"Kyuubi talking"

'Kyuubi Thinking'

"Regular Talking"

'Regular Thinking'

I Do Not Own Naruto


Naruto the Crimson Chain Wielder

Kiba, Akamaru. and Sai were not doing so well for the first couple minutes of the fight. Haku was throwing tons of senbon needles at both of them and there was nothing they could do to void all of them. The worse part is that Haku didn't even want to hurt them at all, she was just trying to be convincing.

No matter how many lions Sai made to attack the mirrors or how many times Kiba and Akamaru kept using gatsuga on the mirrors, they would not break.

"You don't have to hit us so much you know." Kiba complains quietly while grimacing as he pulls out some needles in his arms and sides, along with some from Akamaru. "My taicho can get you a spot in our village and Zabuza is probably too busy on his fight to notice us so I don't see why we have to fight."

"I agree, Naruto-taicho and Anko-sensei won't lose to Zabuza so you might as well just stop this nonsense and give up." Sai says to the hunter-nin hoping that she would as the fight is getting pretty hard.

"I'm sorry but I still want to be absolutely sure of my success." Haku says back sadly while preparing more needles.

"If that's how it has to be, then I guess we have to fight and just beat you." Kiba said to the masked hunter nin as he then gave another pill to his dog and he then went through some different hand signs and called out his jutsu, "Jinju Konbi Henge: Sotoro" (Human Beast Combination Transformation: Double-Headed Wolf) Then in a large puff of smoke, a large two headed white wolf appeared in the ice dome leaving very little space for Sai.

Sai then saw that Haku had her eyes all on the massive wolf and made his way quickly to the out side of the dome and was relieved when he made it out of the ice mirror death trap. "Hey Kiba, I got out so I'm going to try and assist you from the outside while you crush these mirrors from the inside." He called out to his partner who nodded and head towards the first set of ice mirrors and slashed out with his massive paws putting a fairly big gash in the mirrors.

'Shit, he scratched my mirror the other one got outside. I should have paid more attention to him. Also, I didn't think even in this new combination form he would be able to even mark my mirrors. I have no idea if I can actually beat this one as I can't freely move from mirror to mirror now.' Haku thought while trying to stay calm in this situation. 'Well, losing won't be that bad, I'll be aloud to live I'm sure. They seem to know that I'm not truly an enemy now so I suppose I really don't have to fight anymore, but I think I'll continue and see how this goes.'

"I'm impressed that you were able to scratch my mirror but it will take a bit more power than that to break them." Haku said to the beast who seemed to smirk at her.

"Ok, that was just a test swing anyway, so lets get started then." Kiba yells while Sai draws a bird in his scroll and hops onto the large ink creature and flys into the air.


"Damn, he cut off his hand." Naruto said in a bit of awe at the man's attempts to survive. Anko was also a bit surprised and they both watched as he grit his teeth and wrapped the wound in some extra bandages that he had with the only had he had left.

"That hurts you little bastard. I swear I will kill you for that." He screams out in rage as he makes a mad dash at him trying to cut Naruto in half vertically. Naruto jumps to the left to avoid the blow and makes a slash at Zabuza's right leg, hitting it and wounding him a little as he was able to move it at the last second.

"Stay in one place so I can cut you in half already." Zabuza said angrily while avoiding some more kunai from Anko again.

"Hmmm, let me think about that for a second." Naruto says to him sarcastically, making him even more angry.

'Damn this brat, alright I just have to calm down a bit. He's good but he's not that good, unfortunately I'm missing my hand now. Time to switch tactics, I'll go on the defense and see if I can spot any holes in his attacks.' Zabuza thinks to himself with a bit of worry.

Zabuza stops moving and he holds his massive blade in front of him as Naruto threw a fairly powerful slash into his blade, pushing Zabuza back only a little bit. Naruto then throws a right kick to Zabuza's head and Zabuza reaches out with his left arm to block the kick.

Seeing this Naruto quickly moves his kick above Zabuza's head which is dodges, and uses his momentum to throw a back hand with his left hand, sending Zabuza stumbling a bit. With his defense off balance a bit, Naruto lands in front of him and throws another punch into Zabuza's ribs and hears them crack under the pressure while Zabuza grunts in pain.

'Damn, this kid is quick and pretty strong.' Zabuza thinks with a grin as he loves to fight tough opponents even though deep down he knows that he is losing. He swings his sword at Naruto with a horizontal slash which Naruto then ducks under the slash and moves to stab Zabuza but Zabuza spins his body with the momentum and avoids the stab and elbows Naruto in the face with his left arm sending him flying with a cry in pain.

