hey everyone I know there is a lot of y'all and all that in there that's because that's what I am used to nothing else looks right and I use spell check because I'm not the best at spelling and I really don't understand where to put comma's and to tell the truth I don't like using them because I will put them in the wrong place. the characters do act a little different because I have written after work (was really tired) and I've lost chapters some how. so I've re-wrote them not remembering what I put in the first one. I'm sorry about all the mistake's and them acting different. I will try to look over things more carefully. thanks for all the reviews y'all! :)