Ok. I've decided that it's time I update again! Yay! It was brought to my attention in For The Love Of It that I write too many author notes so now all my author notes will be at the top or the bottom, unless I need to explain something right at that moment.

I don't own Inuyasha. If I did would I be here writing the story? Probably not.


Inuyasha slowly walked towards the place where Kagome, Sango and Miroku were standing. When he finally got over there he blandly ignored Sango and Miroku and started speaking to Kagome.

"Well," he said. "Judging by the way you acted around me at dinner this weekend I'm going to assume that you've also heard of are 'soon to be marriage'?"

"Unfortunately...yes I have. Now why don't you turn around and go see your little friends before I wrap my hands around your preppy little neck in a death squeeze," Kagome said before she turned around and asked Sango how her weekend had been.

Inuyasha was mad. How dare this little punk brush him off as if he were dirt. It was even worse because he was going to be marrying this little punk soon. His pride also couldn't get over the fact that because Kagome had been the one to brush him off. Kagome, the same girl he had had a crush on since grade seven, and they were in grade twelve now! He couldn't help it though. Back in grade seven she had been the most desired girl, but at the same time the most untouchable. She had been a little bit of a punk back then too. Well more of a skater punk.

Everyday she came to school on her skateboard with the same Good Charlotte hat on. Her pants were baggy and usually bought in the boys department. She usually wore a black shirt something sarcastic like "instead of talking to me, why don't you go see your friends at the Happy House?" with a picture of a guy being dragged away in a straight jacket on it.

As the years rolled on she changed. She still rode her skateboard to school until she was able to buy her motorcycle. Her baggy pants became fitted pants that hugged her long slender legs. Her t-shirts also became fitted and hugged her torso and the name of the band changed on the t-shirt. These days it was usually GreenDay or Linkin Park. Her hair had become longer and she became more elegant despite her punky nature. And Inuyasha continued to love her.

Inuyasha turned and walked away, over to where his friends were. When his girlfriend Kinky-hoe, I mean Kikyo latched onto his arm like a predisit that would wither away into nothingness without him. Koga, Ginta, and Kakaku also stopped what they were doing and looked at there leader.

"How was your weekend, Inuyasha?" Koga asked.

"Well, aside from the fact that I found out I will have ro marry Miss Kagome Higurashi over there, pretty good," Inuyasha said.

"WHAT! You have to marry that punk wanna be Kagome Higurashi?" Kikyo whined. "Can't you just marry me so that you won't have to marry her. That way we can stay together forever."

Inuyasha cringed. The thought of being with Kikyo forever and ever was scary. Really scary.

"Sorry Kikyo, but I have to marry her. That way are parents will be able to combine companies, making them the strongest company in Japan," he explained.

'Well then,' Kikyo thought. 'If there's no Kagome around, then there's no possible way for my little Inuyasha sweety kins to marry her.'

"Well I guess it's ok because you don't really love her. And your only going to be married to her right? So it's not as if you'll actually being sleeping with her or something. Right?"

"Yeah, ummm that's another thing. Kagome has to have either given birth to a child or be pregnant by the time she's 21 so that the kid can meet his grandparents before they turn old and crazy."

"WHAT!" Kikyo screamed.

In The Distance

"What was that all about?" Sango asked.

"Who's knows. Sounded like Kikyo so she probably just heard that her beloved Inuyasha is gonna have to marry little old me, and won't be able to marry her." Kagome said.

"Probably," said Miroku. Then they went back to their argument of what came first the chicken or the egg. Well Sango and Miroku did at least. Kagome really didn't care.

"The chicken came from the egg so the egg came first," said Miroku.

"Well where did that egg come from? A CHICKEN! The chicken came first," yelled Sango.

This continued until the bell rang.


Ok everyone that's all for now. But before I go I have something I'd like you all to see.

The Review

Um what? I am sorry, I wanted to give you some good feedback but your story does not seem to have anything good about it. In short, it is trash.

My reasons are simple yet many. You have authors notes through the story, which disrupts the flow of the story, as a reader I do not CARE if you do not have a private bathroom, or do not understand blush; I want to read the story. Your whole plot is overdone - seriously, nothing you are writing is original.

In addition, can you really expect me to believe Kagome to be a punk and Inuyasha a prep? Sweet and nice Kagome does not a 'punk' make, and Inuyasha who is in fact a temperamental outcast, not to mention rebellious; would NEVER be a prep.

From what I derived from your summary, I get the feeling you are going to bash Kikyou, I would refrain from doing so if I were you as bashing is simply distasteful, not to mention your "story" is already terribly OOC - bashing Kikyou would only make it worse. Instead why don't you put you dislike of Kikyou away while writing a story, it may get you more intelligent reviewers rather than the "i lyke dis so mUch!1one! Kik-hoe is teh suX" variety (AKA people who are worse at writing than my 11-year-old brother is).

Finally, might I mention the actual show takes place in Japan, think for a moment - would Japanese school actually have the same cliques and social groups the US, or any other westernized country has? Doubtful.


What I have to Say

If any one know that anonyms reviewer Hybrid please tell them this (or you can just read it your self but you hate the story so why should you.) I am the writer of this fan fiction. I have decided to make it OOC because I bloody well felt like it. Just because YOU are not pleased with it does not mean I will change to fit your likings. If I deeply offend you my bad. Don't take it out on the story. Kagome is a punk because I think it's funny to image her as a punk. Inuyasha is a prep because the thought the Inuyasha being all goody to shoes makes me laugh so hard I fall off my chair. And I do have intelligent reviewers. If you have a problem with them TELL SOMEONE WHO CARES! You just don't going around saying "O you said that you like that story, your stupid." The reviewers are intelligent funny people.

And PS Just for your sake Hybrid, I WILL be bashing Kikyo because that was my intention at the beginning of the story. And I AM watching the anime.

If this story makes just one person smile. Makes just one human being on this Earth happy for a spilt second than I'm happy. Please if your going to write a flame give me something to improve on. Don't just list everything I do wrong.

Cya

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