"Shit, Naruto are you alright?" Anko asks as she rushes up to him and cancelling the attack she was going to send. 'You better get up quick and beat this bastard Naruto, because if you die I will never forgive you.' She thinks to herself as she helps him up. 'This fight can't be too much longer. He is losing a good amount of blood through that hasty patch up job on his hand and the other cuts he has taken.'


Back in the ice dome, Kiba swings his massive paws with far more strength than he did the first time. Haku saw this and cursed while jumping quickly out the back of her mirror as the paw completely smashed it to pieces. 'So, he can break my mirrors in this form.' Haku thought to herself, impressed at the transformation's strength. 'Well, I guess I'm gonna have to hit him with some of my water techniques then.'

She starts to prepare her thousand flying water needles jutsu but is stopped when a couple ink bears charge her and she also sees the enlarged wolf version of Kiba charging as well. She decides to jump back an throw some of her normal senbon at the ink bears dispelling them and she also avoids being hit by a massive white wolf paw.

'This hunter-nin is good, but Sai seems to already have a plan in action.' Kiba thinks with a smirk trusting that Sai is ready and able to capture the hunter-nin.

'Time to enact my plan, all I need is for Kiba to distract her and send my ink snakes down from the air and restrict her.' Sai thinks to himself as he lets Kiba keep attacking until he can find and opening.

Kiba then charges at the tired form of Haku and moves to claw into her when she jumps to the right again. Sai then swoops down to her and hits her towards his partner. Kiba, seeing this, slams his shoulder into her and sends her towards the railing just like Sai had planned.

Sai then draws on his scroll while hovering above the girl and saying "Choju Giga" (Super Beast imitating drawing) and sends his ink snakes to tie the girl up to the bridge. One grabs onto her left hand and coils the other half of it self to the bridge.

Haku doesn't even try to struggle as she knew that she was beaten and she relaxes as she knew they wouldn't kill her.

"You put up a great fight there, but it wasn't enough." Kiba says to the girl as Sai jumps off his ink bird and lands next to him.

"Yeah, that was a tough fight, if Kiba couldn't do that wolf transformation we would have lost." Sai says to Kiba making the boy puff out his chest and grin in appreciation.

"Thanks, I just wonder how taicho's fight is going." Kiba says although he is not too worried about it, he has faith in Naruto's skill.

"I'm sure that he will be fine. He seemed really strong from what I have seen of him and you two put up a good fight as well." Haku said to the two as they all look to that direction as the mist is beginning to let up and what they see surprises them, but only a little bit.

Zabuza was missing his left hand and had is bandaged quite badly while sporting some cuts and scratches. Naruto had only a couple cuts on him when compared to Zabuza and was breathing pretty heavily just like Zabuza was.


'Damn. I'm running on fumes and it looks like this gaki can go longer than I can.' Zabuza thought, 'well I'm at least glad that the guy who killed me is good with a sword.'

"Its over Zabuza." Naruto says as he tries to control his breathing with Anko not doing much better.

"Hmmm, I hate to say it but it seems like you did beat me." Zabuza says with a smirk, not afraid of what comes next.

"So the demon and Haku are defeated by the enemy huh, how wonderful. Now I have a real reason to kill you both." A voice calls out of no where and all the fighters just look over and see a short and pudgy business man leading a lot of thugs.

"And we now have a reason to kill you, Gato." Zabuza said enraged at the man as he then looked at the others. "Hmph, I guess our fight is over." He said to them as he turned toward the crowd but he couldn't lift his sword anymore with the blood loss. "Lend me a kunai for this gaki." He said while Naruto didn't see any harm in helping him and did as he was told.

Zabuza doesn't really think much about Haku not joining his side in his attack and he just rushes in as he feels himself dying from losing too much blood. He carves his way through a few of the hired thugs, cutting into them with only the small blade in his mouth but he his stabbed a few times on the way. Even with the weapons stuck in his back he still makes it to Gato and stabs him in the chest and head, killing him as Zabuza finally falls over dead.

"He killed our meal ticket."

"What now?"

"Lets steal from the town and kill these kids in the way." Shouted one of the smarter men getting the others to agree and charge at them.

Haku got ready as she took out three senbon needles while Naruto soon ran and got next to Haku. "I still haven't run out of steam yet," Naruto said with a smile to the girl. Haku giggled slightly but stopped when an arrow shot into the middle of the two groups.

