sorry it`s so late in coming but i do not own bioshock or star wars. thank 2K and george lucas for these awesome characters
Ashoka walked onto the bridge quietly. The admiral looked at her. "any word from them?"asked ashoka. "no sir...i`m afraid something might have happened. We are lucky enough to have delta squad onboard. i`d advise sending them down after them."said the admiral. Ashoka nodded. " maybe I should go down after them?"asked ashoka "no..we can`t afford to lose you two. i`ll try and get a hold of general fisto. I believe he might be able to help. Till then I think delta squad would be best."said the admiral. Ashoka nodded. "i`ll send word to them right away."said the admiral as he walked away. Ashoka looked down at the planet below. " I hope your ok master."
delta squad was checking over their gear as they rode down. " wow I can`t believe we`re being sent in to rescue two commanders and two jedi. what`s the chances of that? I mean sure shifty and winters are good but their just standard clones." asked scroch as sev finished checking his gear. "just keep focused scorch. We don`t need you killing us all while we`re...where are we going pilot?"asked fixer as he realized he had no idea where they were going precisely. "we dropped off general kenobi and skywalker at some stairs. it`s where that message was coming from in the clearest sound quality. we`re not sure where they are now but we`re sure you`ll find them somewhere around there."said the pilot. The group nodded. " I want everyone sharp and ready for anything. If it`s enough to take down a jedi then it`s enough to take down us."said boss. "but..i thought we were trained to take out jedi. Remember?"asked scorch. The other three commando's looked up. "right...but we we`re trained to catch jedi by surprise to take them down and even then in greater numbers or with superior fire power like a tank or a fighter. So theres something down there that`s gotta be stronger or faster then a jedi."said sev. Scorch shrugged. " whatever you say. " moments later the gunship stopped and leveled out. " ok boy's good luck."said the pilot as the gunships doors opened. The commandos nodded and all jumped onto the steps.
It was dark, meaning it was night time now. There were lights leading up to to a light house. Delta squad walked up the steps and through open doors. The group looked around. Eventually they made their way to the bathysphere. "i'll bet you this is how they got to wherever they are."said scorch. Boss nodded. " come on everyone get in."said boss. Delta squad climbed in and fixer pulled the lever. "say did anyone hear what the message said exactly?"asked scorch as they watched the little film the bathysphere played. The rest of the squad shook their heads. They then all gazed out at rapture as the film ended. Thanks to obi-wan and anakin the service radio was gone. "wow...i can't believe this place. it's so far under water too."said scorch. "alright everyone get ready for anything. From the looks of it we won't be getting any spare ammo anytime soon so make every shot count, pick up any spare weapons and ammunition you can."said boss. The other commandos nodded and did a second check on their gear. The group was ready as always for a large scale invasion. They had every kinda grenade available as well as all their usual gear.
As the bathysphere came into the metro and it's door opened the group switched to night vision visors. "fixer, try to get a hold of general kenobi, find out where they are."said boss. Fixer nodded and turned on his com system as the group moved through the area. "general kenobi do you read me? This is republic commando fixer. Do you copy?"asked fixer. He got a response but it was garbled. "fixer th...general kenobi...meet us...medical...we'll be...main lobby. See...soon..." fixer shook his head. " somethings jamming the signal. All I could really make out is that their in "medical" and will meet us in the lobby." said fixer as they walked through what looked like a destroyed lobby to the metro they were just in. they found a hole surrounded by fallen pillars. "that's to small for us to fit through with all our gear."said fixer. "ok scorch I want a demo charge placed on that hole."said boss as he looked at scorch and pointed to the hole. " you got it boss."said scorch as he walked up to the hole and got out a demo charge. " this will only take a second"said scorch as he prepped the charge. A moment later scorch stepped away. " charge is prepped and ready to detonate." boss nodded and got out his detonator. He pressed the button and the charge blew up, creating a larger hole in the wall. The group then walked through and up some stairs. They noticed a metal door and went through it. "ya know I wonder if shifty and winters have made it through so far."said scorch as they made it down a flight of stairs with some sort of large corpse at the bottom. "i`d say one of them didn't." said sev as they jumped off a ledge into a small pool of water. There were bodies all over the floor...one of them with a clone like figure to it, burnt to a crisp in front of a gate where a turret was behind it. "i wonder which one it was."said scorch as he flipped the body over. "come on guys we gotta keep moving."said boss as he saw a sign for the medical pavilion. As they walked through they came up to another gate. "scorch blow the gate."said boss. Scorch nodded and primed a charge on the gate. Boss detonated the charge. After that they found an airlock. Fixer opened it and they walked through, closing the door behind them....
yo ok i`m getting alot of subscribers which i love but i only got 2 reviews. come on people if ya like the story please review i`m looking for ideas for later chapters. this is also a temp chapter so if you think it could be better or maybe have a different idea for it then i`d love to hear it.
also i know they weren`t in bioshock one whihc this is based off of but i have this alpha series big daddy and little sister character combo i`ve been thinking of adding. give me a thumbs up or down on the idea of having a little sister who`s technically at the bioshock two typical big sister age but saved by her big daddy and of course her big daddy, subject charlie, leading this little group.
again give me ideas for more chapters and tell me if i should rewrite or even scrap this chapter and give me your thoughts on the big daddy/little sister combol. i`m dieing for reviews with all these subcribers.