Wow I can't believe I got as many views as I did! Considering I just thought of this story line at midnight last night! Thanks so much it REALLY means a lot!

FYI: This chapter has rape and violence.

I DON'T OWN ANYTHING

Tris POV

I dread the walk home. Once you are one taking the aptitude test you are free to leave. I would rather stay, knowing what awaits me at "home". I'm glad Sophie has more volunteer work this evening. I don't want her home when I face Marcus. It's only a little passed noon and I'm almost home. That leaves Marcus and me six hours… Alone.

Tobias sent me a note telling me he want to visit tonight and talk about our plan for tomorrow. We have been planning this for about four months. But I think tonight I have to tell him about my think. With leaving Sophie with Marcus. He says Marcus won't do anything. One; she's a girl. Two; Sophie is his daughter. But I'm a girl, Marcus beats me. The only thing is that Sophie is his actual daughter.

I make my way up our grey, concrete steps. I notice that Marcus is home. Maybe he's drunk off his ass and won't notice me. With my luck, he's not. As I walk through the door he's waiting for me. Right in the middle of our hallway. He has a calm look on his face but his eyes and voice betray him.

"What was your result?" he asks "Better be Abnegation"

"A… A… Abnegation" I mentally punch myself for stuttering. He is going to know I'm lying. Even after leaving Candor and joining Abnegation, he can still tell when a people is lying.

"Don't lie to me bitch!" and he smacks my face. Hard.

"I'm not lying! Abnegation was my result!" I cry out. Just earning a punch in the stomach. He's about the punch my face when I cry out "The Choosing Ceremony, Dad!" I absolutely hate calling him 'dad'. But it's the only thing that brings him out of the zone. The abuse zone. I know he'll just hit me in another place. Where it will be covered by my clothes. Then it comes; a blow to my hip. Paralyzing me in pain. He throws me over his shoulder; but no without making a pit stop to the kitchen. Is beating me up making him hungry? No, he makes his way over the knife block. God no! He going to kill me! Right before I'll be free!

He walks up stairs to Tobias's old room. He throws me on the bed making my hip feel as if it's on fire. He takes the knife pressing it on my throat making me freeze. He leans his face closer to mine. A bile rises in my throat, I turn my head away; not wanting to look at him. He leans down to my ear, straddling my hips and says in a menacing voice "Now Beatrice I have a proposal to make. I have some… needs I desperately need to take care of and if you leave I'll have to achieve those… needs with Sophie. I don't think that would morally right; considering she is my daughter. And you. You are just a worthless piece of meat…" tears are streaming down my face, I can't control them "… now that we have establish how worthless you are here are my terms; you do everything I tell you. EVERYTHING. You'll act like a happy abnegation girl with a loving family. I will never touch Sophie again. This 'proposal' will start now. Do we have a deal?"

He already knows my answer, I would never let Sophie be touched like that. But the sick bastard wants me to say it aloud "De-"I start but someone knocks on the door. I give Marcus a confused look because he's smirking. I wonder who he invited?

"Say it" he says

"There's someone at the door. Do you want to answer it?" I'm confused

"Say it, then I'll go get the door!" he whisper-shouts

"Deal" I say with tears rolling down my face

"Okay, good. Stay here. Move and I'll kill whoever is at the door" he hisses

"Yes sir" and with that he get off me and I curl into a ball and I start sobbing. I hear some punching sounds and grunting. Grunting? I hear footsteps coming closer and closer to the door. Marcus has someone over his shoulder. But not a girl; a boy, a man actually. He sits this man in a chair right next to the bed. I can't tell who it is; he's head is down, but he's starting to wake up.

I freeze.

Staring in his deep dark blue eyes. Tobias? Why is he here? Why did Marcus tie him up… by the bed? Why did he want me to say 'deal' before he got the door?! Then it hits me like a brick wall. "NO!" I exclaim.

"Ohh yes" Marcus says with a evil smirk

"What the hell is going on here?! Tris why are you tied to my bed? Marcus Why am I tied to a fucking chai-"Tobias yells out. But by the look on his face, he got hit with the brick wall also. "NO! Marcus please don't do this!"

"I AM going to do this! Because Tris and me have a little 'deal'" Marcus says while starting run his filthy hands over my stomach; causing a bigger bile in my throat. "Would you care to tell your brother our little plan, Beatrice?" he says while leaning on the door fame.

With tears running down like a river; I stare at Tobias's beautiful eyes and begin "Tobias, ever since my mother died, Marcus hasn't had anyone to take care of his…needs…" I am going to vomit "… and if I transferred, those… needs would fall on Sophie to take care of…" I swallow hard, trying to not stutter or break down and continue "… I have to take care of these… needs. To protect Sophie and you…" I can see tears welling up in Tobias's eyes. "…I sorry Tobias. I have to do this for Sophie! Please forgiv-"I'm cut off by Marcus.

"Okay enough of the sappy 'sorry' I'm get impatient" He peels his body off the door frame and come to me and straddling me again. I see Tobias in the corner of my eye trying to break the ties; but they won't budge. "You will kiss me back unless you want me to beat your dear old brother" I force myself to look at him and he crashes his dry, alcohol tasting lips down on mine. My first kiss. He pushes his slimy tongue in my mouth. It takes everything in me not to gag.