Everyone looked to see Inari and the townspeople with their 'weapons', which were basically oars, sticks, some clubs, and other various blunt and some sharp objects. "This is our town and we will fight to protect it," Inari yelled and soon the villagers roared as well making some of the men sweat.

"With a few quick words of confidence from the same smarter bandit the group continues to charge at them, not knowing how big a mistake they are making.

"I think I can handle this by myself guys, I have enough chakra left." Naruto said as he walked in front of the whole group while having chains sprout from the back of his body making everyone who didn't see them stop what the were doing.

"What the hell"

"Who the hell is this guy."

"I think I've heard of this ability, but that should be impossible. I thought the Uzumaki clan was all gone long ago."

These were some of the things the bandits were saying as they were all frozen in place staring at the blond haired man in front of them who was now jogging towards them as he wanted to save energy.

But it didn't matter as he was already too close to run now. Naruto had his head down with a smirk at the bandits as he channeled some wind into his chains getting them to glow a soft blue color and he swung them at the closest men cutting through them like butter.

It was over quickly with Naruto moving with grace using his sword and his chains with ease, cutting and piercing the bandits easily. He dodged and spun and blocked them, while absolutely dominating the fight.

"S-So these are shinobi?" Inari said in awe, and he wasn't the only one as all the villagers who had come looked to the blond in a new light and were amazed at the blond ninja.

Soon they were all dead and Naruto appeared in front of Gato and seemed to search him, finding some interesting information while he went back to his team and Haku and promptly passed out from exhaustion.

The people all cheered in joy at the sight of the Konoha team carrying there new hero through the village as he rested. After all, it was a start of a new time of prosperity for them.

What they didn't see though, was a shinobi from a Kiri rebel group leaving the scene. 'I should report this to Mei-sama, we should go to Konoha if they have ninja like him being strong enough to beat Zabuza at that age. We could us some help after all.' She thought to herself as she smiled at the thought of a free Kirigakure.


The next day, after a good nights rest, Naruto pulled out the information he had found on Gato's corpse. "alright, I have the location of Gato's money and documents as well as a dungeon of women he kidnapped. We have to go and save them." He said shocking the civillian family and making the ninjas look at Anko to see her decision.

"Of course, you lead the way then." She said agreeing to the plan.

Naruto led them into the woods and they all walked for about 30 minutes and came up to a small compound just at the edge of a wooded part of the island. "Alright gakis, there are some guards in their but they probably aren't trained to handle ninja. Kiba and Sai can go to the east and Naruto and I will go to the west. Sai, you can make some ink snakes and send them in first and strangle any of the bandits you see, then we'll all charge in from our sides. Try and take these guys out quickly." Anko said to the team and they all nodded and moved into their positions.

"Choju giga" (Super Beast Imitating Drawing) Sai whispered and sent around 30 snakes into the small compound and manged to get onto some of the bandits but others had seen the snakes.

"What the hell, theses snakes are made of ink." A random bandit said to three other of his friends nearby and then was shocked when each of the three fell to the ground with shurikens in their heads. "Wh-what the hell!" He said and started to look around and quickly found the person responsible. It was a young blond guy with blue eyes and the bandit started to try and make himself look intimidating.

"You know that's not very scary at all, I'm a ninja and your just a lowly bandit. You don't stand a chance." Naruto said calmly to the bandit as the rest of the team came behind him making the bandit even more intimidated. "Its over now." Naruto said as he threw a kunai and hit the man in the eye. Searching for any stragglers, they went to the front doors of the compound as they hadn't found any.

"We don't know how many men are in here, so lets take this slow and steady while sticking together inside." Anko said to them seriously as they opened the door and entered into a lobby area.

The area was decorated just like a normal hotel building probably to make it so if people entered they wouldn't be suspicious or anything. There were some halls leading to the left and right so Sai drew some pictures of mice and sent them around to scout the area while the team hid in the lobby.

"I found where the girls are but they seem to be in trouble most of the guards are there and they seem to want to rape the girls, follow me quickly." Sai said and quickly led them to the right spot.


"Hey, you bastard don't touch us!" A beautiful brown haired girl around the age of 17 said to a guard who was coming towards the girls. There were around 20 women in total, all tied up. Some looked to be in their late 20s early 30s but none looked to be over the age of 35.

"Shut up you bitches, I'm sure that our boss won't mind if we were able to have some fun before he does." An ugly fat bandit said as some of the other bandits were approaching the crying women.

