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D) Carrots
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Thanks to Annabeth Chase the Wise Girl for her help with the chapter, and her support of my story! Don't know what I'd do without her! Anyway, this story officially has 160 reviews! *Squeal that makes Drew's look weak* Yay! 160 FREAKING REVEIWS! You are officially the best people on the planet! Anyway, I found something that is so freaking epic. Go to Youtube right now. Go. Now. Look up maddy5534, and watch her HOH trailers. DO. IT. NOW. Then go to CassJayTuck and watch her reviews to the HOO series!
To my lovelies:
Cemedance: Yikes! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry! I tried to be less depressing, and to focus more on the details… guess that didn't work out… And they have to reach the bottom. I'm thinking they'll fall, hit the ground, Percy'll get injured but they'll struggle their way through the endless plains of Tartarus, and then they'll reach the doors of death. Those are my ideas. Um, maybe I'll write my own… After I finish this, of course.
Kooky656: Yes. A coma. Did you not read the chapter? Well, not really a coma…It shall become clear!
Ghost 77731: Dude, thanks, It means the world to me!
Ultra Happy Peep: Breath! Just breathe! I'm here, you can read! Yeah, Nico and Cal make sense, but I really hate that Leo's alone, and I'm sure that Reyna's going to die. So Leyna's out. And thanks for the advice, most of the questions are addressed below.
X: I'm done hurting Percy. I just can't do it anymore, it's hurting my soul. It's not good for my health. But, for some reason, I'm into seeing my favorite characters be weak. I love that so much.
X: No. Not gonna happen. There is none, nor will there ever be sexual abuse in my story. I'm 11, I can't even read it, let alone write it. So, no way. Never ever gonna happen.
Olympus97: Bromance coming up! I love it too! And I am offended that you would think I would kill off Percy. Why would you think that?
Christinaazhangsw: The only reason I know what that means is because my sister just took that test!
Fantasy Girl Loves Fantasy: Yeah, no. Not normal coma. You thought Percy wouldn't feel pain? Yeah, no. But, I swear, no more harm. Just him being all coma-like. Duh, Percabeth! And if you think I would let Percy let anyone touch Annabeth…You are wrong. You are so wrong.
Guest: Duh. Strong women. It's gonna happen. And I don't try to torture my readers with tension. Whatever comes out of my head goes into the story. If my ideas go with Percy waking up, I'll do that. If not, too bad for Percy.
Dedicated to Annabeth Chase the Wise Girl for her help, support, and knowledge of Comas.
Percy POV
I was floating. That's all I knew. It was dark, and cool, and there was something under me. I couldn't remember my name. I couldn't remember her's. All I knew was that she had grey eyes. I could see rivers of emotion in them, ranging from love, to agony. I wanted go to the mystery girl. No. I needed to go to the mystery girl. I needed her like I needed air.
I had to find her.
My impulsive reaction was to fight, to attack the tranquility of this dream-world. But I couldn't move. The lake I had once been resting in had become my prison. Its murky waters binded me, making me vulnerable to whatever nightmares lay hidden in the corners of my mind.
I waited for something to attack, unconsciously twisting my wrists against the watery bindings. I had been robbed of my senses, unaware of everything. The only clue I had that I was alive, was that I was breathing.
Was I breathing? I couldn't feel my chest moving. Maybe I wasn't breathing.
I was in a twisted version of reality. Where everything was black and all I could feel were my watery restraints, so tight they were cutting into my flesh. I was being subjected to the worst kind of torture my weak mind could take. Being trapped there.
I heard a voice, and suddenly my entire world lit up. I could see her now, grey eyes filled with tears, blond hair stained with blood. Was that my blood?
I knew her, I remembered her, I had always known her, but I couldn't reach it. My mind was keeping my love from me. I was trapped, held hostage in the dark interworking of my mind. The question was not how to get out, but who was keeping me here.
Annabeth POV
I turned around to find Luke, who's staring at Percy. I'm frozen on my knees next to Percy, and Luke walks forward to meet me.
