Discord struggled to fix his bowtie. He hated wearing clothes, but he wanted to look good for Fluttershy. It was his first time going to a dance, he always stayed home alone, no friends, just him and his shadow. Speaking of my shadow, where is it? He looked around before snapping his fingers (or talons). A doll apeared, hovering in midair. "No, not Shadow the Hedgehog." Discord said shaking his head.


Fluttershy sat on the floor, alowing her friend Rarity, the famouse dressmaker, to do her hair. Her friend had just came back from the city of Manehattan, she was in a contest where the best tailors competed to see who was the best. Rarity was the winner, weird though how she was the youngest tailor there.

Rarity pushed the comb through Fluttershy's pink mane. "I think, darling, having your hair up will not fit you." she said making a clip fly over to her. "That's why I think, you should have your hair down," she paused to show Fluttershy the clip, "and this butterfly clip, will fit right behind your ear." She placed it in her hair.

"W-what about my dress?" Fluttershy asked nervously.

"It's over there," Rarity pointed to the other side of the room, "when I heard you were going to the dance with someone, I made it."

Fluttershy turned to look at the dress. Wow! The dress was beautiful, it was a long red flowing gown. At the neck there was a big blue emerald. At the train of the dress, pink silk was sewn. The short sleaves ended with more pink silk.

"Who are you going with anyway?" Rarity asked, snapping Fluttershy out of her thoughts.

"Uh..I-I.." Fluttershy stumbled, trying to find the words. How could she tell her friend that she was going with Discord? "I'm," she takes a deep breath, "going with..Discord."


Discord burst out laughing, "You should see your face!" he said pointing at the reader, "Hilarious!" he grinned, "Now you may be wondering, How does he know we're reading this? Well, I'll tell ya! I'm. The. Prince. Of. Chaos. Ha ha!" He turned back to the mirror to check himself out.

"Thanks to platypusgirl27 I look hot!" he said smiling.(Instant face palm)


Shows a mare with a purple mane, light blue fur, red eyes, and a cutie mark of a quill and paper, stop in her tracks. "I have a feeling someone is breaking the fourth wall..in my own story!" she said as her tail began twitching, "My Winter-sense is off the chisel!" (Another face palm)


Rarity dropped the comb in shock. "You are going with him?" she asked in amazement.

"Yes.." Fluttershy said meekly.

"What about Green Demon? I thought you two were dating." Rarity said in confusion.

"I left him..for Discord.." Fluttershy whispered.

Rarity wrapped her fore-legs around Fluttershy's neck (from behind) "That's my girl!"

Fluttershy smiled, then frowned, "Are you mad?" she asked.

"For what?"

"Well, I'm going with Discord and-"

"Oh Fluttershy! I'm not like that! You can go with who you want."

Fluttershy turned to look at her, "Oh, thankyou! I liked him for such a-"

"Now, the dance is in a few hours," Rarity paused, "Let's get you in that dress."

Fluttershy nodded, as Rarity broke the embrace and led her behind the curtain.


Discord sighed, "You know, breaking the fourth wall is fun, but I'm so nervous, it doesn't help.." he looked at a digital clock by him, "Only a few more minutes.."


Fluttershy stepped out from behind the curtain. The dress fit her perfectly.


(Epic time skip to the dance!)


Discord looked around, his eyes lingered on the yellow peagus making her way to him. He realized it was Fluttershy in a beautiful red dress. He smiled, making his way toward her. he noticed how her hair wasn't up, and how the clip shined as it caught light.

Discord made a rose apear in his paw as he got closer to her.

Fluttershy smiled seeing her date in a black suit, what happened next scared her.

Discord's smile turned into a grimace, he lost his balance as pain surged through him, and he fell, knocking over the table next to him.

The music stopped, and evil laughter filled the room. Discord lost conscious as he saw a claw break through the roof and snatch Fluttershy.


AN/ Fourth Chapter! I got lazy.. Breaking the fourth wall a lot.. huh.. Reveiws! Please!