This an not an update, I fix up chapter 1-4 and added stuff, I hope I fixed most of the mistake, I try to make it easier to read as well. the next update you see will be me posting the next chapter and fixing chapter 5, plus adding stuff cause that one is boring. I would really like it if my current followers reread chapter 1-4 and lets me know if it is better so I can work on my writing skills some more. Please leave a review tell me if the story line is coming together. The next actual update will be 5/10/14.