I guess no one wants to review my work anymore. I know I haven't been posting the best of work recently but thats okay. I will keep on writting because I love it. Don't get me wrong, I love hearing from the readers as well. I think it's alot of fun to write from a point of view. That is what most of my poems are. I try to give a poetic voice to some of my favorite fictional charecters. I don't think I've ever written a poem about the Sonic universe, but rather from within it.
This poem is unlike most of my Sonic poetry because It is actually from Sonic's point of view. I tend to write from the supporting cast because Sonic usually has enough time in the spot light. I love the relation ship he has with Sally because, In my opinion it is the most human. They have been through so much together, and their personalitys are so different that they seem to have the most drama associated with their relationship. In the end I know they love each other and will finally get married. They even wanted to way back in issue 125, my favorite issue in the series.
Well I've been rambeling, so without further wait here is Feeling's for a Friend ch. 16
LONGING
by. Dante 40k
I need to hear your voice
childhoods almost gone.
Regal blue night's we shared
convinced me you're the one.
Endless summer days
and timeless summer night's
seem to be in a past
I cling to all the time.
You'r courage inspires me
to feats beyond my grasp.
You'r heroism draws me to you;
I've figured it out at last.
Love in friendship's not enough
to quench my thirst for you.
So much time we've lost-behind us
I give myself to you.
Body and soul are almost one,
our lives have led to this.
My princess and eternal love,
I long to feel your kiss.
Author's Notes:
after I wrote this I noticed a few problems, but the one that is most evident to me is... Sonic can't speak that poetically! I thought about dumbing it down to fit his vocabulary, but decided not to. As always I would love to hear your comment's, good or bad. And I can't wait to post a new chapter.