Didja like it? I worked super hard on this.
Is Sasuke really dead? I don't know. Find out in the next chapter of...
WE'LL FIX YOU!
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