He pulls back with an evil grin on his face and reaches for the knife. Starting at the hem of my shirt; dragging the knife up to reveal white bra. Tobias is screaming something, but I can't hear him. Marcus takes the knife down to my pants and shreds them too. I'm lying there; half naked with a man two times my age hovering over me, playing with my boobs. I look over at Tobias; who has his head down, sobbing.

Marcus takes the knife again and slides it in between my boobs cutting my bra off. Marcus take the knife and also cuts off my underwear. Marcus is now also stark naked. He get off me and lays down.

"Your turn" Marcus says looking down at his erection. My eyes go wide; What do I do with it? Marcus see my confused face and stands. He grabs my wrist, pulling me off the bed. With the other hand on shoulder and he pushes me down on knees.

Now I'm face to face with his quite large penis. I look up at him and he's smirking. I look to the right and see Tobias with bloodshot eyes, still crying. Marcus grabs my hand and places it on his erection.

"You stroke it like this…" he moves his hand up and down. "… and suck it…" he's panting now. "…Faster, bitch…" I put my mouth on it and begin to suck. "… Harder!" After a few more hard strokes, something warm and salty fills my mouth. I don't know what to do so I just swallow it.

He looks down at me and smiles. Smile? He picks me up and throws me on the bed again. I look over a Tobias one last time and mouth 'I'm sorry' and he says it back.

"Ready to become a real woman, Beatrice?" Marcus growls. All I can do is nod. He aligns himself at my core. He counts to three, dragging out 'three'. All a sudden I feel him enter me with one forceful thrust. I have never felt so much pain. I scream… loudly. Marcus puts his hand on my mouth to muffle it. I keep screaming until my throat is raw. Marcus is grunting and moaning. He sound like enjoying himself. I'm in pure terror and pain. It's not the kind of pain I'm used to. It hurts on all levels of pain. My body goes limp. Marcus is still going, but he's not going as fast as he was early. Then I feel something warm spill inside me; Marcus comes to a dead stop. He rolls off me, sweating and panting like he just run a marathon.

"I can't wait to do this again…" he gives me a sickening grin. "…You need to loosen up through; you were pretty… tight. Now I'm going to go take a shower and clean myself up…"He looks at Tobias and says "… never come to Abnegation ever again or next time I'll keep going 'til the bitch is dead. You hear me?"

"Yes sir" Tobias whispers

"Good, now get out of my house! Tris untied him and show him to the door" with that he leave. I sigh in relief and look over at Tobias again. I get up but immediately hit the ground. Too weak to even walk two feet.

"Tris!" Tobias whisper- yells

"I'm fine, just dizzy" I say and get up again going over to the chair and untying Tobias. When I'm done, he turns to me and catches me before I fall again. I curl up on his lap, sobbing on his chest. I feel so safe in his arms; like nothing can touch me.

"Tris I'm so sorry! I should have broken the ties! I'm sorry I didn't save you! I'm sorry, I'm so sor-"I cut him off

"You have nothing to sorry for, Tobias. I'm the one who's sorry! Why were you here?"

"You wrote me. Remember?"

"I haven't wrote to you in four weeks! You were the one who wrote to me! When did you get this note?"

"Yesterday! Here I brought it-"he hands me a small piece of paper.

Tobias-

Tobias I need to show you something immediately! Please come the evening before the Choosing Ceremony. This is urgent.

-Tris

"Tobias, I never wrote thi-"I remember Marcus making me say 'deal' before he answered the door; He wrote this note. That sick son of a bitch. "… Marcus wrote this! He wanted you to see that!"

"I fucking hate that bastard!" I feel him getting tense. "Tris?"

"Yeah?"

"You do realize that you're still on my lap… naked?" with that I jump up a grab an old shirt of Tobias's and slip it on. It goes just passed my butt. I go back to Tobias's lap, my cheeks turn red. Even though he just saw me raped, and he saw everything but I still fill self-conscious. He holds me tight until I feel myself slipping into the darkness of nightmares but not before I hear him say "I love you, Tris. No matter what. You will always be the light in our dark lives" and I feel him kiss my forehead "Be brave Tris." Then I succumb to the darkness…

A/N:

I hope that wasn't too violent or too in detail. Please tell me in the reviews if it was! And tell me if you guys want me to skip to Sophie's Aptitude test/Choosing Day/ initiation? Or I could talk a little more about Tris and Tobias. I have a few more chapters about Tris's initiation and her life after. Tell me if you guys want her to choose Abnegation or Dauntless. Oh and this chapter was the longest chapter I have done so-far! 2000 words! Please tell me in the reviews what you guys think! Remember no haters; it breaks my heart! You guys are entitled to your own opinion. But I have feelings too Okay I'm going to shut up and keep on writing expect chapters 4, 5, and 6 tomorrow and maybe chapter 7. I have nothing better to done but write; since there is a fucking big ass lizard in my living room and I'm too scared to leave my room… Okay I'm going now; please review