Wow you guys are great. Thanks for all the feedback! And thank you All dark cherished for Emmett's poem. It was hilarious so I used it and added more.
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Chapter 5- Emmett Writes a Poem
Emmett's POV
'House. Mouse.
Dragon. Wagon.
Horse. Of course.
Stars. Cars.' I wrote. Then I re-read my poem. "Brilliant!" I exclaimed.
"Ooh! Ooh! Emmett wrote his first poem!" Alice exclaimed throwing my door off its hinges. "Lemme see! Lemme see!" She grabbed the paper and read it. I watched her face turn from ecstatic to horrified in two seconds flat.
"Well…" I prompted.
"It's… um… wonderful…" she lied.
Edward and Jasper walking in the room at that moment. "Alice, stop lying to him. That poem is horrible. Like I said, Emos write bad poetry but think its brilliant," Edward said. "The poem doesn't even have any conceivable meaning."
I felt like crying at that, too bad I can't. That is one emo thing I will never get to do. That makes me feel like crying too.
"Let me read it," Jasper said, taking the poem from Alice. He read it, grimaced, and threw it back at me. "Edward's right, Em, that's really bad. You are not destined to be a poet."
"You guys are horrible! I'm going to slit my wrist now to get rid of the pain of your words!" I screamed, trying to choke back tears, or make some, then stormed out of the room.
"Oh yeah, cuz a razor will really cut you, Emmett," Edward called after me.
Ok, any suggestions on what he should do next? I'm thinking he should have an emo name. Any suggestions?
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