Hello! This is Dave, xXIcepoolXx's imaginary friend. I am fairly sure xXIcepoolXx is still crazy s-
xXIcepoolXx: I WAS ALWAYS CRAZY DAVE
Ahem, so I will be doing todays commentary
xXIcepoolXx NOJOSRJOBDM NONNONOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Struggles Against Chair She's Chained To*
Chapter For StarPaws decids This person lacks spelling and commen sense...
flamrs ur all satanits!11 anyon who dosent like the stro is a staneist cause StarGIPaw has such a strng conecton with sTarcaln and thats why you dot like it, its cause u do ntlik JEZUS!
Personally i'm not Christian because my creator isn't but this is just rude.
"StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole." Please tell me it gets better?
StarPaw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and locked arund What have I done? o-o
"Omigosh who wus tha!1!1"Sshe yellow. Omigosh? This isn't even CLOSE to book correct
"Its me GrayStipe" GrayStrip wisperd in her er. StarPaw gottedup. ...
"Omigosh Graystip what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at hr. "Wll u be my mat" hE ESked. Excatly What I can tell form this sentence: Book-Incorrect Mary Sue Noob APP
Gets asked mates by normal Out of character first series warrior. Perrfect
"OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me." This is too many. Main character mentored by leader, leader asking app. mentor asking app TMC
"wel then hes jst an idot." Your best friend much?
"StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole." Oh gods I have to do this again?
StarPAw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and locked arund. STOP THIS MADNESS
"Omigosh who wus tha!1!1"Sshe yellow.
"Its me GrayStipe" GrayStrip wisperd in her er. StarPaw gottedup.
"Omigosh Graystip what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at hr. "Wll u be my mat" hE ESked.
"OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me."
"wel then hes jst an idot."
y do u say tha?" yellED STARPaw GayStrip locked at hr meanly. "i dont lik him" sqeakd GrayStripe he locked arund fastly. "hes a mean cat! HE IS YOUR BEST FRIEND
"OMIGOSH U MEAN LIKE SCOURG?" STARPAW SHOCKED. This noob who measures everything in scourge. I imagine shes only read first series IF that.
"No ur much prtter then sourg" said Graystripe he licked her on the head I want u to be my mat." he yeleled. GODS YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT FIRESTAR NOT DANG STARWHATEVER
"Well mabey. but what would FireStar say?" she wispereed. GrayStripe locked around agan. "I dont think he wuld mind." said GraStri;e ARGGGEGGGG
"OMIGOSH SUR THAN!" StarPaww yelleded happly. Hissssssssssssss HISSSSSSS HISHSIHSISSSSSSSSS
"Wat ar uo ta;kin abut" said FireHert he was walkin up. He locked angrily.
"oh uhhhh nuthin FireStar go back to sleep!" mwled StarPaw hoppin he would leaf so she culd be alon with grayStripe. GRAYSTRIPE IS PERVERTED IN THIS?!
"Yah FireStra theres nithing to wory about!" cherrid GrayStrpe but Firestar didn't leave insted he said i thought I herd you asking her to be our mate."
"oh uh yeh. yELLED STARPaw but he didn;t leaf instead he jumped on GrayStripe!1!11
"I Want to be wit her!" said FireHart attakin GraySriep. NO. NEITHER OF YOU OUT OF CHARACTER SCREW UPS GET TO BE WITH THE OTHER SCREW UP
"No I do!" shouted. STAWP THIS WAS ALREADY DISCUSSED!
"guysys stop fihting you can BOTH be my mats! StarPaw wispered apply like seCert." NO THIS IS EVEN WORSE THEN YOUR OTHER IDEAS
"No we can;t do that their can only be 1!11 Howled Firestar. "Otterwies youll chet on us." First SMART line Firestar has said all day.
"So StarGleam, who will u pik?" giggled GayStipe. NOPE. NOPE. I MADE A MISTAKE. NEVER DOING THIS AGAIN. EVER
*Trembles In Fear* I. Am. Never. Doing. This. Again.
xXIcepoolXx: Heya! Knew You'ed hate it!
How did you get free!?
xXIcepoolXx: Chainsaw *Reveals Chainsaw.* Anyway it looks like Starkits prophecy drove yet another one of my imaginary friends mad. Leo, Fix him up.
Leo: What? SUNLIGHT YAY :D *Rolls on ground in sunlight* IM FREEEEEE
Why is Leo out!?
xXIcepoolXx: DO THE THING LEO! DO IT!
Leo: Kaykay! Jeez! *Snaps Fingers*
K... I think im back to normal.
Bai, never doing this again.
xXIcepoolXx: YES YOU WILL!
Never!
Seeya!