"Leave her and the rest of us alone you sick bastards." Yelled another beautiful woman with pure black hair and green eyes. She seems to be around 30 or 32 and is one of the only women actually yelling at the bandits in the room.

"O, we have a feisty one here don't we..." The main bandit said to her and started to approach her.

"Stay away from me!" She yelled at him angrily while hiding her growing fear.


"Alright, there are in this room and the guards are touching some of them but they haven't been raped yet." Sai said to the team who are now outside of the room where the women are.

"Alright, I'll go get the women and you guys can all get the guards who are waiting around the outside of the cage." Naruto said and everyone agreed and they quickly kicked the door down scaring all the people in the room.

Naruto quickly killed the men in the cage by throwing 5 kunai into each on of their heads. The others attacked the men while Naruto went towards the cage. The women inside started to go towards the corner thinking he would continue what the other men were planning to do.

He put his hands up and smiled warmly at the women. "Its ok, I'm not going to harm you ladies." The women only saw genuine worry and kindness in his eyes and stopped moving believing that he wouldn't hurt them. He then slowly approached the closest woman to him. It was the 17 year old girl and he cut the ropes that she was tied up with. "You ladies are safe now, were going to get you out of here, alright?" Naruto said kindly to the women making them smile and some of them blush as they had already heard of him beating Zabuza as Gato was screaming and complaining about some blond haired brat before he left. They figured it had to be him and they were all impressed to see him so young.

"Thank you so much for coming when you did, if you didn't I'd hate to think of what they would have done to us." The young woman said and gave him a kiss on his cheek making him blush and the women giggle at him.

"Its no problem, me and my team just came to help, we have already killed Gato and his other bandits so Wave should be completely free now." Naruto said to them shocking them and they began to cry in joy and the others were soon freed and hugged him tightly all while kissing his cheek and crying.

"Helloooo..." Anko called to them a little annoyed. "The bandits are all dead so we can all get you back to your homes now, lets go." She said and started to walk off in jealousy as the team led ladies out of the dungeon.


Naruto and the team have just made it to the bridge with the women in tow and saw that the villagers were waiting for their return. When the team was spotted, the people erupted in cheers for them and were practically worshiping Naruto as they had seen his strength in the fight and he has always been helpful and respectful to them and they came to really like him. Especially now that him and his team have saved the women of their village.

Haku was off to the side of the crowd looking on as Naruto was swarmed by some children and she smiled gently.

Time went by quickly as Tazuna finished the bridge with no hindrances along with the ninja protecting him and the people cheered as they all stood on the bridge saying their goodbyes. Nartuo was in the front of his team with Haku along with them.

"Well, we have got to go," Naruto told them sadly as he really liked the people of this village. Everyone in the crowd gave their thanks in the form of their cheers and the women shouting about how they love him and don't want him to go making him blush. Inari was tearing up a bit as he hugged Naruto.

"Thank you Naruto-nii-chan for everything you have done for me and the village. I will remember this day forever and I will always protect my mother and precious people just like you told me to." Inari told him. Naruto smirked with a nod as he bent down and hugged him.

Tsunami came up and hugged Naruto as well and said with a blush, "thank you for showing my son not to give up Naruto-kun, I would really like it if you could visit us and I'm sure everyone here would love it if you came back too."

"I'm sure I will visit you some time Tsunami-chan." Naruto said as they had gotten closer during the time he and his team had stayed at their home.

Backing away from the crowd Naruto looks at them all once again, "before we go, I have left all the money, deeds to your homes, and anything of value in the center of your town, goodbye Wave country." Naruto yelled and the village roared in happiness and most cried for his generosity. The team along with the new addition of Haku turned and began their way home as the thundering cheers began to die down.

Tazuna smiled, "we will have to give the bridge a name now that its finally done." Tazuna stated as the cheering finally stopped making everyone listen quietly. "I thing we should name it after the person who restored our strength, hope, and returned our savings even though he didn't need to. We'll call it 'The Great Naruto Bridge'." Tazuna said as people cheered as loud as they could once again in agreement to the name.


Chapter End

Alright, well Zabuza is dead and Haku is joining the leaf village. I really just couldn't deal with having so many characters needing to have time in the story, like having each important person having at least one thing to say is pretty tedious and difficult so the less people the better.

Anyway, I hope you guys are still enjoying the little changes I'm making and I hope you keep reading.

PepticCaesar out