"What do you mean, he's in a coma?" I ask him, voice dangerously calm.
"I mean, we put too much pressure on him, and he couldn't take it. So now he's in a coma." Tears start to leak out of my eyes with his words.
I ignore the facts, and start to shake my comatose love. He doesn't respond head simply lolling from side to side as my sobs shake his body. I vaguely register Luke's footsteps walking away.
Percy's in my lap now, and I'm crying into what used to be his chest. I hold him, and sob, before the Athena in me comes out, and I start to think of a plan to get Seaweed Brain safely out. And me.
I listen to his slow, steady heartbeat. I take off what's left of his shirt, and wrap his chest in it. Maybe if I stop the blood, I can get him back. He'll wake up. But, I'm just giving myself false hope. I know that during a coma a person is unresponsive to his environment. The person is alive and looks like he or she is sleeping. However, unlike in a deep sleep, the person cannot be awakened by any stimulation, including pain. Percy's coma was caused by excessive bleeding. I wasn't sure if his coma was caused by blood loss, pain, or a head injury.
I was startled out of my thoughts by Percy's pained cry. If Percy's in a coma he can't feel pain.
"Percy?" I whisper into his hair. "Can you hear me?" Involuntary hope fills me.
But then, it's crushed as water escapes from Percy's lips. How is he coughing up water?
Suddenly I'm blown back with a force no one but an immortal possesses. I can only watch in horror as water constricts itself around Percy's limp body.
Only one person besides Poseidon and Percy can control water. Oceanus is rising.
That night, Morpheus was not kind to the demigods of Camp half blood.
Malcolm woke up screaming to look at his sister's bunk, when he found her missing.
Drew's shill shrieks of terror forced Piper to dump a bucket of icy water over the daughter of Aphrodite. Piper enjoyed it, but that didn't stop her from being worried about her older sister.
Maddie's brown curls bounced as she shook in terror. Even Will Solace, her favorite brother couldn't comfort the trembling girl.
Nico, knowing Percy would have the worst nightmares, ran across the lawn, to the Poseidon cabin.
"Percy? It's me, Nico, let me in!" He shouted at the closed door. With one hard kick, the door went down, and Nico was left staring at the bloody mess that was his cousin's room.
Meanwhile, Malcolm went to alert Jason, knowing that if Percy was gone, the Son of Zeus was in charge. Yes I said Zeus. Until farther notice, the Roman gods don't exist. He pounded on the doors, shouting the names of the two offspring of the sky. After about five minutes of shouting himself hoarse, a very angry Thalia opened the door.
"What?" She growled, angry at the son of Athena.
Malcolm gulped, taking a step back in case he needed to run.
"Percy and Annabeth are missing." Malcolm told her solemnly.
Thalia's eyes grew wide in fear, and she shouted for her brother who was at her side in an instant.
"Where's Percy?" The older boy asked frantically, eyes wide after his own nightmare. Anyone would be terrified after watching their cousin fall to their doom. (He watched Percy fall, but didn't see the horse rescue him.)
"Gone. Annabeth too." Malcolm replied shortly.
Jason's eyes burned with fury.
"Thalia, could you summon all the immortals? I think I'm done waiting for the gods to get off their podexes and help us!" His voice grew in volume, until he was shouting at the sky. "PERCY AND ANNABETH HAVE DONE EVERYTHING FOR YOU, AND YOU REPAY THEM BY LEAVING THEM TO DIE?" He yelled mindlessly, and all of Camp half blood crowded around to watch the temper tantrum of the most composed son of the big three.
Jason was so angry, he didn't notice the gods were standing there, until his father cleared his throat.
"This time we're going to help." Poseidon said, remorse, anger, and bitterness clear on his face.
"I need to save my daughter." Athena looked as though she really cared.
The gods reunited with their children, and Hestia watched them from the hearth, conflicting emotions tearing apart the Last Olympian.
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